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trap.
01-25-2013, 04:02 PM
02-06-2003

Lithix

A thousand forms appear silently, silhoutted by the setting sun
With a thunderous metalic roar, they draw their silver swords as one...
Foward I run to greet invaders as the only defense thats left.
With calculating prowess I attack, each offense is deft.
Swift theft, a black wind of death, stealing breath, I slay with ease.
Fatally fluid, I pour through the crowd, spillin prey in threes.
Partin the seas, slicin each wave as it comes, leavin more threshed,
poetry in motion, my dancing blade sings out as it scores flesh...

The dawning sun finally rises, shedding warm light on a lone warrior,
Haggardly standing amidst a cool, motionless field of fallen soldiers.
The stench of decaying bodies whafes through his flaring nostrils,
As he begins his tired journey home, accompanied only by his footsteps.

Back from my thankless task, no questions asked, I trudge through town
like unravelled twine, no eyes meet mine, Why do they judge me now?
Wipe sweat from my brow, to reveal the sight of my twin brother:
A standing storm beside the hanging form of our skinned mother.
Though emotions smother, I call out, "So I guess you found her.
She was screaming your name in vain as I gagged and bound her."
See him flounder, but he jumps before I can say another word,
Falling as one, think I see a ring of archers, but thats absurd.
Vision's blurred, as we tangle on the ground, feel an arrow's thrust.
"How'd they know which one to shoot?" "Told them to kill both of us."

louis premier

Place: Egypt Africa
Date: 560 B.C.
Name: Karanga
Title: Villainous Prince of Egypt

The story begins in the deserts of Zaire, we just defeated one of our enemy tribes from Kenya...................

mission over, our enemies flee, the news spreads fast through wired sources/
admired forces, we return home from victorious courses, upon tired horses/
i've killed men, woman, children, taken food from the mouths of babies/
this haunts me for i know my sins will return, and it is hell that awaits me/
shaking hands heartly, i am finally home, and my tribe departs me/
my house appeares darkley, upon entering there are no greatings just my heartbeat/
4 my families safety i begged the lord, removing my sword i hear the ruslting of feet/
rolling up my sleves i prepare myself for the muscling of thievs/
i hear weeping, it is my daughter. i gasp for breaths and dash the steps!/
a voice halts me which says "stash you steps or i'll slash their necks"!!/
my eyes spew tears from the fear... i can feal it.. the end is near/
who are u i ask? a voice returns fast " you killed my child for cash"...../
."your mother is my mother" you killed your own neice for greed ur my brother!!/
from darkness a familiar shadow grew "n" I knew a bloody battle would ensue/
"their dead" he said "your wife "n" daughter, now my revenge is in order, i will end you!!"/
in a flash our blades clashed with a yellow flash/
one flick of my wrist was treacherous, as i gashed this fellows abs/
blood leaked his parts, as our blades leaped with sparks/
craking his nose, attacking with blows, my blade ripped his heart/
he fell, eyes opened slightley, we stared face 2 face, i could tell he despised me/
well u got ur revenge friend! i said, "n" with a grin he nodded lightly/
at last he was dead, my last family member gone in a sec/
looking at my wife "n" child i paid respect..and with that i put a blade thru my neck/

it is better this way for my family will reunite again in hell.....