Allen Knight [VS] jilti [Allen Knight WINS]

[Paradigm]

The Summer Classic VII
Netcees Premier Text Battling Tournament
Allen Knight jilti
Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due MONDAY,
July 14th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
Check Ins are due FRIDAY, July 11th 2014
Voting ends Friday July 18th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours
You will be GRANTED ONE EXTENSION throughout the Tourney. Any extension beyond the first will result in loss of votes.


Line Limit:

Min. = 10 lines
Max. = 16 lines
Limit MUST be agreed upon


General Rules:

1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
means you will be disqualified.
A check in IS mandatory.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.

[Allen Knight]

Check goin 10

[jilti]

Death.

[jilti]

lame for years and ur the favorite here? y not, Flavor Flav made a career outta ugly
but at least he had a house & money. Allen Poe, his poems wont amount to nothing
so fuck tying the knot, ladies rather hang themselves on some suicide shit
that's a do or die bitch. cuz if any girl Marion Knight, she must look like him
book the win, this guys no match. he'll get outted this round like Michael Sam
and i thought this Hostess supposed to be a viable champ, not a cupcake like that brand
stand back man. jilti a pugilist, schooled in jujitsu since a school kid
snap A. Knights armor leg like a toothpick. and that suit wouldnt help if he used it
i duel with fists. while AL rather catfight like a bully bitch
anything he'll do ta win. whether blowout or by a hair, even if he's pulling it
cool, at the end of typing ur eulogy. got that deer in the headlights look in defeat
cuz when i'm done Keenan Allen finishes 2nd in votes, guess i'll be the rookie to beat


12 lines Allen Knight

[Allen Knight]

ur slut fucks me daily, son I rocker, cuz ur dumb n awkward
her pussy's Juicy J, & she bounce it on my cock till she screams like she won a oscar
off the rip i demolished u, on one thinks this scrub raw
this weak bitch been done by the first bar faster than a lightweight at a pub crawl
try to use guns on me, then rippin is my resolution
if J Gatsby out, im shootin'em in face so theres a book written on the execution
ur couldn't make a ho squirt, this ugly fuck a frail guy
U never got a pussy terrain cuz ur face has more bumps on it then a trail ride
ur the biggest faggot around, ur gayness shred's eyelids
j & silent bob go perfect together cuz hes always suckin off fat dudes in dead silence
ur mom loves to slurp my dick, she's in a thong workin me
That slut jerked it till her elbow blew out & needed 5 major Tommy john surgeries

on to the next rd.

[Amen]

lame for years and ur the favorite here? y not, Flavor Flav made a career outta ugly
but at least he had a house & money. Allen Poe, his poems wont amount to nothing

Didn't like this.

so fuck tying the knot, ladies rather hang themselves on some suicide shit
that's a do or die bitch. cuz if any girl Marion Knight, she must look like him

Haha, this was nice..

book the win, this guys no match. he'll get outted this round like Michael Sam
and i thought this Hostess supposed to be a viable champ, not a cupcake like that brand

Felt you could have executed this differently. Didn't like how you executed the concept, tho not to mention seen a lot of hostess plays back in the day.

stand back man. jilti a pugilist, schooled in jujitsu since a school kid
snap A. Knights armor leg like a toothpick. and that suit wouldnt help if he used it

This had potential, worded soft, tho.

i duel with fists. while AL rather catfight like a bully bitch
anything he'll do ta win. whether blowout or by a hair, even if he's pulling it

Lol, nice...

cool, at the end of typing ur eulogy. got that deer in the headlights look in defeat
cuz when i'm done Keenan Allen finishes 2nd in votes, guess i'll be the rookie to beat

Nah...


ur slut fucks me daily, son I rocker, cuz ur dumb n awkward
her pussy's Juicy J, & she bounce it on my cock till she screams like she won a oscar

Lol, this was alright.

off the rip i demolished u, on one thinks this scrub raw
this weak bitch been done by the first bar faster than a lightweight at a pub crawl

Just recently used a concept like this back on RB in LLL, but this was ok'ish.

try to use guns on me, then rippin is my resolution
if J Gatsby out, im shootin'em in face so theres a book written on the execution

This was dope.

ur couldn't make a ho squirt, this ugly fuck a frail guy
U never got a pussy terrain cuz ur face has more bumps on it then a trail ride

Lol, dope.

ur the biggest faggot around, ur gayness shred's eyelids
j & silent bob go perfect together cuz hes always suckin off fat dudes in dead silence

Nahhhh...

ur mom loves to slurp my dick, she's in a thong workin me
That slut jerked it till her elbow blew out & needed 5 major Tommy john surgeries

Lol, ok.

on to the next rd.

LOTB, easily.

