murda sho [VS] Amen [murda sho WINS]

[Paradigm]

The Summer Classic VII
Netcees Premier Text Battling Tournament
KwaL!ty Amen
Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due MONDAY,
July 14th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
Check Ins are due FRIDAY, July 11th 2014
Voting ends Friday July 18th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours
You will be GRANTED ONE EXTENSION throughout the Tourney. Any extension beyond the first will result in loss of votes.


Line Limit:

Min. = 10 lines
Max. = 16 lines
Limit MUST be agreed upon


General Rules:

1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
means you will be disqualified.
A check in IS mandatory.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.

[Paradigm]

KwaL!ty has been replaced by.

murda sho

you guys have 48hr extension.

[murda sho]

10 lines since its short notice

[Amen]

Yerp.

[Amen]

I'm wasting so many bars here haha

I'm about to recycle all this shit

Aero... On RB niggas don't really know me so any edge goes to my opponent... Post that battle here and he doesn't win....

HA!

Claim you've wasted bars on RB, NO, son faggot your wack,
So go on an recycle ALL you want, it doesn't change the fact that their trash.
He'll get smashed w/ the hands & I'll drop this kid, it's a fact,
Lost to that dickrider WAGon votes, OBV he'll rely on them to win him this match.
My heat's loud, you see'n round 2 IS A JOKE & no secret dude,
It's ironic you've champed bad blood when you write like your missin a gene or two.
I'll kill this geek, he's through... Amen's easily maimin this square,
So Fuck! readin murda sho's awful scripts, even ID TV & CSI are being taken off air.
This fag’ll do anything for the dub, FACT: He’ll prolly sway now,
You winnin’s over the top & goin out on a limb... Hittin every branch on the way down.

ez, 10.

[murda sho]

^Wordz, your dick riders are comin out the wood work, fam! You golden now, quit puttin so much effort now.

Lmao. Wordz - you said your in Florida, right? Is hat where you are stationed for the USMC? Or you just moved down there?

Lmfao... Wordz, done come back to NY my nigga. You gettin these hands B. And I'm wear a youtube camera helmet to film me whoop that ass nigga while you attempt to do that faggot marine wrestle me to the ground shit.

lol, you still my nigga wordz.


You're such a fag...

Welcome to Summer Classic, this is where the rookies get tested in brutal war
But I see to go pro you'd rather your boyfriend just wrestle you to the floor
You're the worst dude, about to get ripped and maimed by a reserve, fool
They took Kwality out for me, and it looks like you did for your verse too
When it comes to words w/ friends I get double points & my records never get touched
When he sees words w/ friends he wants a location because he's jealous as fuck
U've hated NC's like its a sport, well I got shots for that talk heathen
I'll have you looking at more macs than Bosh in the off season
So set it and get scathed, I drop A+ bars that you've never even grazed
While you drop those B lines, that'll be the same way that you're headed to the grave


Zip Him Up!

[Kin]

Amen-
So go on an recycle ALL you want, it doesn't change the fact that their trash.
--ok, ok, ok

It's ironic you've champed bad blood when you write like your missin a gene or two.
haha that shits fire

So Fuck! readin murda sho's awful scripts, even ID TV & CSI are being taken off air.
Dope nameflip but u stretched the fuck outta that one...made it kinda ehhh

closing bar was aight too.... How come you Dressin' up that verse wit' all them Caps an shit tho'???????hmmmm musta liked how mine looked haha

solid verse

Murda-
They took Kwality out for me, and it looks like you did for your verse too
DAAAAAAMN!!!

While you drop those B lines, that'll be the same way that you're headed to the grave
WHOA!!!!

ay those two I quoted were heavy hitters if You crafted the rest ya verse like those it woulda been Game Ova... But I'm feelin' Amen was more consistent..not as nice of punches but he had enough quality in my eyes to take this this was close no doubt tho'

Vote- Amen (even tho' that verse looked ugly wit' juz caps....Bold that shit up!)

[Tettris]

My heat's loud, you see'n round 2 IS A JOKE & no secret dude,
It's ironic you've champed bad blood when you write like your missin a gene or two.
I'll kill this geek, he's through... Amen's easily maimin this square,
So Fuck! readin murda sho's awful scripts, even ID TV & CSI are being taken off air.

vs

You're the worst dude, about to get ripped and maimed by a reserve, fool
They took Kwality out for me, and it looks like you did for your verse too
When it comes to words w/ friends I get double points & my records never get touched
When he sees words w/ friends he wants a location because he's jealous as fuck

helluva a battle gentlemen...glad I read this one haha...this was a toss up on quotables for me here...Amen seemed like he rushed a bit in his verse and wasn't as smooth as usual...Murda came out and seemed like he had it going on a little more as far as flow and consistency...good match but...

v/murda

[jilti]

Amen..

