[BA S&F] Orc [VS] Camp Bell [Orc Wins]

[Paradigm]

BA Swag and Flow Tournament

Orc Camp Bell

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due THURSDAY,
July 17th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
Check Ins are due WEDNESDAY, July 11th 2014
Voting ends Friday July 16th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours
You will be GRANTED ONE EXTENSION throughout the Tourney. Any extension beyond the first will result in loss of votes.


Line Limit:

Min. = 10 lines
Max. = 16 lines
Limit MUST be agreed upon


General Rules:

1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
means you will be disqualified.
A check in IS mandatory.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.

[Orc]

The boy

[Camp Bell]

...yup.

[Orc]

I take a Barbarian Selfie,
Ur manner is soft: when the Hammer is wrought, know the carrions plenty
Danaerys man will get offed... #NodisrespecttoBarristanSelmy
I'm Bombing so stay where da range is; this meth head'll be left black
It's common to have the Clay make u famous. I'm talking Celebrity Deathmatch
We know Ozil. I'm so real that when I type hymens move, it's light shit too
U vs Bison moves: U couldn't be Klose to a legend & I score more times than dude
The poll shows u nice w/ the Mentions? we'll see when the Wessons clear
U'll take a slide ina second. Now ya girl be Raiden the legend & we ain't talkn Metal Gear
U often a Stan. Im on that boss shit, a man. Get offed if you stand
I have the awesomest hands. They're so pretty they stroll down Catwalks in Milan
I show up to show out. U show up to get blown out. Im Ravishing Rick Rude
Let's establish shit, fool: u got the fangs of a Shitzu
Your idea of a Zoning Out is escaping the Friend one w/ an Average Six, dude

[Camp Bell]

I want ya soul to harbor depression after this wholehearted confession
im taking my dub w/an upset and calling it a total sluaghter connection
this total slaughter corrected, im leaving son suffering on stage like...
i go hard in my lectures, ya productions sus and substance is day light
snuffed w/a bane right, I'm not feeling the kid, ya mental sicker than this?
dont start, i'll put the GOAT's heart on postcards then give them as gifts
cold bars from orc? nah, watch his temperature dip once my flow hawk
my viciousness?? indiscriminate, you got trolled and then it snowballed
fit em for the ditch im digging...then meet me at the funeral for roll call
i scripted this on a winter trip to switzerland, while strolling in a snowfall
bro washed, we texting specialist an he no longer meet the requirements
find a dope spot to look for gold pots wit leprechauns, seeking retirement

[Orc]

vote tho

[Blanco Bishop]

I liked campbells shit. Best parts were the snowballs n switzerland shit. The rest was decent but i felt orc was more consistent n smoother. Also, orc hadmany references that made his verse feel liver with theimagery. Bell wasnt bad at all but orc was too consistent bar per bar.


V orc

[Certain]

Orc: I thought you showed a good grasp of what you were doing but could use a smoother cadence. There was a little too much in the way of attacking. But there were a few standout lines, too. I liked the Milan line.

Camp Bell: This was an unremarkable effort. Work on more unique images and punch lines to make your verses more distinct. All the elements were here, and you probably had a smoother cadence than Orc. But it wasn't as interesting.

Vote: Orc

[big baby]

This was a great lil snippet of what's to come. Disappointed in CB because I think with a little more content with a bit more imagery this would be a pretty great verse. Orc came as orc did, and delivered consistent little liners here and there that got stronger as the verse went on. Seemed to be on an even keel but It was tough to choose, but I'll go with my gut and the verse that demonstrated a rank of interest and everything that embodies sf seemed to be orc here, though a highly contested matchup. Great read,thanks.

[Paradigm]

I take a Barbarian Selfie,
Ur manner is soft: when the Hammer is wrought, know the carrions plenty
Danaerys man will get offed... #NodisrespecttoBarristanSelmy
LOLLL feeling this
I'm Bombing so stay where da range is; this meth head'll be left black
It's common to have the Clay make u famous. I'm talking Celebrity Deathmatch
Good.
We know Ozil. I'm so real that when I type hymens move, it's light shit too
U vs Bison moves: U couldn't be Klose to a legend & I score more times than dude
pronunciation is off
The poll shows u nice w/ the Mentions? we'll see when the Wessons clear
U'll take a slide ina second. Now ya girl be Raiden the legend & we ain't talkn Metal Gear
nah connection is off
U often a Stan. Im on that boss shit, a man. Get offed if you stand
I have the awesomest hands. They're so pretty they stroll down Catwalks in Milan
doesnt rhyme. multis cool
I show up to show out. U show up to get blown out. Im Ravishing Rick Rude
Let's establish shit, fool: u got the fangs of a Shitzu
Your idea of a Zoning Out is escaping the Friend one w/ an Average Six, dude
ehhh ok


I want ya soul to harbor depression after this wholehearted confession
im taking my dub w/an upset and calling it a total sluaghter connection
good multis and flow missing content
this total slaughter corrected, im leaving son suffering on stage like...
i go hard in my lectures, ya productions sus and substance is day light
connection is off
snuffed w/a bane right, I'm not feeling the kid, ya mental sicker than this?
dont start, i'll put the GOAT's heart on postcards then give them as gifts
is tehre a connection im missing here lol
cold bars from orc? nah, watch his temperature dip once my flow hawk
my viciousness?? indiscriminate, you got trolled and then it snowballed
content is missing
fit em for the ditch im digging...then meet me at the funeral for roll call
i scripted this on a winter trip to switzerland, while strolling in a snowfall
bro washed, we texting specialist an he no longer meet the requirements
find a dope spot to look for gold pots wit leprechauns, seeking retirement
contennnnnnnnnnnnnt


Campbell had dope flow and multi schemes but had no content. its all about the metaphors and connections. Orc had some good concepts and 2 pretty cool bars. enough to take this.

Vote - Orc

[jilti]

Camp Bell

snuffed w/a bane right, I'm not feeling the kid, ya mental sicker than this?
dont start, i'll put the GOAT's heart on postcards then give them as gifts
cold bars from orc? nah, watch his temperature dip once my flow hawk
my viciousness?? indiscriminate, you got trolled and then it snowballed

these 2 bars were nice. over u coulda put more complexity into the vocab and wordplay


Orc

We know Ozil. I'm so real that when I type hymens move, it's light shit too
U vs Bison moves: U couldn't be Klose to a legend & I score more times than dude
U often a Stan. Im on that boss shit, a man. Get offed if you stand
I have the awesomest hands. They're so pretty they stroll down Catwalks in Milan
lotb


Camp Bell coulda took this with better rhyme schemes because Orc dropped ok but nothing crazy

V/Orc

[King Ra.]

Orc, a solid swag and flow verse as expected, though I know you definitely can bring much more heat than what is shown. You were fairly consistent, particularly in lines where you threw in some cool references. Camp bell, you had almost everything going for you, and the only thing you lacked really was content/references. I believe you take this with a couple of those in your verse. That's not to say you didn't have any solid lines, because you did, but some content would have pushed you over the top. With Orc dropping out, you get another shot and I feel you can definitely be a darkhorse if you put it all together. In this match, Orc got it.

MVGT: Orc. Good job by both competitors.

[Paradigm]

Orc wins 6-0

Orc: (0)+0opp +5W -2links +10ORW -4ORL= +9
Camp Bell:(0)-0opp -0L* -2links* +0OR=0