my track is posted and i feel awful

[Bodey]

yo maybe it makes a bigger difference than i thought to actually have a set up and program to edit with, rather than having to get the track right or mostly right within one take due to a voice memo, but i just thought i'd be able to lay it better than i did

the lyrics are all there. it's the rapping that sucks. and i'm pissed off. someone come in with not-too harsh of advice but honest. i didnt like that beat to begin with but damn, this was bad

[PancakeBrah]

http://i.imgur.com/c9Ups.gif

[Vulgar]

^so leaned

Don't be so hard on yourself. Just take it one step at a time and try to arrive at a point where you have better equipment, a good quality recording program and a moment of solace to put it all together.

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[StarFaggot]

Badi Alii I'm 100% positive Vulgar is secretly crushing on you. He's that type of dude.

[PancakeBrah]

baldi alli literally sayed vulgar could smash whenever.

literally typed that out.

so.

[StarFaggot]

For some reason I'm not okay with that.

Am I jealous? I'm not sure yet

Continue with thread

[Vulgar]

http://cf.chucklesnetwork.com/items/5/0/9/9/0/original/so-she-sent-you-a-smiley-face-you-guys-must-be-dating.jpg

[CopyPat]

LMAO "Mic check Round 1" starts out h core and murks ur latest one.

edit: hhaha u go in on "the introduction" too. u def just keep ur first takes. even with full out mistakes and redos lolol
u just need to keep recording. only way to get better.
either that or do a few takes until u get one ur happy with.
seems like u usually just keep ur first one and bam throw it together



also hahahahaahahahahahahah @halfcake's post

[Kin]

I felt like it started real strong....I think if ur not gonna break down an buy equipment...then get a app that will be better...two track recorder at least makes.it.so u can record with the beat and add a track for.doubles...try that for now and u will be happier on your finished projects juz based on the quality....cuz the writing game is already there

[Badweather]

:(

I can't believe you forfeit.

[Bodey]

I don't want people hearing that bullshit when I can spit so much better than that Seadad. You know I can. And I only forfeited this round, I want to be a part of the 3rd one so I can make up for it. Last night I fell asleep obsessing and woke up w it on my mind. So round 3 keepin my fingers crossed

[Diode]

I don't want people hearing that bullshit when I can spit so much better than that Seadad. You know I can. And I only forfeited this round, I want to be a part of the 3rd one so I can make up for it. Last night I fell asleep obsessing and woke up w it on my mind. So round 3 keepin my fingers crossed

how are you going to the next round if your forfeit this one?

what?

[Meth]

I thought this was single elimination

[Certain]

It is.

[Meth]

Well then bodey you are a lost soul and meth is very worried.

[Diode]

Well then bodey you are a lost soul and meth is very worried.

lol'd irl.

[StarFaggot]

I don't want people hearing that bullshit when I can spit so much better than that Seadad. You know I can. And I only forfeited this round, I want to be a part of the 3rd one so I can make up for it. Last night I fell asleep obsessing and woke up w it on my mind. So round 3 keepin my fingers crossed

Lmao she's a woman. She believes in second chances.

Badi, you're dismissed. Let the men do what you don't do best.

[Vulgar]

Battle Fig in the BA !

[Fig]

Yeah I'll totally show...

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[Vulgar]

http://i.imgur.com/IgMyx.gif

[Bodey]

Lmao she's a woman. She believes in second chances.

Badi, you're dismissed. Let the men do what you don't do best.

I bet my pen game is better than yours. I don't see you rappin or postin shit so why are you tryna cut me down?

[StarFaggot]

I bet my pen game is better than yours. I don't see you rappin or postin shit so why are you tryna cut me down?

I do text battles.

I'm not trying to cut you down I just don't understand why you're rapping when you could be in a kitchen posting pics for us to see the meals. Diode does it and so does Nika.

[big baby]

I bet my pen game is better than yours. I don't see you rappin or postin shit so why are you tryna cut me down?

lmao bodi bout to war machine my girl aero mack

[StarFaggot]

Badi Alli I'm only joking with you. Your verse wasn't bad it's just the whole production and delivery felt rushed. You have a unique voice.

[Diode]

lmao bodi bout to war machine my girl aero mack

kinda leaned at the image of that tbh

[uh-oh]

buy a mic.

get a 100 dollar condensor or whatever (not dynamic) microphone, its all you need.

you can get any recording program free.

whether you are serious, or rapping is just a hobby, you should still have some type of home setup.

the more you record the better you will get. your not gonna make any significant strides if your just rapping into your phone with a beat playing in the background

humans have brains that learn things. thats why i hate text so much. you are conditioning your brain to write text raps. not real raps. not you bodey, you are conditioning your brain to one take verses, which is fine, but you havent conditioned it in the area of writing a real solid verse

without even listening to the track you mention, i guarantee there are lines that are too long where you gotta pick up the speed to fit it, or shit where you slow down, instead of having consistent flow

if you could record for real when you keep tripping over a line you could tweak it from the get go, instead of just fixing your delivery to put the line in

the key to real rap is dont force it.

99 percent of amateur rappers try and get too deep. oh i can't cut this line its DOPE. no its not. its fucking trash. i dont care if you figure out the cure for cancer in a bar, if it dont sound natural when you spit it, cut that shit. it ruined any sense of dopeness. your better off having a wack line that flows, then a dope line that doesnt.

quit conditioning and repeating things the wrong way. the more you do something the wrong way the harder it is to do it the right way.

[big baby]

oh i can't cut this line its DOPE. no its not. its fucking trash. i dont care if you figure out the cure for cancer in a bar, if it dont sound natural when you spit it, cut that shit. it ruined any sense of dopeness. your better off having a wack line that flows, then a dope line that doesnt.

quit conditioning and repeating things the wrong way. the more you do something the wrong way the harder it is to do it the right way.

repped

[Bodey]

I do text battles.

I'm not trying to cut you down I just don't understand why you're rapping when you could be in a kitchen posting pics for us to see the meals. Diode does it and so does Nika.

Lol ill use this as motivation to do better. And I know you're jokin around, I've just seriously never rapped anything so horrible as far as delivery.

And uh-oh, good looks thank you. Appreciated that.

[big baby]

bod will u mry bb da bb