Advanced Placement [VS] Taking Hostages [Advanced Placement WINS]

[Paradigm]

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Aero and Dominate Blanco Bishop and Lyfza Gamble
Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due TUESDAY,
August 12th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
Check Ins are due SUNDAY, August 10th 2014
Voting ends SATURDAY August 16th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours
You will be GRANTED ONE EXTENSION AS A TEAM throughout the Tourney. Any extension beyond the first will result in loss of votes.


Line Limit:

Min. = 16 lines
Max. = 16 lines
Limit MUST be agreed upon


General Rules:

First to 7, Win by 2, 5-0=KO
1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
means you will be disqualified.
A check in ISmandatory.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.


EACH TEAM NEEDS FOUR VOTING LINKS COMBINED. ON FRIDAY AUGUST 15th I WILL DEDUCT VOTES FOR EACH LINK MISSING UNTIL YOU SUBMIT LINKS. I WILL REOPEN BATTLES IF YOU HAVENT SUBMITTED LINKS EVEN IF YOU HAVE ALREADY WON.

[Blanco Bishop]

Ext.

[Paradigm]

Extension granted for both.

Due tomorrow 1159pm.

[Paradigm]

Advanced Placement:

Ayo Blanc,

Try & pursue the title's suicidal esp since Roar had you in dire straits
I'm a great - You lost to a guy who named himself after noise a Lion makes
Yea I still contact your wife, it's great until you accuse the slut
Ask Tyson, your wife needs privacy when texting a man she used to fuck
I'll bruise Gam's shoulders & brake his hands, have reporters in place with cams
He'll be shameful when anchors cover his swollen arms like Popeye the Sailorman
You impressed Universal Execs? LOL Bitch what the FUCK are you on?!
If jaws dropped & they put their hands together it was to cover a yawn
Delusional, claim your sex counts high & you stay with a different bitch
Lost count at 16 but couldn't count on one to spend Thanksgiving with

That's why I respect aero.

He keeps it real and shows no mercy.

HOLD UP!!! HOLD UP!!!

Paradigm STOP MY TIME YO, REAL TALK, AERO THE GOAT, THIS NIGGA ATOMIC BEEN ON MY DICK,
FUCKBOY, LISTEN
WE ARE NOT FRIENDS SO QUIT ACTING LIKE WE'RE COOL IF WE ARRANGED TO MEET IN PERSON I'D FUCK YOU UP REAL TALK

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It'd be Rocky theme, I'd do prison just for you showing up & won't cop a plea
Shiiit I'd willingly take the years from your appearance like a fucking oxy cream
My stock's supreme so if I feel like hopping on a jet, I gave my paper
Your broke ass you only goes into airplane mode trying to save on data
Blanco its a FACT your wife (slut) dresses you, this a personal bar
Last time you put your foot down & selected gear was to reverse in her car


~ It's Aero

[Paradigm]

Taking Hostages:

When TH c both u lames, the piece assures u getting your brains blown.
A rapture with no 'scape Goat.....except when Dom blames u for the loss u'll take though.
Queer Aer's in love with my partner..no homo, but that fruit should quit the site.
I mean... the way he tried to dodge Murda...proves this coon's a BITCH................ for Lyfe.
The hype's actually bull. I swear Dom champing these duels is luck.
But'f anyone on the BoreDom innate its, this fool..... cuz his style's naturally dull as fuck.
No hygiene I mean.. U just can't tell he fuckin smells?.. Ntm, dumb as hell
But to actually see a chick giving Airhead...... she'd have to literally be one herself.
Your partnership is a big fat corruption, of two fags untrusting..
Your just a martyrdom; ..and even Aero wouldn't step in front of that dysfunction..
aero poppin off?? Lbr this friggen peasant ain't lifting weapons..
Let's just face it... Airsoft, an that's worthless against a 3 fifty seven
Buried alive, under a tombstone lying in rubble God?.....ur finished
That would be Airplane and simple.... Wishing to b 'fly an above'the squad. But isn't.
Bet both were in a frenzy to write. Trying to rush to win but we saw the ploy.
So for the record......we came to show we're taking AP's throne: LeSean Mccoy.

