[BA S&F] Alvin Karpis [VS] Jilti [Alvin Karpis Wins]

[Paradigm]

BA Swag and Flow Tournament

Alvin Karpis jilti

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due THURSDAY,
July 17th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
Check Ins are due WEDNESDAY, July 11th 2014
Voting ends Friday July 16th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours
You will be GRANTED ONE EXTENSION throughout the Tourney. Any extension beyond the first will result in loss of votes.


Line Limit:

Min. = 10 lines
Max. = 16 lines
Limit MUST be agreed upon


General Rules:

1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
means you will be disqualified.
A check in IS mandatory.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.

[jilti]

Its Jilti bro
Check

[Alvin Karpis]

Check, i haven't even wrote for this but I'll try to get something up tomorrow

[jilti]

not ur average joe. i'm an animal at swag n flow
my talent so palpable and out control, Al Capone wouldnt challenge this alpha bro
gotta mansion, and half a dozen platinum custom jags alone
do the math yo.. thats 6 titles and a bad home like the Steelers franchise owns
besides the fancy Lambo with black & yellow matching chrome
NoKia. even Alvin knows i'm one to watch when the Camera rolls
i need not slingshots to reach the top of battle forums
i'd rather catapult over 'em using my supernatural power ohms
if Karpis dope, i'll carve coke into a powdered form of sour milk
til the outer shell crystallizes into pounds of silk, then smoke every ounce of skill known

[Paradigm]

Alvin Karpis:

Homey, all my lines are quoted n I’m a blow like a mine exploded
I ride w/ soldiers and never roll with fakes like when the dice are loaded
You’ll probably bring up my ex like it’s a great loss you fake boss
I’m paid dawg bout to take off sittin pretty Indian style w/ my legs crossed
At the bank makin trips you hate the kid cuz ballins more than a hobby
Stick to fuckin a basic bitch & trying to figure out this paper shit like Orgami
You aint a thug, you broke n it’s drastic whole lifes been hopeless and tragic
The feds aint approachin this faggot, if his house filled w/ bugs it’s roaches & maggots
Blaze you w/ a quick ten plus you know it’s sick when
I get pissed then....rip the flesh off a cop just to throw the pig skin

[Paradigm]

links please ill vote on this later.

[Paradigm]

not ur average joe. i'm an animal at swag n flow
my talent so palpable and out control, Al Capone wouldnt challenge this alpha bro
Connection is off, cool multi scheme, out control tho is lols
gotta mansion, and half a dozen platinum custom jags alone
do the math yo.. thats 6 titles and a bad home like the Steelers franchise owns
lol feeling this, nice
besides the fancy Lambo with black & yellow matching chrome
NoKia. even Alvin knows i'm one to watch when the Camera rolls
No Kia connection hmm i think this couldve been a lot better with wording. ok bar otherwise.
i need not slingshots to reach the top of battle forums
i'd rather catapult over 'em using my supernatural power ohms
nah
if Karpis dope, i'll carve coke into a powdered form of sour milk
til the outer shell crystallizes into pounds of silk, then smoke every ounce of skill known
doesnt rhyme and nah

Alvin Karpis:

Homey, all my lines are quoted n I’m a blow like a mine exploded
I ride w/ soldiers and never roll with fakes like when the dice are loaded
cool
You’ll probably bring up my ex like it’s a great loss you fake boss
I’m paid dawg bout to take off sittin pretty Indian style w/ my legs crossed
lol ok
At the bank makin trips you hate the kid cuz ballins more than a hobby
Stick to fuckin a basic bitch & trying to figure out this paper shit like Orgami
ehh not feeling needs something more
You aint a thug, you broke n it’s drastic whole lifes been hopeless and tragic
The feds aint approachin this faggot, if his house filled w/ bugs it’s roaches & maggots
lol cool
Blaze you w/ a quick ten plus you know it’s sick when
I get pissed then....rip the flesh off a cop just to throw the pig skin
needs more but still coo

jilti had the steelers bar that i thought was lotb and nokia was almost a good one then nothing else. Alvin had nothing really spectacular but matched flow/schemes and didnt have anything that was a complete miss just nothing good imo. Pretty much Alvin gets this on consistency, if jilti didnt have the 2-3 complete misses he wouldve upset this battle.

Vote - Alvin Karpis

[Certain]

jilti: The last couplet killed you. You might have won this battle if you had kept with the same rhyme for all 10 lines. That ending just didn't feel like an ending and wasn't good in any way. I really liked the Steelers line. The Nokia thing was an OK concept poorly worded. Otherwise the content was lacking.

Alvin Karpis: The roaches line was terrific, and most of your content was there. But the swag and flow aspect of this was lacking a bit. You didn't come across with the same kind of voice and verve expected in these battles. You did enough to get the win here, but mix up your styles and use more than traditional schemes. Some assonance can go a long way and will be necessary against Neighbor and Orc in later rounds.

Vote: Alvin Karpis

[Camp Bell]

wish this was more than 10 but whatev..

i thought jilt had a nice flow at the start but it got choppy at the end
and his content was weak in a few lines. overall, coo verse tho


alvin didnt blow this completely out the water but it was just enough
to take this. his flow was smoother and content was better overall.

vote: alvin

[King Ra.]

jilt, you started very well with the rhyme scheme flow and I was definitely feeling the content in your first 4 lines. As like with everyone else, the Steelers line was fresh and possibly the best line of this match up. But after those first four lines, you lacked in content and the delivery just did not connect afterwards. Karpis, you didn't have any lines that really stood out in your verse, but it was very consistent from start to finish. The flow was on point and you had a bit more to offer content wise as well. jilt could have taken this with more consistency being he had one stand out line.

MVGT: Alvin Karpis. Good job by both competitors.

[jilti]

Thanks for the votes everyone.
Steelers!!!!!!!!!! Best team on the planet, any sport

[Paradigm]

Alvin Karpis wins 4-0

Alvin Karpis: (0) +5W -2links +0OR=3
jilti: (0) -0L -2links=0