Nemean vs Jilti [OPEN FOR VOTES]

[jilti]

match lines of first to drop. due this weekend Nemean
Check in

[Nemean]

Gone 8 - ready when you are i don't do shit over the weekend online

Links

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=85554
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=85311

jilti

[Nemean]

U between War and Christie? Laugh.. I got fresh lines dug in my forehead
Get your shit pushed in and give new meaning to smuggling war Heads
Judo boy got Heat? Then I “DoubtFire Dear” cos we’ll never be equal
But every cloud has a silver lining and you’ll get a shot at that sequel!
Jil’s substance? Tasted Meth and now im handing out the same
See the only time you produce is when a Spaniard says your name
Nigga wana bare arms and thought id split when I saw ya
but This dick got more than he bargained for like Bags trip over Boarders
I’ll put a nail in the coffin faster than bulimic chicks bringing up chunks
It aint over till the fat bitch…wait…yea..it’s already singing the cunt
jilti

[jilti]

ur garbage. same place i'll dump ya body at for talkin trash
chopped in half on these boards like a kenpo demo in karate class
im on a roll. could win 5 in a row like it's not a problem
if we ever see Mean Streak, he's pissed off at the bottom of a loss column
this a boxing match. one solid jab, knock that chump flat
so when a punch lands, it'll Drop Ne to the ground faster than a touchback
im rising in the rankings cuz i dont lose too many votes
while people sittin at home watching N-Sync online like a YouTube video
sorry for the wait. so busy could barely even type a single line
but ur girl dont seem to mind Long Delays, she rather i take my sweet time

[El Muffin]

wot

nemean: verse was alll over the place. opener was homoerotic

seems every couplet except the bags one was nonsensical tbh

I know ive been shadow fucking with u lately...bur this verse is the reason why

Judoboy got heat?

thefuck

90 percent of this had me like wtf?

closers setup was a glaring example

nail in the coughin..so ur sayin she broke a nail whilst forcing herself to vomit? ok..as retarded as that sounds..wat does that have to do with the punch. ...(something to work on)

n the punch was blahworthy..n yes ive heard the fat lady sings thing..the way u executed it was fucking eh tho

keep battling though. youll get better with time





jilti.

opener..passable but eh
mean streak is ok
drop ne was pretty good
n sync decent
not feeling closer

decent outing

u knew ud take this easy so no harm no foul

v,/jilti

[Sho Money EMG]

U between War and Christie? Laugh.. I got fresh lines dug in my forehead
Get your shit pushed in and give new meaning to smuggling war Heads

Lol

Judo boy got Heat? Then I “DoubtFire Dear” cos we’ll never be equal
But every cloud has a silver lining and you’ll get a shot at that sequel!

Ok

Jil’s substance? Tasted Meth and now im handing out the same
See the only time you produce is when a Spaniard says your name

No

Nigga wana bare arms and thought id split when I saw ya
but This dick got more than he bargained for like Bags trip over Boarders

Eh
I’ll put a nail in the coffin faster than bulimic chicks bringing up chunks
It aint over till the fat bitch…wait…yea..it’s already singing the cunt

Nahh...

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ur garbage. same place i'll dump ya body at for talkin trash
chopped in half on these boards like a kenpo demo in karate class

Cool...

im on a roll. could win 5 in a row like it's not a problem
if we ever see Mean Streak, he's pissed off at the bottom of a loss column

Nice...

this a boxing match. one solid jab, knock that chump flat
so when a punch lands, it'll Drop Ne to the ground faster than a touchback

Nah forced...

im rising in the rankings cuz i dont lose too many votes
while people sittin at home watching N-Sync online like a YouTube video

Good idea, wording couldve been wayyy better.

sorry for the wait. so busy could barely even type a single line
but ur girl dont seem to mind Long Delays, she rather i take my sweet time

Okay closer..

Clearly imo

Vote - jilti

[jilti]

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=90713

[Window Taco]

Not a bad battle at all to read.

Bar 1: I enjoyed Namean's bar more and felt it was set up a bit fresher & executed. The karate line from Jilt is too played IMO and the flow suffered a bit when he added the inner rhyme of kenpo demo.