[Paradigm]

Advanced Placement:
Try & pursue the title's suicidal esp since Roar had you in dire straits
I'm a great - You lost to a guy who named himself after noise a Lion makes
Semi Hit - Funny but not much else.
Yea I still contact your wife, it's great until you accuse the slut
Ask Tyson, your wife needs privacy when texting a man she used to fuck
Semi Hit - Funny, Discussion flip. Cool.
I'll bruise Gam's shoulders & brake his hands, have reporters in place with cams
He'll be shameful when anchors cover his swollen arms like Popeye the Sailorman
Hit - Nice. I have a concept like this in my archives lol
You impressed Universal Execs? LOL Bitch what the FUCK are you on?!
If jaws dropped & they put their hands together it was to cover a yawn
Semi Hit - put their hands together needs to be reworded I think. Still cool. Personal.
Delusional, claim your sex counts high & you stay with a different bitch
Lost count at 16 but couldn't count on one to spend Thanksgiving with
Hit - Personal. LOL ouch.
It'd be Rocky theme, I'd do prison just for you showing up & won't cop a plea
Shiiit I'd willingly take the years from your appearance like a fucking oxy cream
Hit - LOL perfect wording dang. Nice.
My stock's supreme so if I feel like hopping on a jet, I gave my paper
Your broke ass you only goes into airplane mode trying to save on data
Semi Hit - Forced Rhyme lol paypa/date stop it. Cool swag.
Blanco its a FACT your wife (slut) dresses you, this a personal bar
Last time you put your foot down & selected gear was to reverse in her car
Hit - LOL dope.

~ It's Aero

Taking Hostages:

When TH c both u lames, the piece assures u getting your brains blown.
A rapture with no 'scape Goat.....except when Dom blames u for the loss u'll take though.
Hit - Good opener
Queer Aer's in love with my partner..no homo, but that fruit should quit the site.
I mean... the way he tried to dodge Murda...proves this coon's a BITCH................ for Lyfe.
Semi Miss - Ending needs work
The hype's actually bull. I swear Dom champing these duels is luck.
But'f anyone on the BoreDom innate its, this fool..... cuz his style's naturally dull as fuck.
Miss - Forced Bored Nominate is how i decyphered that but boredom/boreDOM dont work. If it worked this mightve connected
No hygiene I mean.. U just can't tell he fuckin smells?.. Ntm, dumb as hell
But to actually see a chick giving Airhead...... she'd have to literally be one herself.
Hit - lol cool prolly played though
Your partnership is a big fat corruption, of two fags untrusting..
Your just a martyrdom; ..and even Aero wouldn't step in front of that dysfunction..
Semi Miss - Martyrdom is cool ending needs work tho
aero poppin off?? Lbr this friggen peasant ain't lifting weapons..
Let's just face it... Airsoft, an that's worthless against a 3 fifty seven
Semi Hit - ok nameplay ending had no punch tho
Buried alive, under a tombstone lying in rubble God?.....ur finished
That would be Airplane and simple.... Wishing to b 'fly an above'the squad. But isn't.
Miss - I liked everything to be honest until wishing and on... the end needs work. This had potential though.
Bet both were in a frenzy to write. Trying to rush to win but we saw the ploy.
So for the record......we came to show we're taking AP's throne: LeSean Mccoy.
Semi Hit - Cooll

Almost all of Aeros bars connected and were creative and/or personal. 1-2 hay makers prolly thanksgiving and closer were ether. Gamble and Blanco had opener and a few others that needed better wording to connect. The creativity was there just execution on the ending of some just fell flat. Props though but Advanced Placements verse was just better all around.