Claim you've wasted bars on RB, NO, son faggot your wack,
So go on an recycle ALL you want, it doesn't change the fact that their trash.
recycle/trash bars have been done many times but this was simple and ok i guess
He'll get smashed w/ the hands & I'll drop this kid, it's a fact,
Lost to that dickrider WAGon votes, OBV he'll rely on them to win him this match.
haha funny personal
My heat's loud, you see'n round 2 IS A JOKE & no secret dude,
It's ironic you've champed bad blood when you write like your missin a gene or two.
nice wordplay
I'll kill this geek, he's through... Amen's easily maimin this square,
So Fuck! readin murda sho's awful scripts, even ID TV & CSI are being taken off air.
wording issues with the 2nd line but good concept
This fag’ll do anything for the dub, FACT: He’ll prolly sway now,
You winnin’s over the top & goin out on a limb... Hittin every branch on the way down.
your best bar. was dope and executed flawlessly


Murda

Welcome to Summer Classic, this is where the rookies get tested in brutal war
But I see to go pro you'd rather your boyfriend just wrestle you to the floor
lol cool opener
You're the worst dude, about to get ripped and maimed by a reserve, fool
They took Kwality out for me, and it looks like you did for your verse too
dope. Probably lotb. Tied in perfectly with the situation
When it comes to words w/ friends I get double points & my records never get touched
When he sees words w/ friends he wants a location because he's jealous as fuck
missed here
U've hated NC's like its a sport, well I got shots for that talk heathen
I'll have you looking at more macs than Bosh in the off season
effective
So set it and get scathed, I drop A+ bars that you've never even grazed
While you drop those B lines, that'll be the same way that you're headed to the grave
dope closer


Murda had harder hitting punches and 2 dope lines vs Amens 1 dope line
So mvgt Murda

[Paradigm]

2-1 murda sho

[Swerve]

Had Amen with gene or two....had sho with the kwality line, which was LOTB, words w/ friends and everything else was about solid....got Sho here.

V/ murda

[Velocity]

He'll get smashed w/ the hands & I'll drop this kid, it's a fact,
Lost to that dickrider WAGon votes, OBV he'll rely on them to win him this match.
My heat's loud, you see'n round 2 IS A JOKE & no secret dude,
It's ironic you've champed bad blood when you write like your missin a gene or two.
^gene or two was dope imo.

vs

You're the worst dude, about to get ripped and maimed by a reserve, fool
They took Kwality out for me, and it looks like you did for your verse too
When it comes to words w/ friends I get double points & my records never get touched
When he sees words w/ friends he wants a location because he's jealous as fuck
^im assuming you mean Wordz ahGod. if so this is fire.

So set it and get scathed, I drop A+ bars that you've never even grazed
While you drop those B lines, that'll be the same way that you're headed to the grave


This was pretty evenly matched, if Amen couldve re thought the concept on recyle in the opener it would probably go his way because the opener stayed pretty generic even with the personal.

Vote-Sho

[BROKE LESNAR]

Claim you've wasted bars on RB, NO, son faggot your wack,
So go on an recycle ALL you want, it doesn't change the fact that their trash.
I'll kill this geek, he's through... Amen's easily maimin this square,
So Fuck! readin murda sho's awful scripts, even ID TV & CSI are being taken off air.
This fag’ll do anything for the dub, FACT: He’ll prolly sway now,
You winnin’s over the top & goin out on a limb... Hittin every branch on the way down.



Welcome to Summer Classic, this is where the rookies get tested in brutal war
But I see to go pro you'd rather your boyfriend just wrestle you to the floor
You're the worst dude, about to get ripped and maimed by a reserve, fool
They took Kwality out for me, and it looks like you did for your verse too
When it comes to words w/ friends I get double points & my records never get touched
When he sees words w/ friends he wants a location because he's jealous as fuck


Okay so I have the battle at a draw 3-3. Both were really entertaining and evenly matched. So it doesn't end in a tie I'm going to go with the quotes that I thought resonated with me just a bit more than the other, and that goes to MS.

v-Murda Sho

[Alvin Karpis]

both had a played line each, but sho had a couple lines that hit harder

v/sho

[Paradigm]

murda sho wins 6-1 and advances to the next round.