Battle Hymns vs 2 Beautiful - 2 BEAUTIFUL WINS 4-1

[Battle Hymns]

standard rules

10 lines

due date: 23rd

[Dope girl]

I'll drop

[Battle Hymns]

I didn't put your name up cuz you're just another number to me

added to my statistics once I go ballistic and cut a MC

not a samurai, but test my klan you'll die... Ima shogun(show guns)

so I can paint wit guts and meat wit tha steal to use to rape tha weak

watch how Ima tape this geek.. cryin as she speaks cuz I'm dick

n' SHE GOT INTO SOMETHING TOO DEEP, best believe I'ma sandm freak

cuz I take control and start to mold what you're heart scolds



in this battle scene you're too old

and them tities i see.. need to be fucked some more

admit it, you're not ready for war as I bathe in gore

after I pry them staples off and get them torn again

like you're striving to be a born again, this son

will make your spirit holy cuz I fathered you

an armed appeared out of my mother's womb after

my father had said she had nearly swallowed you

so I can't die.. and You.. can't rhyme so dont bother wit it

want to flow, biyatch? just cuz I'm dick and you want slobber wit it?



http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=7467

http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=7723

[Battle Hymns]

Is this chick no showing?

[Battle Hymns]

Ok... She no showed... Somebody lock this and send it where its suppose to be

[Dope girl]

Open your eyes before you try & come at me punk
learn how drive, I'll send your shit straight up to the dump
Stop acting like you cool, everyone can see past that you actor
you bastard, you liar you lame actor, look at these factors,
you not going get any girls like this,
That's not your wish.
That was a garbage diss,
I might throw a fit.
you done made me nauseous like I just took a hit
Cuz that was the was the worst rap I've ever heard in my life,
But I'll eat you up like your family & pork fried rice
you not nice.

[Atomic]

I didn't put your name up cuz you're just another number to me
added to my statistics once I go ballistic and cut a MC
damn, nice.
not a samurai, but test my klan you'll die... Ima shogun(show guns)
so I can paint wit guts and meat wit tha steal to use to rape tha weak
sick w/p in the first line, 2nd line is very nice, grimey shit
watch how Ima tape this geek.. cryin as she speaks cuz I'm dick
n' SHE GOT INTO SOMETHING TOO DEEP, best believe I'ma sandm freak
DAMN, OKAY OKAY
cuz I take control and start to mold what you're heart scolds
in this battle scene you're too old
the bitch is old as hell, nice jab
and them tities i see.. need to be fucked some more
admit it, you're not ready for war as I bathe in gore
you're fucking hardcore, decent
after I pry them staples off and get them torn again
like you're striving to be a born again, this son
damn, get sonned.
will make your spirit holy cuz I fathered you
an armed appeared out of my mother's womb after
my father had said she had nearly swallowed you
lmao, good shit man, hard hitting punch
so I can't die.. and You.. can't rhyme so dont bother wit it
want to flow, biyatch? just cuz I'm dick and you want slobber wit it?
she is clearly a slut, good call


//

Open your eyes before you try & come at me punk
learn how drive, I'll send your shit straight up to the dump
nice yo, hot fire.
Stop acting like you cool, everyone can see past that you actor
you bastard, you liar you lame actor, look at these factors,
okay i am about to witness these so called factor, solid bar
you not going get any girls like this,
That's not your wish.
okay i'm confused, if it isn't his wish then.. OH HES GAY. lmao damn very clever, nice
That was a garbage diss,
I might throw a fit.
you done made me nauseous like I just took a hit
okay you kind of dissed yourself here but i understand the double wordplay/meta & then you got hype directly after so i will allow it
Cuz that was the was the worst rap I've ever heard in my life,
But I'll eat you up like your family & pork fried rice
you not nice.
if you would actually eat him u deserve this win, this is fucking hardcore.