OVERALL: I actually liked this battle. Jit, jilt w/e your name is had that Marion Knight bar which I thought was nice and the blowout and hair bar which was worded and executed smoothly. Allen had that Gatsby bar and the terrain bar which IMO were fire! I think Allen was just harsher with his punches which IMO gave him the WIN here. I think if Jilt would have had a few more punches like the ones I quoted, it would have provided more of a closer match and possibly given him the dub but he lacked in the harsh execution genre, IMO which for me helped my decision. Nice battle tho, fellas.

Allen, THAT CLOSER/OUTRO was fuckin dope, son. How did you come w/ it? Hahaha, anyways...

v/Allen Knight - Cleaner/harsher punches/execution.

[Kin]

J-
that's a do or die bitch. cuz if any girl Marion Knight, she must look like him
Whoa' haha nice

and i thought this Hostess supposed to be a viable champ, not a cupcake like that brand
CRAZY...ughhh!

snap A. Knights armor leg like a toothpick. and that suit wouldnt help if he used it
name flips gettin' at Him!

anything he'll do ta win. whether blowout or by a hair, even if he's pulling it
damn neva seen that flipped before...Nice my Dude

solid verse...not many weak points...brought the fire out
Knight

if J Gatsby out, im shootin'em in face so theres a book written on the execution
neva seen that flipped...liked the set up line fittin' wit' it too

some nice other lines in there too....But I'm not a fan of battle rap wit' a lotta "ya Mom...Ya girl...ya so Gay" that shits kinda corny to me...yea that made you have harsher insults towards J then he had at you....But he took a much more creative approach that showcased his battle talent more

Juz my opinion but I'd rather hear one dope general battle bar I've neva heard before then 100 you can neva get any ho's lines

Vote- Jilti

[Certain]

jilti: I liked the Suge Knight line as a concept, but that wording style always bothered me. See, if "Marion" is meant to be a verb and "Knight" is meant to refer to Allen, then "him" would be referring to Allen as well. But I get that your wording choice falls in line with a very conventional structure, so I'm not holding it back. That was a solid line in that format. Hostess lines are old, and I didn't get the Michael Sam line. Sam didn't get outed; he came out on his own terms. The line about armour didn't make much sense the way it was worded. The "blowout or by a hair" idea should have been flipped to incorporate the blowout hairstyle into the play. The Keenan Allen line was good. This was a very average and typical battle verse. Nothing stood out. Your wording, rhyme mechanics and punch concepts all could use some work but fall about even par with what's expected.

Allen Knight: The Juicy J and J Gatsby lines had real potential but not enough thought put into making the closing phrases tougher or cleverer. The J & Silent Bob line was a complete miss, and pub crawl lines really require more originality and specificity. Tommy John surgery was OK. That would have been way, way better with a Tanaka wordplay or something. So the only line that really landed for me was the pussy terrain wordplay, which I haven't seen and worked even though I don't know what this guy looks like. This was below what I expect from you, for sure. The big misses and sloppy phrasing cost you the battle.

Vote: jilti

[Sho Money EMG]

Jilti
lame for years and ur the favorite here? y not, Flavor Flav made a career outta ugly
but at least he had a house & money. Allen Poe, his poems wont amount to nothing
alright opener
so fuck tying the knot, ladies rather hang themselves on some suicide shit
that's a do or die bitch. cuz if any girl Marion Knight, she must look like him
lol, this was cool
book the win, this guys no match. he'll get outted this round like Michael Sam
and i thought this Hostess supposed to be a viable champ, not a cupcake like that brand
lol, aight
stand back man. jilti a pugilist, schooled in jujitsu since a school kid
snap A. Knights armor leg like a toothpick. and that suit wouldnt help if he used it
not bad.
i duel with fists. while AL rather catfight like a bully bitch
anything he'll do ta win. whether blowout or by a hair, even if he's pulling it
nice. real dope
cool, at the end of typing ur eulogy. got that deer in the headlights look in defeat
cuz when i'm done Keenan Allen finishes 2nd in votes, guess i'll be the rookie to beat
okay alittle forced.

allen knight
ur slut fucks me daily, son I rocker, cuz ur dumb n awkward
her pussy's Juicy J, & she bounce it on my cock till she screams like she won a oscar
okay opener
off the rip i demolished u, on one thinks this scrub raw
this weak bitch been done by the first bar faster than a lightweight at a pub crawl
nice
try to use guns on me, then rippin is my resolution
if J Gatsby out, im shootin'em in face so theres a book written on the execution
this was cool
ur couldn't make a ho squirt, this ugly fuck a frail guy
U never got a pussy terrain cuz ur face has more bumps on it then a trail ride
haha dope
ur the biggest faggot around, ur gayness shred's eyelids
j & silent bob go perfect together cuz hes always suckin off fat dudes in dead silence
okay
ur mom loves to slurp my dick, she's in a thong workin me
That slut jerked it till her elbow blew out & needed 5 major Tommy john surgeries
nice

Overall, decent battle. Def seen better from allen. and jilti had an okay verse, had a nice flow to it. This one is real tough to call, but i think ima go with jilti.

