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Spoken
07-14-2013, 05:26 PM
TOPICAL KEYS TO GREATNESS

Welcome to the first round.

Here are the 5 topics you well get to choose from..

Scenic Quality
Soiled Revolution
Transpired Equations

"When one enters the building and silence follows..."

"Greed is only an expression of having it all at the tip of your fingers"

3 generic topics and 2 quotes.

You choose either topics given or quotes and you each have 15 minutes to write 10 lines...

G'Luck and make it dope

NYCSPITZ
07-14-2013, 05:40 PM
Scenic Quality

The concrete sky hovers over this cotton frieze
Lost in perfection she forgot to breathe - clouds float above this Autumn breeze
Yet her skin seems sundrenched, moistened by a spa's relief
A picture perfect lioness hides her claws and teeth.
In search of serendipity inside the arms of godless sheiks
A leaf spirals, earthbound. Frozen by honest grief
She looks up, joy flushes her spotted cheeks
Her family feels so distant, why would they bother with loners?
The sky undulates, this strange drug is the brother of soma
As my tears fall, a slight smile graces the face of my mother's acoma