One More Line (audio)

[Kin]

https://soundcloud.com/its-kin/one-more-line-produced-by-learic


beat made by Learic

verse 1- Learic
verse 2- Kin
verse 3- Learic/Kin

Hook- Learic/Kin

[DexLabb]

dont take this the wrong way but you rhyme too much man. to the point where its like ur not even sayin nothin ur just rhyming. i really like this beat compare to last one cause it had the whole pumped up kicks type of vibe to it a bit. i think you could do yourself a favour by focusing on saying shit that people will remember easier...dont take that as hate tho man alright?

[Kin]

all good...what U mean by rhyme too much??? cuz' we both stickin' to the theme of the track...maybe you mean rhyme schemes too close together??? I dunno
But either way I appreciate you checkin' this
Yessiiiiir