Quarter Final: Gaseous Snake vs. SlutMachine [SM wins by no show.]

[Adonis]

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Verses will be due Friday at 11:59 p.m. Western / 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK. There are no Extensions. No Exceptions.

Verses must be a minimum of 10 Lines and maximum of 48 Lines or 650 words unless agreed upon by both competitors.

Votes will be due Sundays at 11:59 p.m. Western / 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK .

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Goodluck



Topic: http://www.joblo.com/audiofiles1/desperado.wav


"I have to go to church". "What for"? "To confess my sins...I'm a sinner".

gaseous snake SlutMachine

[gaseous snake]

here, slutmachine. im here.

[Adonis]

here, slutmachine. im here.

Topic is there

[SlutMachine]

here, slutmachine. im here.

Cool, I'm here too!

[SlutMachine]

''I've traveled the depths of evil, shattered what's left of people,
the madness crept up as marriage that's kept for needles.
I've slept with beetles, bugs and similar filthy creatures,
fought beasts that had at least a hundred violent features.
I'm the Tobias Beecher of Hell, the narcotics teacher that sell,
so tell me preacher, aint it sweeter if I met the Reaper as well?''
Outside the church is vomit and a horrible smell, the priest aint answering,
the fucker reminds me 'bout my deadbeat therapist that kept cancelling.
''Listen up, I'm not rambling! My soul's done travelling, shit, I even quit gambling!
My daughters spite for me is no longer maddening, all I need is managing
staying out of jail without an ounce of fail and handling a better life.
Not the one that looked for fights and held a knife to a cheating wife
just because I didn't treat her right, simply leaving scared her white.
It's deceiving when you see it in a different light, I didn't believe it
until she conceded and left for the womens shelter at night.
I didn't feel like it was needed, like damn, she exceeded
the expectations I had of her leaving although I know the tension was heated.
I depleted to a source of destruction, relived my past with abduction,
the evolution of sex by force had reached its final construction.
I've seen the full circle and I beg for your blessing to the shit I'm confessing,
I see the faults in my actions and I got sins that needs some adressing!''

The door opens up, maybe I caught some luck and reached the man in heaven,
I get on my feet, someone looks at me like I'm stupid as fuck, I think she's seven.
The child talks in a muted voice; ''dude, it's close to eleven...'', there's no denying.
This kid tells me I'm rather soft for being grown up and crying.
(Well, fuck me for trying...)
I ask about the church and she explain the remains is just for show,
they bought the ground, construed around it to keep the costs down low.
And like a profound being she whispered;
''for people like us, religion died a long time ago.''

[King Ra.]

SlutMachine wins by no show.