Greed vs. BROKE LESNAR {BROKE LESNAR wins 12-0}

[~RustyGunZ~]

The 1-2 Punch League
Season 1


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Greed BROKE LESNAR

[BROKE LESNAR]

Check, gl.

[Greed]

Yeah

[BROKE LESNAR]

Greed/Pryde

Name change:

Wrath

Greed, someone already has WRATH.

7 Deadly Sins:

Pride
Greed
Sloth
Envy
Lust
Gluttony
Wrath

I'll renounce these sins & pander to the Catholic vote
so he can take Pryde n' Greed but this harmless faggot will never bring the Wrath to BROKE

[Greed]

Oh child, dont blame god for that cold pile
If He broke 'the mold' we only referring to your old style

[El Muffin]

Is there more to greed`s punch?

I mean I think I get it..but I have a slight assumption that im missing something..

If im not ..this is easy..greeds punch was pretty underwhelming

I like brokes more..decent nameplay

V/broke


Will edit if I have a moment of clarity

[Blanco Bishop]

I'm trying to dig into greeds bar.

Can't find anything.

Not bad but broke took it with rhyme scheme, wp, np, n imagery.

V broke

[Greed]

God broke the mold / broke is mold double meaning. Broke 'The Mold' Lesnar

I was avoiding a wordy line.

[jilti]

Lliked both but gotta give it to Broke for creativity and detail he put into it

[Mike Wrecka]

Broke got it

[Greed]

Bullshit.

[Adonis]

I preferred the name play diss and concept behind it of broke over a slight jab.

[Sharp]

liked broke's idea more.

v/broke

[KnowP]

Greed punch was way too easy/predictable. Broke punch was decent. definitely did some research for it, but it landed nonetheless.


v.broke

[Malachi]

V/broke

I like the way he worked wit the nameplay. Greed was simple so i wasnt sure if there was more to it or not lol

[Greed]

Simple huh. I used a idiom as misdirection and niggas just lost the line all together.

[El Muffin]

Idiom or not.


That shit was weak, hence why I didnt edit even after the expo

Js no hate

[Greed]

You didnt get it bitch if anything me having to explain it lost this.

[King Ra.]

This was closer imo. While I was feeling the nameplay & personal shot by Broke, the punchline hit more like a slight jab with the braggadocio type feel it landed with. Didn't like all the build up before the bar, didn't need all of that, honestly. Greed's bar was straight to the point. The 'broke the mold' was a nice attempt, but I feel you could have done more to make the punch sting.

MVGT: Broke Lesnar. Good job by both competitors.

[Window Taco]

Sick punch by Lesnar intertwined with a personal that was Well set up, playing on the religious concept. Greed had a worthy line but it just didn't move on Broke's shit enough to derail it, concept needed to be a bit fresher to damage it IMO.

V/ Lesnar

[Destroyer]

broke got this easy
greed is in here explaining too? lol

v/lesnar

[Paradigm]

I think with a better setup Greeds bar wouldve hit a lot better then it did, I like the concept though. Brokes bar was pretty good lol @ all the explanation for a 1-2 bar tho.

Vote - Broke Lesner

[Dominate]

Greed's concept was a little better but not executed cleanly enough (onus is on you to make sure readers get it, not on them to dig). By contrast Broke's wording was much better, enough that I preferred his bar overall.

V/ Broke

[~RustyGunZ~]

BROKE wins 12-0