//

Punches: Tie
Hardcore shit: Tie
Multis: Tie
Flow: Tie
Swag: Edge to battle
Hot fire: Edge to 2Beautiful

Overall this battle was neck and neck. Both battlers were spitting some hot fire & I was feeling almost every line they spit. This truly was a battle of two titans matching up one on one in the ring. Haymakers were thrown, lifes were destroyed, but the battle was won.. I will give my vote to 2Beautiful. Both battlers came very hard but I felt that she shined in brightness similar to a diamond or the sun. V/ 2Beautiful, very nice battle guys.

[Flow]

I didn't put your name up cuz you're just another number to me
added to my statistics once I go ballistic and cut a MC
this is just in your face stuff not a punch
not a samurai, but test my klan you'll die... Ima shogun(show guns)
so I can paint wit guts and meat wit tha steal to use to rape tha weak
lol no
watch how Ima tape this geek.. cryin as she speaks cuz I'm dick
n' SHE GOT INTO SOMETHING TOO DEEP, best believe I'ma sandm freak
this was nearly ok, but wording was awful
cuz I take control and start to mold what you're heart scolds
in this battle scene you're too old
lol....was that a bar...it was really wank no offence
and them tities i see.. need to be fucked some more
admit it, you're not ready for war as I bathe in gore
in your face again no punch no direction
after I pry them staples off and get them torn again
like you're striving to be a born again, this son
no punch no set up unless this is a set up for the next bar...
will make your spirit holy cuz I fathered you
an armed appeared out of my mother's womb after
lol this is becoming painful, these are like 4-6 lines before a punch an then a punch never comes...
my father had said she had nearly swallowed you
so I can't die.. and You.. can't rhyme so dont bother wit it
want to flow, biyatch? just cuz I'm dick and you want slobber wit it?
the close was probably the closest you had to anything and it took 8 lines to get there....
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=7467

http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=7723


you need to either start doing some swag and flow battles or topicals where I think you can actually showcase the skills you have. You seem to want to do your own thing and your own style which I applaud because there are way to many people who just recycle old concepts with a slight twist to seem fresh an it does got samey, but you have no scheme here. its just a lot of statements and in your face stuff, nearly no concepts or punchlines, an when your going to write like that I would at least want a mint bit of rhyming and internals etc but there was none of that - I will be amazed if you take the win.

OH AND THIS IS SUPPOSED TO BE 10 LINES - I COUNT 17


Open your eyes before you try & come at me punk
learn how drive, I'll send your shit straight up to the dump
meh weak but directed
Stop acting like you cool, everyone can see past that you actor
you bastard, you liar you lame actor, look at these factors,
......
you not going get any girls like this,
That's not your wish.
That was a garbage diss,
I might throw a fit.
good for you but this isn't a punch
you done made me nauseous like I just took a hit
Cuz that was the was the worst rap I've ever heard in my life,
But I'll eat you up like your family & pork fried rice
you not nice.
......

Sadly this was a close battle....im speechless....

Vote 2Beaut simply for the first bar having some sort of direction

[trap.]

2-0 2Beautiful. More votes.

[Sharp]

shogun line coulda been cool... concept was done pretty badly
im a dick was kinda wp... really basic

had nothing really that seemed to even be a punchline from roro except for pork fried rice... but that didnt really make sense


two clearish attempts to 1... battle got it imo. not an easy read tho. if youre still around you gotta realize text isn't live battling... go read some league/tourney stuff

v/battle

[Ghost1]

I had 2beautiful. She was fresher and actually went the correct line amount. Lold@wat ur heart scolds.......lmfaooaoa

[Atomic]

can't quote anything from either, they both have some work to do.

overall, I'll give 2beautiful the win for the reason that she threw punches that hit harder & that's the only category they seemed to touch upon.

v/ 2beautiful.

[Meth]

fucking gone. lol

serious

Battle went over the line limit and i still had DG w/ more hits. she called him gay and said his shit was garbage

he said he was gonna kill her

V/ Beauty Queen