View Full Version : Animosi T vs Sharp Nine - SHARP WINS 4-1
Atomic
07-08-2013, 07:17 PM
8 lines
House rules
LETS GO
LETS MAKE IT DOPE
HOT FIYAH
SWEG
Sharp Nine Animosi T
Animosi T
07-08-2013, 07:18 PM
http://netcees.co/showpost.php?p=85912&postcount=9
My vote link
Sharp
07-08-2013, 07:21 PM
it's two links per person Animosi T
http://netcees.co/showpost.php?p=90316&postcount=9
http://netcees.co/showpost.php?p=91563&postcount=5
Animosi T
07-08-2013, 07:23 PM
Alright, I will write first then vote on another battle
Sharp
07-08-2013, 07:33 PM
lil welcoming key. however this goes, hang around, league and tourney stuff's always a lot faster w/ votes.
I got maaaad followers. they been followin me since i started
Sharp's fans mature and smart, but Ani maniacs are just childish and retarded
i'm requested often to leave lil punks in anguish
but the only dudes wanting 'mos are just critiquing your verses in spanish
i can KO dude instantly. why put it off til later?
hit him w/ such a Wicked Left Knuck'll make a thread calling me a dictator
but i'd be doing a favor. this deformed freak cant pull any girls
dude has such terrible structure Innovator couldn't define it w/ all the tutoring in the world
Animosi T
07-08-2013, 08:14 PM
Break it down, sharp because you stayin horny with the sex life of a boy that’s nine
Still a virgin, but you say that’s fine, note this, sex isn’t something that gets better with time, like wine
4 eyes, be real, no more lies, admit you wouldn’t hit even if you were on a football team playing linebacker
You’ve always been bad at scorin’, everytime you try to get it in, you fail so you must be a greenbay packer
You said I was only worth 6 lines, but you bitched out and wrote 8, aint that right ‘fam?
And you’re 21-3, then I looked at your bars, like I almost believed the hype…damn.
My rhymes always raisin the bar, leavin’ yours disappointing like infertile sperm seeds can
You can dance around like you the champ, but my heat leave you smokin like weed man (wiedman*)
Last bar, Anderson Silva got knocked out by a guy named Chris Wiedman. Silva was dancing around.
Animosi T
07-08-2013, 08:31 PM
Second vote link: http://netcees.co/showpost.php?p=91601&postcount=6
SN-
I got maaaad followers. they been followin me since i started
Sharp's fans mature and smart, but Ani maniacs are just childish and retarded
seemed like a forced name play, but w/e animanicsa are crazy like
i'm requested often to leave lil punks in anguish
but the only dudes wanting 'mos are just critiquing your verses in spanish
ha nice
i can KO dude instantly. why put it off til later?
hit him w/ such a Wicked Left Knuck'll make a thread calling me a dictator
I see you
but i'd be doing a favor. this deformed freak cant pull any girls
dude has such terrible structure Innovator couldn't define it w/ all the tutoring in the world
hmmm..a personal I see, but I ani't in the know..still it works
AnimosiT
Break it down, sharp because you stayin horny with the sex life of a boy that’s nine
Still a virgin, but you say that’s fine, note this, sex isn’t something that gets better with time, like wine
wordy, but yeah man I can fap to this
4 eyes, be real, no more lies, admit you wouldn’t hit even if you were on a football team playing linebacker
You’ve always been bad at scorin’, everytime you try to get it in, you fail so you must be a greenbay packer
hmmm....ok...good concept, just off
You said I was only worth 6 lines, but you bitched out and wrote 8, aint that right ‘fam?
And you’re 21-3, then I looked at your bars, like I almost believed the hype…damn.
My rhymes always raisin the bar, leavin’ yours disappointing like infertile sperm seeds can
You can dance around like you the champ, but my heat leave you smokin like weed man (wiedman*)
close one actually.
Edge this out to SN for more smooth and a consistent delivery...
Good luck guys.
