[BA S&F] Neighbor [VS] Chyeahhh Guevara [Neighbor Wins]

[Paradigm]

BA Swag and Flow Tournament

Neighbor Chyeahhh Guevara

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due THURSDAY,
July 17th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
Check Ins are due WEDNESDAY, July 11th 2014
Voting ends Friday July 16th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours
You will be GRANTED ONE EXTENSION throughout the Tourney. Any extension beyond the first will result in loss of votes.


Line Limit:

Min. = 10 lines
Max. = 16 lines
Limit MUST be agreed upon


General Rules:

1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
means you will be disqualified.
A check in IS mandatory.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.

[Chyeahhh!!!]

Yurrrpp

[Chyeahhh!!!]

I speak a diff language when I come acknowledge a hater
meaning I swapped that stock flash hider out for a Russian compensator
for cheese I'm downloading chrome that aint google, you'll translate the bullets
that Swiss sidefolder's SBR license is current, see, and I'm Franc when I pull it
my son called me out, like I aint the fire man on the net
and I'm thinkin ....shit....when I've caught more bodies than fire men on the net
school youngins on the set with gun lines
fuck yah E clips! I'll blackout in a crackhouse on my 3rd rock in yah earths twat, till my son shines
I keep long arms for beef, short side arms for side orders
Jive if you wanna....
I mount horror scopes on the toast that don't jam but it's sign is the Taurus
nigga...lol..I fuck up space time continiums
I'll clean yah grandfathers clock between a para docks and hanglide from the pendulum
chip off the old block, lil homie, my mind is a pentium
I figure "why two k's?" when I can strap up for the next 9 mil. enniums
if it's a problem with him and them, it's to your moms I'm sending em
you'll cry, "nah, it's a synonym" when I bust magnums in the condom..inium....NIGGA!!!


Chyeahhh

[Neighbor]

You actin Childish; Donald Glover - I smash ya whole hood; monster trucker
The chopper gunner? Tropic Thunder; buckle by the nuts like a Bronco Buster
Malevolent swag like the Grand Wizard's Klan fitted Confederate flag
I spit phlegm thru an ink pen that'll split Chin like Stan Smith from American Dad
That horrorcore Hanzo sword fuck you sideways like a John Holmes porn
The Audemar to the auto's foreign; Rocky Marciano w/ these stronghold bars
The longnose torque put you in the dirt like a lawn gnome garden; knock cornrows off
Let's get the tournament poppin.. switch to auto-target & turbo-shot neurotoxin thru ya corpus callosum
'Bor's a monster; go to war w/ the gods.. you tryna spar w/ a Titan
Archrival w/out a heart to confide in & the bars that define 'em like Arkham Asylum's
I'm Megatron w/ these lyrics, get money shot longer than Mr. Marcus career
Have ya face lookin like chicken sausage; you gon' see Mickey Rourke in the mirror
Hood shit; just copped a sixer of Miller Fortune from the liquor store at the cleaners
Ya bitch got doggy'd the deepest, titties all to the ceiling like Ricky Ross in a Prius
The clip airin ya set; Ric Flair vs. Celeste, I'm Figure Fourin this Diva
Bitch, I'll pull an arm off the strap & leave a scar on ya back like Minotauro Nogueira's

[big baby]

Oh gosh, thought this would happen. This is probably the only battle I was looking forward too, thanks for both participants, especially chyeah for hyping it up a bit. Let me start with him.

My favorite line from chyeah was

"I mount horror scopes on the toast that don't jam but it's sign is the Taurus"

Though the horror scopes couldve been used better, it wasn't. It was by far the best line he wrote. A lot of other elements were cool, and he used a traditional style and I thought he fit a lot into his lines that most other writers couldnt have. A few hit and misses. The Grandfather clock was a bit much and seemed stretched. Other than that everything else was better than I thought It'd be.

Neighbor, nice. I read the first four lines and thought you couldn't keep the pace up, but that proved wrong. You delivered line after line, with short fuse of words that was very akin to the neighbor I'm used too.

"The longnose torque put you in the dirt like a lawn gnome garden; knock cornrows off
Let's get the tournament poppin.. switch to auto-target & turbo-shot neurotoxin thru ya corpus callosum "

The wordage in that is just vintage you, and is what many people seek for but can't achieve. Just really wound up wording and it was supremely executed. Chyeah went for a more complex route with the different tangential metaphors, but that didn't really hold up to the sharp scope snippets of neighbor. I think Neighbor showed why he's a real threat with a easy snap of the neck.

v/ Neighbor, and my comment of the night goes to my buddy Certain Neighbor reads anatomy books and subscribes to Guns & Ammo magazine just for swag and flow verses.

[Blanco Bishop]

Bananas shit.

Can't even vote.

Yet.

Will edit later.

[Camp Bell]

wooo this lit...

school youngins on the set with gun lines
fuck yah E clips! I'll blackout in a crackhouse on my 3rd rock in yah earths twat, till my son shines

vs

Let's get the tournament poppin.. switch to auto-target & turbo-shot neurotoxin thru ya corpus callosum
'Bor's a monster; go to war w/ the gods.. you tryna spar w/ a Titan
Archrival w/out a heart to confide in & the bars that define 'em like Arkham Asylum's



two different crazy styles here. chyeea had more gritty swag. i thought neighbors flow was fire. ehh, liked both verses but iono, neighbors just seemed to edge it out with an overall smoother read. smh dope battle tho

vote neighbor.

