Orc [VS] Greed [Orc WINS]

[Paradigm]

The Summer Classic VII
Netcees Premier Text Battling Tournament

Orc Greed

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due TUESDAY,
July 22nd 2014 11:59 PM PST.
Check Ins are due MONDAY, July 21st 2014
Voting ends Saturday July 26th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours
You will be GRANTED ONE EXTENSION throughout the Tourney. Any extension beyond the first will result in loss of votes.


Line Limit:

Min. = 10 lines
Max. = 16 lines
Limit MUST be agreed upon


General Rules:

1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
means you will be disqualified.
A check in IS mandatory.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.

[Orc]

sent 14

[Greed]

Run it Paradigm

[Paradigm]

Greed:

I bought a 95 Mercedes cause Im a old school player, I dont know WHAT category to put ya'll
I bet the only benzo U ever pushed was a xanax football
Your whole wardrobe is in poor fashion. I dont know why these whores gas him
The only time orchestrate is when he conductin another mans orgasm
Bro I will invade ur bitch, i'll russian regardless of America's orders
You can Crimea river but most you'd do is workout on the border
And talk about borderline gay, you take the back even farther then @TMA hairline
I got so many hoes plain nose diving you'd think I was a Malaysian airline
I give hoes the business, u a lame, to get more specific:
Being a handsome ginger is equivalent to winning the special Olympics
Textin bitches hair flip pics and smiley faces. Mann that shit is wack
Only way id ever consider you a G, is if you put a Emo before that
Even ur style is weak and mushy, only thing I blow is trees of kush leaves
And I can tell u not only a high man....... you are a COMPLETE pussy

Orc:

Ur girlllll is hugeee. U can't hide it son
It's ironic all her clothes Trukfit.. & her body's the same size as one
My dudes will bury ya. Quit cruising all gassed
Cuz you'll see other people quick & we ain't talking moving on fast.
Im all text. O's tore necks from the Hall's best
&Greed gon' be talking bout that Nam battle for yeaaars like War vets
I won last round cuz when I drop dudes fear to post
Dog. You won using an Aero die namix line that was new five years ago
Greed'll get bossed in ways that'll off his face at caustic rates
Ur loss column sucha Big Assed Figure it promotes Plus Size Models across the States
I'm who u try to be don't deny it Greed it's there for the eye to see
It's ironic saying you not a big O fan when ur necks a fucking shrine to me
Goddamn... You ain't ever winning nothing you queer
If Pryde and Greed are two deadly sins the human race got nothing to fear

[Certain]

Greed: I didn't like much of this verse. I'd say "orchestrate" was a good line, though I saw someone else use that word play against Orc at least once before. (And I haven't read all that many of Orc's battles.) Crimea River wordplay isn't even original in live battles. The Malaysia line was really poorly worded. The best stuff, then, probably was near the end, with the emoji line and the handsome ginger, which wasn't clever but at least was personal. Your wording and rhymes were OK at best.

Orc: The opener is the most metrosexual punchline I've ever read. I really liked the Nam line because it was personal and probably accurate. But the next line was too straight-forward and not harsh enough. The neck line was a clever twist on a common jab. And the closer was a nice use of both of his names. There was a lot of filler in this verse, but you probably knew you'd be able to win with three good lines. And you had three good lines, and Greed didn't even show up as strong as last round.

Vote: Orc

[Kin]

Greed-
The only time orchestrate is when he conductin another mans orgasm
-wouldn't that me he's not straight?????

plain nose diving Line woulda been dope If Buddens didn't juz use the plain Upside Down line

emo-G line was ok

thought the ending wasn't hittin' hard

Orc-
Im all text. O's tore necks from the Hall's best
&Greed gon' be talking bout that Nam battle for yeaaars like War vets
assume thatz a personal...I like the flip tho'

I won last round cuz when I drop dudes fear to post
Dog. You won using an Aero die namix line that was new five years ago
-Uhh Huuuuh!

