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~RustyGunZ~
07-07-2014, 05:23 PM
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Adonis Blanco Bishop

Adonis
07-07-2014, 08:13 PM
Kool Keith

Adonis
07-08-2014, 01:14 AM
White knight aint being modest, he know's he's no king.
I'll Blanc-O, this faggot cops clothes at a bi-shop like a queen.






Hayyyyyyyyyyy!!

Blanco Bishop
07-10-2014, 08:59 PM
In. Ma bad. Will key shortly.

Blanco Bishop
07-10-2014, 10:36 PM
Adonis, u a lame bitch. U own no skill nor the will to win.
N tho we're both considered Bey-sick, its cuz YOUR trash n I'm as ill as him.

BROKE LESNAR
07-10-2014, 10:49 PM
Really wasn't feeling Adonis' chess-theme. The concept itself felt forced.

Blanco didn't need to include the Basic np, it's wildly redundant, regardless if he flipped it differently or not. The entire concept was dependent on the np, so it hurt alot. However, I really liked the effort he put into pulling it off and it came off much better than Adonis'.

v-Blanco

El Muffin
07-10-2014, 11:46 PM
Bishop isnt pronounced bi shop..so doesnt quite work

Blanco wp/np was old as hell..n basically you were givin bey a rim job but at least yours came off as more of a jab than anything

V/blanco

Greed
07-11-2014, 05:05 PM
Blanco got it

Mike Wrecka
07-11-2014, 09:52 PM
Adonis weak attempt at a punch

blanco was meh , but better

Amen
07-12-2014, 09:43 AM
Didn't like either, tbh. But felt Adonis' punch was a bit of a stretch and had no type of connection as where Blanco's was a old and played concept but at least made a small connection. Plus his was just cleaner and executed better, so...

v/Blanco

Window Taco
07-12-2014, 02:03 PM
Tough choice here. Both bars r similar in levels. But I think Blanco got this Cuz I feel the flow, structure, & punch had a little more sting and better wordplay to it.

V/ Blanco

KnowP
07-12-2014, 10:46 PM
Adon came with a played forced wp that didnt land at all to me. Blanco had decent flip. coulda been worded crispier but still got the job done.


v. blanco

Malachi
07-13-2014, 01:47 AM
Like blancos better

V/Bishop

King Ra.
07-13-2014, 11:47 AM
Adonis, I like the wordplay attempts you had, even though it wasn't as uniform as it could be. It effected the delivery of your punch. Good shit though. Blanco, the bey-sick wp left much to be desired and the punch was okay, but it came off more brag-like than straight shot to me. Nonetheless, with Adonis slipping up in his bar, you take this by a bit.

MVGT: Blanco Bishop. Good job by both competitors.

jilti
07-13-2014, 12:24 PM
King/Queen concept? Felt like a lazy attempt. Blanc seemed to put thought into his punch
Vote-Blanc

Destroyer
07-13-2014, 04:44 PM
didn't really like either here, but bi-shop killed it for Adonis
the beysick concept is mad played on beyond, but still

v/blanco

Paradigm
07-13-2014, 08:50 PM
I don't get Adonis concept/connection tbh lol sorry. Blanco played wp but connected better

Vote - Blanco Bishop

Dominate
07-14-2014, 10:48 AM
Adonis - obv u have some talent with writing but your inexperience in the text battle arena tells. People don't dig that heteronym style wp. Also chess themed bars are too common, which means unless the bar is amazing, it's meh; there's no middle ground.

Blanco - Beysick/basic is realllllly played! However, the other aspects of the bar were good.

V/ Blanco

Doug Funny
07-15-2014, 08:22 PM
Oh shit I get it

He cop clothes at a bitch shop lol he a bitchboi

Swerve
07-15-2014, 11:15 PM
Neither one was really good and seemed a bit rushed....but Adonis' just didn't make sense to me, so I had Blanco here.

V/ Blanco

~RustyGunZ~
07-16-2014, 04:24 PM
14-0 Blanco wins