[Certain]

Chyeahhhh Guevara: Your wordplay brought down a technically fine verse. Almost all of it was garbage and forced and awkward and unnecessary. It cut into the swagger of the verse, though the flow was fine.

Neighbor: You read anatomy books and subscribes to Guns & Ammo magazine just for swag and flow verses. This was absurd. Have fun winning this tournament if you show on this level every round.

Vote: Neighbor

[Paradigm]

Links please. I'll vote on this later.

[Paradigm]

I speak a diff language when I come acknowledge a hater
meaning I swapped that stock flash hider out for a Russian compensator
LOL cool
for cheese I'm downloading chrome that aint google, you'll translate the bullets
that Swiss sidefolder's SBR license is current, see, and I'm Franc when I pull it
didnt you post this before in a thread bar via neighbor style... its cool bar
my son called me out, like I aint the fire man on the net
and I'm thinkin ....shit....when I've caught more bodies than fire men on the net
Eh i dont like bars like this. this i think couldve been better still ok tho
school youngins on the set with gun lines
fuck yah E clips! I'll blackout in a crackhouse on my 3rd rock in yah earths twat, till my son shines
cool
I keep long arms for beef, short side arms for side orders
Jive if you wanna....
I mount horror scopes on the toast that don't jam but it's sign is the Taurus
Horrorscopes/Taurus/beef is dope. sideorder/toast/jam is good concept. the way you blended together was kinda cool but took away from each. Stil good imo but couldve been DOPE.
nigga...lol..I fuck up space time continiums
I'll clean yah grandfathers clock between a para docks and hanglide from the pendulum
eh connection is all over the place
chip off the old block, lil homie, my mind is a pentium
I figure "why two k's?" when I can strap up for the next 9 mil. enniums
enniums is forced.
if it's a problem with him and them, it's to your moms I'm sending em
you'll cry, "nah, it's a synonym" when I bust magnums in the condom..inium....NIGGA!!!
inium is forced

You actin Childish; Donald Glover - I smash ya whole hood; monster trucker
The chopper gunner? Tropic Thunder; buckle by the nuts like a Bronco Buster
ok
Malevolent swag like the Grand Wizard's Klan fitted Confederate flag
I spit phlegm thru an ink pen that'll split Chin like Stan Smith from American Dad
cool
That horrorcore Hanzo sword fuck you sideways like a John Holmes porn
The Audemar to the auto's foreign; Rocky Marciano w/ these stronghold bars
eh ok
The longnose torque put you in the dirt like a lawn gnome garden; knock cornrows off
Let's get the tournament poppin.. switch to auto-target & turbo-shot neurotoxin thru ya corpus callosum
cool lol at lawn gnome garden, scheme is nice
'Bor's a monster; go to war w/ the gods.. you tryna spar w/ a Titan
Archrival w/out a heart to confide in & the bars that define 'em like Arkham Asylum's
Dope.
I'm Megatron w/ these lyrics, get money shot longer than Mr. Marcus career
Have ya face lookin like chicken sausage; you gon' see Mickey Rourke in the mirror
LOL nice
Hood shit; just copped a sixer of Miller Fortune from the liquor store at the cleaners
Ya bitch got doggy'd the deepest, titties all to the ceiling like Ricky Ross in a Prius
not feeling this
The clip airin ya set; Ric Flair vs. Celeste, I'm Figure Fourin this Diva
Bitch, I'll pull an arm off the strap & leave a scar on ya back like Minotauro Nogueira's
nice

Chyeahhh showed flashes of dope lines but kinda failed at the same time here, felt kinda rushed with good concepts I feel especially that Taurus line. Neighbor arkham asylum bar was dope, schemes were nice from both. Good battle, nice read.

Vote - Neighbor

[jilti]

Chyeah

chip off the old block, lil homie, my mind is a pentium
I figure "why two k's?" when I can strap up for the next 9 mil. enniums

Liked this line. everything else was w/e. cool flow in spots but never really got into it .


Neighor

Malevolent swag like the Grand Wizard's Klan fitted Confederate flag
I spit phlegm thru an ink pen that'll split Chin like Stan Smith from American Dad
That horrorcore Hanzo sword fuck you sideways like a John Holmes porn
The Audemar to the auto's foreign; Rocky Marciano w/ these stronghold bars
The longnose torque put you in the dirt like a lawn gnome garden; knock cornrows off
Let's get the tournament poppin.. switch to auto-target & turbo-shot neurotoxin thru ya corpus callosum

first half of ya verse was fire. solid multi laced flow


V/Neighbor

[King Ra.]

Cool match up here. I was expecting Chyeah to really bring the heat as he was hyping this up in the Disc. forum. Reading your verse, I can definitely see you brought some energy but you lacked a lot of content in comparison to Neighbor. You started picking up steam around the middle of your verse going to the end. The last lines I wasn't feeling much though. Neighbor, if this is just a hint of what we will see in this tournament, then you will be a force. Best swag n flow of the first round. Flow was superb and the content kept coming from start to finish. Extremely consistent.

MVGT: Neighbor. Good job by both competitors.

[Paradigm]

Neighbor wins 5-0

Neighbor: (0) +5W -2links +2OR=5
Chyeahhh Guevara.: (0) -3L-2links+3OR=0