Vote - Advanced Placement

[Vulgar]

AP

Try & pursue the title's suicidal esp since Roar had you in dire straits
I'm a great - You lost to a guy who named himself after noise a Lion makes
Decent
Yea I still contact your wife, it's great until you accuse the slut
Ask Tyson, your wife needs privacy when texting a man she used to fuck
Heh
I'll bruise Gam's shoulders & brake his hands, have reporters in place with cams
He'll be shameful when anchors cover his swollen arms like Popeye the Sailorman
Ok
You impressed Universal Execs? LOL Bitch what the FUCK are you on?!
If jaws dropped & they put their hands together it was to cover a yawn
Dope
Delusional, claim your sex counts high & you stay with a different bitch
Lost count at 16 but couldn't count on one to spend Thanksgiving with
Nice hit
It'd be Rocky theme, I'd do prison just for you showing up & won't cop a plea
Shiiit I'd willingly take the years from your appearance like a fucking oxy cream
Decent
My stock's supreme so if I feel like hopping on a jet, I gave my paper
Your broke ass you only goes into airplane mode trying to save on data
Lol
Blanco its a FACT your wife (slut) dresses you, this a personal bar
Last time you put your foot down & selected gear was to reverse in her car
Sick, LOTV

TH

When TH c both u lames, the piece assures u getting your brains blown.
A rapture with no 'scape Goat.....except when Dom blames u for the loss u'll take though.
Alright
Queer Aer's in love with my partner..no homo, but that fruit should quit the site.
I mean... the way he tried to dodge Murda...proves this coon's a BITCH................ for Lyfe.
Ok
The hype's actually bull. I swear Dom champing these duels is luck.
But'f anyone on the BoreDom innate its, this fool..... cuz his style's naturally dull as fuck.
I found this forced
No hygiene I mean.. U just can't tell he fuckin smells?.. Ntm, dumb as hell
But to actually see a chick giving Airhead...... she'd have to literally be one herself.
Alright
Your partnership is a big fat corruption, of two fags untrusting..
Your just a martyrdom; ..and even Aero wouldn't step in front of that dysfunction..
Ehh
aero poppin off?? Lbr this friggen peasant ain't lifting weapons..
Let's just face it... Airsoft, an that's worthless against a 3 fifty seven
Ok
Buried alive, under a tombstone lying in rubble God?.....ur finished
That would be Airplane and simple.... Wishing to b 'fly an above'the squad. But isn't.
Nah
Bet both were in a frenzy to write. Trying to rush to win but we saw the ploy.
So for the record......we came to show we're taking AP's throne: LeSean Mccoy.
Cool

My vote goes to Advanced Placement. Better concepts with better set ups, overall. Decent match.

[big baby]

Think this was cool. Not bad. Couldve been better. Gave AP 18.0/40, and the other team 17.9/40 So really close, but I'll expand on that.

Originally Posted by Paradigm
Advanced Placement:
Try & pursue the title's suicidal esp since Roar had you in dire straits
I'm a great - You lost to a guy who named himself after noise a Lion makes
This is considered good? No lie, I think I was reading gambles verse first when this was posted and almost PMed paradigm that he had made a mistake. Worst bar. Actually 2nd to last. Gamble had a very off line.
Yea I still contact your wife, it's great until you accuse the slut
Ask Tyson, your wife needs privacy when texting a man she used to fuck
Favorite line, this is probably the only good feedback you'll get. Brace yourself.
I'll bruise Gam's shoulders & brake his hands, have reporters in place with cams
He'll be shameful when anchors cover his swollen arms like Popeye the Sailorman
Neighbor wouldve worded this pretty godly, and incorporated the word popeye. Maybe I'll see you in later rounds to show you how it's done.
You impressed Universal Execs? LOL Bitch what the FUCK are you on?!
If jaws dropped & they put their hands together it was to cover a yawn
Wack. You straight up necked this from my counterpart, @dull boy, and ill quote for you, a much better line.