Mvgt - Jilti

good battle tho fellas

[Velocity]

so fuck tying the knot, ladies rather hang themselves on some suicide shit
that's a do or die bitch. cuz if any girl Marion Knight, she must look like him
duel with fists. while AL rather catfight like a bully bitch
anything he'll do ta win. whether blowout or by a hair, even if he's pulling it


vs

ur slut fucks me daily, son I rocker, cuz ur dumb n awkward
her pussy's Juicy J, & she bounce it on my cock till she screams like she won a oscar
try to use guns on me, then rippin is my resolution
if J Gatsby out, im shootin'em in face so theres a book written on the execution
ur couldn't make a ho squirt, this ugly fuck a frail guy
U never got a pussy terrain cuz ur face has more bumps on it then a trail ride


this was a pretty even battle, i thought i would see more from Allen but he barely posted enough to take the win. Jit came decent which was unexpected.

Vote- Allen

[Tic]

Marion Knight / by a hair

Vs

Pussy terrain / Tommy john

This was close. Allen you half assed this. I liked J's 2 quotes better but thought Allen was more consistent. I almost quoted the. Gatsby line and the opener wasn't bad. He had less misses, so for consistency...

V/ Allen Knight

[Malachi]

lame for years and ur the favorite here? y not, Flavor Flav made a career outta ugly
but at least he had a house & money. Allen Poe, his poems wont amount to nothing
I kinda like this tbh
so fuck tying the knot, ladies rather hang themselves on some suicide shit
that's a do or die bitch. cuz if any girl Marion Knight, she must look like him
Idk how thats name is pronounced the way i said it atfirst, made it a reach but the concept is good to me
book the win, this guys no match. he'll get outted this round like Michael Sam
and i thought this Hostess supposed to be a viable champ, not a cupcake like that brand
Nah
stand back man. jilti a pugilist, schooled in jujitsu since a school kid
snap A. Knights armor leg like a toothpick. and that suit wouldnt help if he used it
This coulda been nice , the punch wasnt really there tho
i duel with fists. while AL rather catfight like a bully bitch
anything he'll do ta win. whether blowout or by a hair, even if he's pulling it
THis was coo
cool, at the end of typing ur eulogy. got that deer in the headlights look in defeat
cuz when i'm done Keenan Allen finishes 2nd in votes, guess i'll be the rookie to beat
Didnt like this

12 lines Allen Knight


ur slut fucks me daily, son I rocker, cuz ur dumb n awkward
her pussy's Juicy J, & she bounce it on my cock till she screams like she won a oscar
coo Opener
off the rip i demolished u, on one thinks this scrub raw
this weak bitch been done by the first bar faster than a lightweight at a pub crawl
Nah aint feelin this
try to use guns on me, then rippin is my resolution
if J Gatsby out, im shootin'em in face so theres a book written on the execution
Nicee
ur couldn't make a ho squirt, this ugly fuck a frail guy
U never got a pussy terrain cuz ur face has more bumps on it then a trail ride
Dope
ur the biggest faggot around, ur gayness shred's eyelids
j & silent bob go perfect together cuz hes always suckin off fat dudes in dead silence
aint hit
ur mom loves to slurp my dick, she's in a thong workin me
That slut jerked it till her elbow blew out & needed 5 major Tommy john surgeries
kinda weak closer
on to the next rd.

This was ight. A close battle. DIdnt think jil would do so great, kinda surprised. I liked 3 of his and liked 3 of knights. My favorite line was in knights verse but i think comparing the rest Jil plays were nicer.
so

V/ Jil

[Tettris]

so fuck tying the knot, ladies rather hang themselves on some suicide shit
that's a do or die bitch. cuz if any girl Marion Knight, she must look like him

vs

off the rip i demolished u, on one thinks this scrub raw
this weak bitch been done by the first bar faster than a lightweight at a pub crawl
try to use guns on me, then rippin is my resolution
if J Gatsby out, im shootin'em in face so theres a book written on the execution

a lot closer than i thought it would be...I think AK barely snuck by here...Jilt came outta nowhere...good shit fellas!

v/AK

[illergicreaxion]

Jilti:

Marion Knight; by a hair;

vs.

Allen Knight:

juicy j; j gastby; pussy terrain;

I edged this one to Allen Knight. Not his best work but he was more creative and had better wording that Jilti. Although I was impressed by some of Jilti's stuff it still needs some fine tuning.

