Heartless

[Dope girl]

you are heartless
you not gonna find someone good as me
you not gonna find someone nice as me
don't understand why you treat me this way,
I give you the everything you take my love for granted.
you don't do the things you use do,
you don't even show me love.
lately I been feeling unappreciated
We use to be lovers, where it go wrong?
you were my soul, heart, everything, King, Best friend, Friend.
you were all I had,
I stayed with u even tho you treated me bad.
moving on cuz I deserve better.

[VividEnds]

HOF

[Coup]

some humble advice, when doing straight up poetry...try to explore the soul of the person or noun u be writing about to give depth to teh piece....you showed the symptoms but to cut in our minds we need to have u put personification on some object to show us...

not bad tho....keep droping

[Dope girl]

Appreciate you guys reading this & thanks coup.