IGotzJockaZ vs Storyteller - VOID

[IGotzJockaZ]

10 lines due tonight 7/15

house rules

[IGotzJockaZ]

check n ill post links n vote after i get this

edit: nah ill give till 12 est i wanna twist first =) Storyteller

[Spoken]

Iight

And let's key something now if ya want?? Say due in 10 min... IGotzJockaZ

iight well I'm postin soon

[IGotzJockaZ]

I’ll fuck ur girl raw, have her pussy floodin amino aids
Last time story got inundate it was during a storm, on the weather channel in closed captions
Ur clothes fashion is more wholey then the popes cassock
Get it thuggin and we can gun-it out, that sht wont matter
Ur demeaninor is weaker comin off more one arm short than kirt abbott
This cant b life; I was listen to phife dog n u watchd ‘barnie phife’
Ur hardest write leaves peeps in more a sync-‘ope’, than fallin in those or how u horribly live life
U suck dood, I don’t even need to read or ur intentions to speak
When I cut story out the picture quicker than an editorial release
Know im who ur honey-due while u weep with that melon, shes on mine...yellin', holdin her feet

Storyteller

[Spoken]

Undefeated as the underdog watch and C how i aim for the W now,
act cocky anderson tzu tactics that'll have this joke like him gettin clipped and knocked out.
He get pussy? please aint no way he poker unless he gave up some chips
went all in on straight but we all know that a joker is always just the middle bitch.
you have no importance. came back? should build you a proper grave now,
verse is like the discussion forum how it gets buried by other shit that we'd rather speak about.
if you causing disturbance N see LOL responses under your verses,
S'only cuz we find ur name suiting and can't stop laughin' of horribly it's worded.
you a soft bitch really... a worlds series of acting hard...
the only time he see's much action ^^ is from other men pulling his card.

Sharp Nine please open for votes IGotzJockaZ nice drop fam see you still got it

[Sharp]

Opened. no rush, but voting links sometime soon dudes

[Spoken]

i got you

place a vote while your own fam Sharp Nine

[Spoken]

Bump for looks wtf

[PancakeBrah]

Jockaz (lol) structure was weird as fuck to me. The setup/punchline shit was not normal. Concept wise he had some okay ideas but the wording got in the way or he didn't flip it to it's best use.

Story had some really clunky wording. I wasn't too impressed with the concepts and none of them were flipped cleverly.

v/ Jockaz (lol)

[IGotzJockaZ]

Climb

[Geno]

This was awkward to read for me. Both could have done better with wording imo

Pretty close line for line wise. Wasn't the greatest battle ever honestly.. but I think jockaz edged it with a couple of fresher lines than story and got the creativity edge here.

V-jockaz

[Dope]

V/story battle was close to me ..was able to edge this both had far fetched concepts

[Spoken]

Bump

[Sharp]

2-1 Jockaz

UP

[Mael]

U suck dood, I don’t even need to read or ur intentions to speak
When I cut story out the picture quicker than an editorial release

vs.

you have no importance. came back? should build you a proper grave now,
verse is like the discussion forum how it gets buried by other shit that we'd rather speak about.

This was a, battle, to say the least. I got you tied with quotes. Jockaz was basically rapping about banging Story's girl, and Story had too many statement-ish lines about how wack Jockas was. Creativity was definitely lacking here, guys. However, I thought Story had the better, more direct verse. Props to both, nonetheless.

Vote; Storyteller.

[Spoken]

2-2 thanks mael for the vote....

[KwaL!ty]

filler

vs

you have no importance. came back? should build you a proper grave now,
verse is like the discussion forum how it gets buried by other shit that we'd rather speak about.
^only bar that slightly did it for me.

mvgt- Story

[Sharp]

3-2 story

[KwaL!ty]

Rawn M.D. IGotzJockaZ Storyteller links until provided CLOSED

[Decibel]

Battle Voided Due to No Links! -- PM me links if you want open.