Tettris [VS] Malachi [Tettris WINS]

[Paradigm]

The Summer Classic VII
Netcees Premier Text Battling Tournament
Tettris Malachi
Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due MONDAY,
July 14th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
Check Ins are due FRIDAY, July 11th 2014
Voting ends Friday July 18th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours
You will be GRANTED ONE EXTENSION throughout the Tourney. Any extension beyond the first will result in loss of votes.


Line Limit:

Min. = 10 lines
Max. = 16 lines
Limit MUST be agreed upon


General Rules:

1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
means you will be disqualified.
A check in IS mandatory.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.

[Malachi]

Check 10

[Tettris]

Face it: The winner of the noob tourney shouldn’t ever say shit…
If you’re the new blood of text…then you’re pumping it full of Strikta’s platelets
Why u listen to uh-oh if u wanna make some bucks w/ the beats?
He’ll turn you into a lights out producer…and you’ll both have yours cut in a week
And that 1-2 shit was awful. U got no talent…there I said it…
Phoning it in can Destroyer career <---and that seems EXACTLY where you’re headed
What are u like 15? Ur a young faggot that could never fool us…
When ur window of opportunity is hollering at dudes through the one on ur school bus
Fuck this kid...I’ll bust his shit and keep going to trash hoes…
Cuz if Malcolm in the Middle of me n the crown, I’m cutting his airtime faster than that show

[Malachi]

You Can tell dude scared to battle, showin the bitch in him wit no hassle
Shit if i were ever to dissTris, hed be in it wantin to get saved like a damsel
Actin mean infront that screen, ya wouldnt try shit in real life Cuz'
If we met, all youd say is "uh-oh" and itd be light outs just like he was
And if you had a Girl bruh, right under yo nose I could take her
She'd get pounded at la casa TWICE like a brazil futbol player
I'll be bringin glory to my name the way i massacre this mista
The way id leave this dick in a hole, would even shock strikta
You got no heat, lucky if you even come in third place son, #FACTS
Hed be bringin back the brons home quick, without the 42 mil contract

[Tic]

Face it: The winner of the noob tourney shouldn’t ever say shit…
If you’re the new blood of text…then you’re pumping it full of Strikta’s platelets
Dope.
Why u listen to uh-oh if u wanna make some bucks w/ the beats?
He’ll turn you into a lights out producer…and you’ll both have yours cut in a week
This is ok.
And that 1-2 shit was awful. U got no talent…there I said it…
Phoning it in can Destroyer career <---and that seems EXACTLY where you’re headed
Ha ok.
What are u like 15? Ur a young faggot that could never fool us…
When ur window of opportunity is hollering at dudes through the one on ur school bus
Nice.
Fuck this kid...I’ll bust his shit and keep going to trash hoes…
Cuz if Malcolm in the Middle of me n the crown, I’m cutting his airtime faster than that show
Wording was crisp, alright.

You Can tell dude scared to battle, showin the bitch in him wit no hassle
Shit if i were ever to dissTris, hed be in it wantin to get saved like a damsel
It's distress, pretty forced here. Idea was cool though.
Actin mean infront that screen, ya wouldnt try shit in real life Cuz'
If we met, all youd say is "uh-oh" and itd be light outs just like he was
Lol @ you guys both having this play. Tet flipped it better, tbh.
And if you had a Girl bruh, right under yo nose I could take her
She'd get pounded at la casa TWICE like a brazil futbol player
Ok this was cool.
I'll be bringin glory to my name the way i massacre this mista
The way id leave this dick in a hole, would even shock strikta
Wording was off.
You got no heat, lucky if you even come in third place son, #FACTS
Hed be bringin back the brons home quick, without the 42 mil contract
Eh not feeling it.
Malachi had a couple of ok concepts, but the wording was off. Tet has really crisp wording and he took the win here pretty easily. He had a couple dope lines.

V/ Tettris

[Amen]

Opener was dope, destroyer career and window of opportunity were nice as well.

Vs

The soccer flip was probably your best attempt. Rest had wording and execution issues that created misses for me.

Cool battle fellas but...

V/Tettris

[Allen Knight]

Opener, des career, closer


Vs

Brazil

V, tett, he was the clear cut winner, mal is improving but still has wording issues
Tett was cleaner w/ excution here an some clever bars, good shit yahll but tett wins

[illergicreaxion]

Tettris:

Strikta's platelets; school bus; malcolm in the middle

vs.

Brazil futbol player

This one was easy to judge... tett clearly has the better wording and concepts and although it wasnt his best showing, it was more than enough to take this...

v/ tettris

[StarFaggot]

Tetris: Strikta aid lines a bit played by now, this was somewhat predictable.. Lights out was ok but predictable, destroyer line ok, window of opportunity LOLs, Malcolm line was decent.

Cool verse, played it safe but consistent.

Malachi: not a fan of dissing 2nd part of name if it's not a stand alone, uh oh line was cool i knew you'd talk about lights but it was flipped neat, la casa should've been flipped better, dick in hole is cool but predictable, I liked bring Brons home

Verse is cool, decent concepts




You two took the same subject matters uh oh, Strikta, two obvious ones. Nice battle very close. I could see how someone could say Malachi wins but I've got Tettris being more polished with a slightly better verse.

[Paradigm]

Tettris wins 5-0 and advances into the next round