V/ Allen Knight

[Blanco Bishop]

I thought jil dropped fire imo

Blowout hair n marion barz were dope.
Really raw verse.

Ak had a dope verse with the bumps on face n gatsby lines but i actually think jil wirding was better. Also the pull hair line was lotb to me so

Vite jil

[Paradigm]

5-5

[Swerve]

I had J with Marion Knight and hair line....had Allen with Gatsby (which was a fresssssh line and my LOTB), pussy terrain and dead silence....J almost surprised allen here....but honestly that Gatsby line was so dope, won the whole battle....although I did enjoy the Marion Knight line second most in the battle.

V/ Allen

[Paradigm]

lame for years and ur the favorite here? y not, Flavor Flav made a career outta ugly
but at least he had a house & money. Allen Poe, his poems wont amount to nothing
Nah connection is weak
so fuck tying the knot, ladies rather hang themselves on some suicide shit
that's a do or die bitch. cuz if any girl Marion Knight, she must look like him
shit/him done rhyme. Marion Knight cool lols
book the win, this guys no match. he'll get outted this round like Michael Sam
and i thought this Hostess supposed to be a viable champ, not a cupcake like that brand
ok
stand back man. jilti a pugilist, schooled in jujitsu since a school kid
snap A. Knights armor leg like a toothpick. and that suit wouldnt help if he used it
Nice flip on played nameplay
i duel with fists. while AL rather catfight like a bully bitch
anything he'll do ta win. whether blowout or by a hair, even if he's pulling it
LOL nice
cool, at the end of typing ur eulogy. got that deer in the headlights look in defeat
cuz when i'm done Keenan Allen finishes 2nd in votes, guess i'll be the rookie to beat
Forced wp connection is weak

ur slut fucks me daily, son I rocker, cuz ur dumb n awkward
her pussy's Juicy J, & she bounce it on my cock till she screams like she won a oscar
LOL cool
off the rip i demolished u, on one thinks this scrub raw
this weak bitch been done by the first bar faster than a lightweight at a pub crawl
nice
try to use guns on me, then rippin is my resolution
if J Gatsby out, im shootin'em in face so theres a book written on the execution
nah weak
ur couldn't make a ho squirt, this ugly fuck a frail guy
U never got a pussy terrain cuz ur face has more bumps on it then a trail ride
kinda forced wp... still cool/kinda nice
ur the biggest faggot around, ur gayness shred's eyelids
j & silent bob go perfect together cuz hes always suckin off fat dudes in dead silence
LOL nice
ur mom loves to slurp my dick, she's in a thong workin me
That slut jerked it till her elbow blew out & needed 5 major Tommy john surgeries
Played

Marion Knight was ok and Hair pull were pretty good, armor was good flip. Allen had one more quotable and were all better than Marion Knight. Allen's was also a little more enjoyable with better wording and execution.

Vote - Allen Knight

[Hush]

so fuck tying the knot, ladies rather hang themselves on some suicide shit
that's a do or die bitch. cuz if any girl Marion Knight, she must look like him

vs

off the rip i demolished u, on one thinks this scrub raw
this weak bitch been done by the first bar faster than a lightweight at a pub crawl
try to use guns on me, then rippin is my resolution
if J Gatsby out, im shootin'em in face so theres a book written on the execution

Being generous


Ak got it

[Destroyer]

I got AK taking this pretty easily
I was surprised jilti got as many votes as he did honestly
the flow was there, but the lines are loooong and some were punch less
Allan had Gatsby and pub crawl, which was enough to take it
I thought jiltis closer had potential

v/AK

[BROKE LESNAR]

so fuck tying the knot, ladies rather hang themselves on some suicide shit
that's a do or die bitch. cuz if any girl Marion Knight, she must look like him
stand back man. jilti a pugilist, schooled in jujitsu since a school kid
snap A. Knights armor leg like a toothpick. and that suit wouldnt help if he used it




ur slut fucks me daily, son I rocker, cuz ur dumb n awkward
her pussy's Juicy J, & she bounce it on my cock till she screams like she won a oscar
try to use guns on me, then rippin is my resolution
if J Gatsby out, im shootin'em in face so theres a book written on the execution
ur couldn't make a ho squirt, this ugly fuck a frail guy
U never got a pussy terrain cuz ur face has more bumps on it then a trail ride
ur mom loves to slurp my dick, she's in a thong workin me
That slut jerked it till her elbow blew out & needed 5 major Tommy john surgeries
.

I have AK taking this 4-2. But it wasn't really that close. Jil is obviously new to this as his format is all over the place. I see the potential in his np's and wp's, he just needs to condense each bar and word those np's and wp's in such a manner that it fits with the concept and the scheme better.

v-AK

[Paradigm]

Allen Knight wins 10-5 and advances to the next round.