Animosi T
07-09-2013, 07:21 AM
Thanks for the vote
Lotto Smirk
07-09-2013, 01:48 PM
I got maaaad followers. they been followin me since i started
Sharp's fans mature and smart, but Ani maniacs are just childish and retarded
i'm requested often to leave lil punks in anguish
but the only dudes wanting 'mos are just critiquing your verses in spanish
i can KO dude instantly. why put it off til later?
hit him w/ such a Wicked Left Knuck'll make a thread calling me a dictator
but i'd be doing a favor. this deformed freak cant pull any girls
dude has such terrible structure Innovator couldn't define it w/ all the tutoring in the world
vs
Break it down, sharp because you stayin horny with the sex life of a boy that’s nine
Still a virgin, but you say that’s fine, note this, sex isn’t something that gets better with time, like wine
ok but well to wordy
vote- sharp
lil welcoming key. however this goes, hang around, league and tourney stuff's always a lot faster w/ votes.
I got maaaad followers. they been followin me since i started
Sharp's fans mature and smart, but Ani maniacs are just childish and retarded
K
i'm requested often to leave lil punks in anguish
but the only dudes wanting 'mos are just critiquing your verses in Spanish
lol
i can KO dude instantly. why put it off til later?
hit him w/ such a Wicked Left Knuck'll make a thread calling me a dictator
Ok wordplay, sting was lacking
but i'd be doing a favor. this deformed freak cant pull any girls
dude has such terrible structure Innovator couldn't define it w/ all the tutoring in the world
bit mean...
You came laxed.... I already read ahead... you got this
Break it down, sharp because you stayin horny with the sex life of a boy that’s nine
Still a virgin, but you say that’s fine, note this, sex isn’t something that gets better with time, like wine
I see where you were going, waaaaay to much filler, the sting wasn't great, define your concept, for example sex life and time and the age of wine, then set up/punchline which you could of done with half the words here... does this make sense??? hit me up on pm if it doesn't an ill explain better, im trying to do some quick voting
4 eyes, be real, no more lies, admit you wouldn’t hit even if you were on a football team playing linebacker
You’ve always been bad at scorin’, everytime you try to get it in, you fail so you must be a greenbay packer
weak
You said I was only worth 6 lines, but you bitched out and wrote 8, aint that right ‘fam?
And you’re 21-3, then I looked at your bars, like I almost believed the hype…damn.
weak
My rhymes always raisin the bar, leavin’ yours disappointing like infertile sperm seeds can
You can dance around like you the champ, but my heat leave you smokin like weed man (wiedman*)
weak
Last bar, Anderson Silva got knocked out by a guy named Chris Wiedman. Silva was dancing around.
Vote Sharp
Gazette
07-10-2013, 10:59 AM
I got maaaad followers. they been followin me since i started
Sharp's fans mature and smart, but Ani maniacs are just childish and retarded
decent
i'm requested often to leave lil punks in anguish
but the only dudes wanting 'mos are just critiquing your verses in spanish
eh, felt rushed. where ur multies at as well?
i can KO dude instantly. why put it off til later?
hit him w/ such a Wicked Left Knuck'll make a thread calling me a dictator
concept decent, execution lazy.
but i'd be doing a favor. this deformed freak cant pull any girls
dude has such terrible structure Innovator couldn't define it w/ all the tutoring in the world
meh. cant say i enjoyed this, it would read as well skipping every set-up line apart from the first.
vs
Break it down, sharp because you stayin horny with the sex life of a boy that’s nine
Still a virgin, but you say that’s fine, note this, sex isn’t something that gets better with time, like wine
ummm, nice attempt at associative nameplay, didnt come off as i thin you would have hoped
4 eyes, be real, no more lies, admit you wouldn’t hit even if you were on a football team playing linebacker
You’ve always been bad at scorin’, everytime you try to get it in, you fail so you must be a greenbay packer
ok, nothin' to shout about
You said I was only worth 6 lines, but you bitched out and wrote 8, aint that right ‘fam?
And you’re 21-3, then I looked at your bars, like I almost believed the hype…damn.
kinda liked this, all relevant. not much of a punch, in fact i think u shoulda switched lines, but u kept it relevant enough to be interesting to read
My rhymes always raisin the bar, leavin’ yours disappointing like infertile sperm seeds can
You can dance around like you the champ, but my heat leave you smokin like weed man (wiedman*)
felt out of place, though the homophone was fine
Imma have to go with Ani here, though not having quite as much skill, it was much more interesting to read, more relevant. nines laziness just annoyed me
v/ Ani
God Of War
07-12-2013, 02:20 PM
I got maaaad followers. they been followin me since i started
Sharp's fans mature and smart, but Ani maniacs are just childish and retarded
vs
nada
dude who isnt sharp needs to work on hs wording n concepts
v,\/nine
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