jilti vs. Dominate {Dominate wins 13-0}

[~RustyGunZ~]

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jilti Dominate

[Dominate]

Hi

[jilti]

Death.

[jilti]

Dominos my scope'll put dots on him like those pieces
so when i "break bones", it wont be a slang term in most regions

[Dominate]

Ur cancer to swag. Far as women ur standards are baddd
Only girls Jack n Jill off look like Adam Sandler in drag

[BROKE LESNAR]

Jil's bar had potential but the wording totally collapsed the structure. Usually with np's the the execution is used mid closer with a witty finisher to deliver the impact. In Jil's case he opened with his np. In fact he swapped his closer for where the opener should be and his opener for where the closer should be, lol. Dominate's was pretty hilarious with no discernable flaws.

v-Dominate

[Doug Funny]

I like both but I think the kangaroo guy had the more stinging blow

[e11even]

Jilti came off jilted with not much in the way of a convicting delivery. Dominate, however, got a chuckle outta me and his hit was conventional, yet pretty sharp. Good job guise.

Dominate.

[Sharp]

Jil had an okay idea but dominos been done on Dom. I liked the added 'break bones' idea but the punch felt awkward. Dom was funny and cleanly executed

V/ dom

[Adonis]

Vote dom. His name play was less forced and flowed better. Although I did like breaking bones reference as I'm an avid bones player. Good stuff to both, but one was simply better.

[Window Taco]

I felt Jilt had An okay concept and it landed but Dom had a more stinging insult in both the first half of his bar and the metaphorical punch 'Adam sandler' line in the second half which was funny, hit harder, fresher, and stronger IMO.

Vote; Dominate.

[Amen]

Ok'ish concept that lacked a harsher execution vs a humorous attempt with a decent execution.



I think if this Jilt, jit, jitli w/e the hell your name is or means, had a better and more harsher execution on his concept, he could have taken this. Dom's concept was ok, not harsh either but did provide a humor factor which is cool, so with that being said....

v/Dom

[Blanco Bishop]

Dom executed cleanly. Comedy wise n scheme wise it was pretty solid.
J was ok but not crisp enoigh with the execution totake it.

V dom

[Greed]

V dom

Sharp nines explanation

[Malachi]

Dom play was nice and was a clear hit .
Didnt think Jitl hit that hard but it was ight

V/Dom

[King Ra.]

jilti, you could have had this because your concept was much better than Dominate's, but the execution did not connect well to me. Definitely a wording issue. Dom, you had the more smoother punch here, though, the idea itself didn't attract me much, but you executed cleanly in comparison to your opponent.

MVGT: Dominate. Good job by both competitors.

[Destroyer]

I got dom here. the other one was aight, but wording could have been a lot better on it

v/dom

[Paradigm]

Dominoes has been done on Dom before with similar flip also so i'm kinda biased. It was cool bar though. Dominates bar was lols and a good nameplay.

Vote - Dominate

[Swerve]

Punch-setup style? It was interesting, but I wasn't feeling it. Dom's bar was really slick really enjoyed it.

V/ Dominate

[~RustyGunZ~]

13-0 Dominate wins