Debated as the rawest on pages. God of the Matrix.
If your jaw droppers are sick... it's 'cause yawning's contagious.
It's funny that your only good original punchline wasn't good nor original as the original good punchline. of course i'm hassling you, you read this from a text head and it stayed in your subconscious. Shame on you, text battler.
Delusional, claim your sex counts high & you stay with a different bitch
Lost count at 16 but couldn't count on one to spend Thanksgiving with
Personal. Not bad, couldve been done better. Felt cramped. Couldve been worded better for the GOAT.
It'd be Rocky theme, I'd do prison just for you showing up & won't cop a plea
Shiiit I'd willingly take the years from your appearance like a fucking oxy cream
Idk what para talking about, "perfect wording" WAs decent. Short bar, almost an ok punchline. Stuff like this isn't even that clever. Just a tiny little jab.
My stock's supreme so if I feel like hopping on a jet, I gave my paper
Your broke ass you only goes into airplane mode trying to save on data
Gave my paper? That doesn't make sense, it's like you paid your dues. You just made it up. Text heads always make things up. Decent. You're not bad for a human.
Blanco its a FACT your wife (slut) dresses you, this a personal bar
Last time you put your foot down & selected gear was to reverse in her car
Decent. Weird wording.

~ It's Aero

Not bad, thought dominate would show and make this a fun read. But if you battlers want to get out into the further rounds you're going to have to step it up. I'll gladly give you a win so your ego isnt hurt, but you have to try. Sort of like when your dad lets you beat him in wrestling or at basketball when you're young, he'll let ya, but you're going to have to go full force. Only then will you learn. 18.0/40


Also, don't do bars like this, you sound like Drake.

Bet both were in a frenzy to write. Trying to rush to win but we saw the ploy.
So for the record......we came to show we're taking AP's throne: LeSean Mccoy.


It sounds like a bad joke a comedian told. I know you guys can do better. You guys have the potential and capability. Of course most of this post is harsh because I'm in a bad mood, but you guys couldve taken this because aero delivered with a lot of sub par lines. I'm going with AP with a slightly better verse, Gamble didnt seem as good as his usual self, and blanco couldnt hold the team up, as he needed some help as well. AP


aero wanted me to break down your verse so I will. I already said the Mccoy line was lane, those set ups are mediocre and lack contrast. The first line was decent, the next two couplets were complete misses in my book. Airhead was very good and refreshing! Martyr-dom was kinda lame, dysfunction? Idk, seemed eh. Airplane and simple was wow, idk not very connective there. Seemed weak. But I thoroughly enjoyed the 357 line. Good stuff, enjoyable.

[Certain]

Advanced Placement: It's not often that Aero attacks so personally. This was a very good verse. I liked the Popeye line a lot, but then that closer was awesome. Nothing missed, really, though the airplane mode line could have been worded better (or even turned into a nameplay, potentially).

Taking Hostages: The opener was a good concept that needed more concise wording. After that, it started to go downhill. The only redeeming line in the last 10 was the martyrdom concept, which could have been worded much better. The closer read like a Lil Wayne outtake.

Vote: Advanced Placement

[Paradigm]

4-0 Advanced Placement

[DLB]

Try & pursue the title's suicidal esp since Roar had you in dire straits
I'm a great - You lost to a guy who named himself after noise a Lion makes
Yea I still contact your wife, it's great until you accuse the slut
Ask Tyson, your wife needs privacy when texting a man she used to fuck
I'll bruise Gam's shoulders & brake his hands, have reporters in place with cams
He'll be shameful when anchors cover his swollen arms like Popeye the Sailorman
You impressed Universal Execs? LOL Bitch what the FUCK are you on?!
If jaws dropped & they put their hands together it was to cover a yawn
Delusional, claim your sex counts high & you stay with a different bitch
Lost count at 16 but couldn't count on one to spend Thanksgiving with

vs

nothing

v- AP. them bars I quoted were straight heat, the LOTB was the noise a lion makes line, had me LOL'ing as I was reading. then the stop in the middle was GOAT, it gave me that fresh txt breather like I was reading a long topical, but I went and got some grape juice, then came back and I wasn't feeling them last ones though, the wording was mad off. Then I saw Gamble and Blanc's stuff, none of that was hitting anything to me. Some of those lines was mad corny, like the LeSean Mccoy stuff, keep that in ya audios Gamble, nobody wanna read that. sounding like the txt version of YMCMB, u had a Tyga verse w/o mentioning someone's grandma. Aero took the credit for this win though, smh. good bars yo

[Paradigm]

Advanced Placement wins 5-0.