What Life

[ill nik-A]

Brawl with titans in the kingdom of jungle lions they bring law & guidance
It’s an awe to science how we applaud a God but are drawn to violence
Someone call the tyrants we want to see a falling giant’s appalled defiance
A strong alliance, a government’s remedy blames the enemy when they install a virus
default reliance, u refer to the news’ views built only to maul your iris
the cult is silenced in a world controlled by stolen gold they fault the Mayans
these frauds have sirens, but who all decided as we stand tall, divided
sell some wealth then assault the clients, tell me who really caused the riots?!
the fear of war’s a crisis to even make soldiers insult the privates
false compliance, this would never happen if the man above designed it
St John’s a bias but can’t argue with he who talks the wisest after he walked the mileage
Who crossed the highest?! not everyone who falls then rises… love what life is!

[Spoken]

This was fucking fire.... Nice scheme and straight dope from start to finish liked some ideas a lot and everything just stayed strong in place... Content well natured in this and the spread of diversity while keeping the same annunciation flow thru consistent? Nice man really a pretty strong drop just wish it had more

[CopyPat]

dope shit man. shitty lack of feeds. i like this alot. flow was obviously smooth. multi's eh?? haha it worked. usually if someone uses the same rhyme scheme for a whole verse like this it gets really stretched and forced. this wasn't so props there. i liked the message/content in this.. pretty really shit. i think everyone can agree with. just a solid little open mic. enjoyed it, you should post more in here

[Rojo187]

Shyt was wicked...the flow is so refined its like I can spit that...

I believe you can only reach a certain pinnacle of hotness thru text...then you have to jump to audio...

I dunno if you do...but you should...then we can see your delivery and emotion...
but otherwise....one of the best I seen so far during my short stint...

[Coup]

I know ya for a battler...so I was reading this that way though its a topical...little bit wordy, flow was rigid due to that...lines punched, good setups...you carried that over. I precieved you forced things to rhyme. ALl made sense so I ain't trying to trip.

content was sharp and you knew what ya speaking on...seemed legit and not something out your element.

good drop

[Mike Wrecka]

dope

news views built only to maul your iris
sick

good shit

[ill nik-A]

Thx

[EbadiBeats]

It was cool. It's much better to be simple and dope than be complex and dope. I liked your flow the most. Put your skills on a mic so we can see how much talent you really possess.

[ill nik-A]

Why a mic? I'm not a rapper I'm a writer... I'm passed that stage

Thx

[EbadiBeats]

Do you have your own book? Your own website with scriptures?

If not, it generally starts by writing up texts to actually recording them. At the very least, I would recommend doing acapellas.

Most of us start with texts in middle school, in highschool it grows to audio... and if you get good at it you continue or go into some other fields. Not to sound degrading to texts.

[God Of War]

Do you have your own book? Your own website with scriptures?

If not, it generally starts by writing up texts to actually recording them. At the very least, I would recommend doing acapellas.

Most of us start with texts in middle school, in highschool it grows to audio... and if you get good at it you continue or go into some other fields. Not to sound degrading to texts.

wtf, text is not a stepping stone, its its own field of writing.

if you play pick up games in the park at 16 yuo can still play them at thirty even if you dont aspire to be a nba star



btw nik this was dope as fuck your flow was nasty i like how you got a completely different style when writing om's then when battling


Someone call the tyrants we want to see a falling giant’s appalled defiance
A strong alliance, a government’s remedy blames the enemy when they install a virus
default reliance, u refer to the news’ views built only to maul your iris
the cult is silenced in a world controlled by stolen gold they fault the Mayans


that was ridiculous right there

9/10

rofl remember when theyd do that back in the day?

[ill nik-A]

Haha yesss

I agree funny thing is I rapped in high school

[Coup]

why do people think writing is easy ?

[EbadiBeats]

why do people think writing is easy ?

It's not... Recording is just the next level.

Recording = Writing + Mic Skills (Delivery, Emotion, etc)

Writing = Writing.

You do the math.

[Coup]

true true....it's not ness. the required next level....ya know what i mean

[Otpeks]

St John’s a bias but can’t argue with he who talks the wisest after he walked the mileage

^
Illy good read nik

[Darth Yoda]

Hemingway > Rappers.

There is no next level, just because it flows smoothly doesn't mean you HAVE to rap or do spoken word. There are even writers who internally rhyme in storytelling and the reader doesn't even know. There are writers far beyond what you think is 'good' or well written.

yawn

[Darth Yoda]

This was good nikka! I didn't mean to sound mean, it wasn't towards you, but to that one commenter. I liked the ability to sound connecting and not talking about pagan stuff and religious blah super solar systems. Dope.