flex fuel..

[Dove Dozer]

Im done... with the game, i quit this.
Cant stop the flow of the pain ive witnessed..
I didnt know my brain came equipped with
The fuel when i spark the flame its sick kid..
Liquid verses written with a purpose,
Sippin on the bourbon when im hurtin.
Is it worth it to be burdened by the serpent
when im thirsty? I aint certain its workin,
Im damaged up, but i still keep thinkin that im man enough
To ante up...to make it work..
Im a wordsmith puttin it to paper first..

Holler

[Geno]

dope flex, good to see you man.
shoulda made it onger, it stopped to soon lol

[Coup]

No-ShOw is elevating his game, cat...this was dope and I like how you got out what you wanted in a few lines...

No, flee the dragon...he is a trap. Seek ye YAHUWAH

ya holler bit at the end was wac tbh...lol

[Advocate]

That wasn't bad at all? Good bars! Had a nice flow and it was a dope read. Keep writing man!

[Fig]

I wanna hear this on audio man. Tight flow, I picked it up instantly while reading.

Drop longer flexes bruh

[Dove Dozer]

I wanna hear this on audio man. Tight flow, I picked it up instantly while reading.

Drop longer flexes bruh

thanks.. this is for an audio actually, and I have more of it, I'll post later.

[brokenhal0]

it's ok you sound like you complain alot needs more depth but it was structured good

[Dove Dozer]

it's ok you sound like you complain alot needs more depth but it was structured good

Thanks for the feed. I wasnt complaining lol.. this was more of a freestyle type flow. Just writing shit down.. thx though

[Flow]

You can tell this was wrote for a beat. It was a nice, fresh polished flex.

Would be interested to see more when you got it - not much to go off in terms of feed... Would be nice to see you flex some of your vocab skills when you do