overall nice verse...consistent lines few Hard hitters that edged it for ya

Vote-

OrC

[BROKE LESNAR]

Greed:

Your whole wardrobe is in poor fashion. I dont know why these whores gas him
The only time orchestrate is when he conductin another mans orgasm
Bro I will invade ur bitch, i'll russian regardless of America's orders
You can Crimea river but most you'd do is workout on the border
Even ur style is weak and mushy, only thing I blow is trees of kush leaves
And I can tell u not only a high man....... you are a COMPLETE pussy

Orc:

Ur girlllll is hugeee. U can't hide it son
It's ironic all her clothes Trukfit.. & her body's the same size as one
My dudes will bury ya. Quit cruising all gassed
Cuz you'll see other people quick & we ain't talking moving on fast.
Im all text. O's tore necks from the Hall's best
&Greed gon' be talking bout that Nam battle for yeaaars like War vets
I won last round cuz when I drop dudes fear to post
Dog. You won using an Aero die namix line that was new five years ago
I'm who u try to be don't deny it Greed it's there for the eye to see
It's ironic saying you not a big O fan when ur necks a fucking shrine to me

Greed's lotb was the Orchestrate np, but I have definitely seen it before. I liked the scheme and concept he set it up with, and he managed to flip it well. The other 2 lines I quoted, I did so bc I saw the concept and thought it had potential. Again, Crimea and Russian have most likely been done several times before, and for the high man/hymen wp to work I felt it should of been high men/hymen. But if he changed it to high men he would of had to restructure his bar to make it connect. Not a major tweak but enough to assist the wp.

Orc's verse had a great swagger to it. The delivery was a bit choppy in some areas but it's nothing to get pissed ab. His lotb was probably either the nam or Trukfit bar. Maybe polish the execution of each bar with a more fluid rhyme scheme in the future.

I've got this scored 5-3 Orc.

v-Orc

[Tic]

Greed:

I bought a 95 Mercedes cause Im a old school player, I dont know WHAT category to put ya'll
I give hoes the business, u a lame, to get more specific:
Being a handsome ginger is equivalent to winning the special Olympics
Textin bitches hair flip pics and smiley faces. Mann that shit is wack
Only way id ever consider you a G, is if you put a Emo before that

vs.

Orc:

Ur girlllll is hugeee. U can't hide it son
It's ironic all her clothes Trukfit.. & her body's the same size as one
Im all text. O's tore necks from the Hall's best
&Greed gon' be talking bout that Nam battle for yeaaars like War vets
I won last round cuz when I drop dudes fear to post
Dog. You won using an Aero die namix line that was new five years ago
Greed'll get bossed in ways that'll off his face at caustic rates
Ur loss column sucha Big Assed Figure it promotes Plus Size Models across the States
I'm who u try to be don't deny it Greed it's there for the eye to see
It's ironic saying you not a big O fan when ur necks a fucking shrine to me

Orc takes this pretty easily with more impactful lines. I've seen Orc come much better, but he did plenty for the win. Greed, I wasn't feeling much of your verse, but you had a couple cool lines.

V/ Orc

[Velocity]

orchestrate is over done, i feel like you bit the Crimea river line from SiK on Rapbattles other then that your verse was trashington.

vs

Ur girlllll is hugeee. U can't hide it son
It's ironic all her clothes Trukfit.. & her body's the same size as one
Im all text. O's tore necks from the Hall's best
&Greed gon' be talking bout that Nam battle for yeaaars like War vets
I won last round cuz when I drop dudes fear to post
Dog. You won using an Aero die namix line that was new five years ago
Greed'll get bossed in ways that'll off his face at caustic rates
Ur loss column sucha Big Assed Figure it promotes Plus Size Models across the States
I'm who u try to be don't deny it Greed it's there for the eye to see
It's ironic saying you not a big O fan when ur necks a fucking shrine to me


vote- this is easy to see who won but i think greed bit. = orc

[Greed]

Kill yourself for the thought.

[Paradigm]

Orc wins 5-0.