Bar 2: Tight ass bar from Jilt right here! I enjoyed it and felt it was well set up, stung, had nameplay involved, and the connectivity between the lines was dope. Namean I felt u dropped a level with this bar and I felt the doubt fire line was too played.

Bar 3: Jilt took this bar as well, even though it wasn't as fresh or strong as bar 2, it had more complexity and was a more impactful line overall than Namean.

Bar 4: I like Jilt bar here better. Seemed like Namean upped his level a bit in power for this punch, but I still think Jilt took it with more sting.

Bar 5: This was a disappointing closer IMO from jilt as he had some pretty solid bars up to this point. He was going for humor but the comedy fell flat for me. I think Namean's bar had more effective connectivity and was better just by a hair.

So I got this 3 bars to 2 Jilt.

V/ Jilt

[theMuzzl3]

/v Nemean

not just cuz his lines were tight, but look at the "last edited" dates, and see that rhymes by jilti were edited after the point of suffering a loss... not to say jilti's lines weren't tight, they were.... but:

/v Nemean

[Ongbak]

U between War and Christie? Laugh.. I got fresh lines dug in my forehead
Get your shit pushed in and give new meaning to smuggling war Heads

♡

Judo boy got Heat? Then I “DoubtFire Dear” cos we’ll never be equal
But every cloud has a silver lining and you’ll get a shot at that sequel!

♡

Jil’s substance? Tasted Meth and now im handing out the same
See the only time you produce is when a Spaniard says your name

♡♡

Nigga wana bare arms and thought id split when I saw ya
but This dick got more than he bargained for like Bags trip over Boarders

♡♡♡♡

I’ll put a nail in the coffin faster than bulimic chicks bringing up chunks
It aint over till the fat bitch…wait…yea..it’s already singing the cunt

♡
jilti




ur garbage. same place i'll dump ya body at for talkin trash
chopped in half on these boards like a kenpo demo in karate class

♡♡♡♡

im on a roll. could win 5 in a row like it's not a problem
if we ever see Mean Streak, he's pissed off at the bottom of a loss column

♡♡♡

this a boxing match. one solid jab, knock that chump flat
so when a punch lands, it'll Drop Ne to the ground faster than a touchback

♡

im rising in the rankings cuz i dont lose too many votes
while people sittin at home watching N-Sync online like a YouTube video

♡

sorry for the wait. so busy could barely even type a single line
but ur girl dont seem to mind Long Delays, she rather i take my sweet time

♡♡

Jilti had more hits and better, more creative execution.

MVGT: Jilti

[Camp Bell]

U between War and Christie? Laugh.. I got fresh lines dug in my forehead
Get your shit pushed in and give new meaning to smuggling war Heads
nice opener

Judo boy got Heat? Then I “DoubtFire Dear” cos we’ll never be equal
But every cloud has a silver lining and you’ll get a shot at that sequel!
the "dear" throws this off to me. it would've been good w/o it

Jil’s substance? Tasted Meth and now im handing out the same
See the only time you produce is when a Spaniard says your name
is meth spanish? produce=mexicans? not sure the connection

Nigga wana bare arms and thought id split when I saw ya
but This dick got more than he bargained for like Bags trip over Boarders
lol whatever.

I’ll put a nail in the coffin faster than bulimic chicks bringing up chunks
It aint over till the fat bitch…wait…yea..it’s already singing the cunt
wording is off

VS

ur garbage. same place i'll dump ya body at for talkin trash
chopped in half on these boards like a kenpo demo in karate class
nice opener as well

im on a roll. could win 5 in a row like it's not a problem
if we ever see Mean Streak, he's pissed off at the bottom of a loss column
niice. LOTB

this a boxing match. one solid jab, knock that chump flat
so when a punch lands, it'll Drop Ne to the ground faster than a touchback
i dont like the connection but the np was nice

im rising in the rankings cuz i dont lose too many votes
while people sittin at home watching N-Sync online like a YouTube video
lol smh nah

sorry for the wait. so busy could barely even type a single line
but ur girl dont seem to mind Long Delays, she rather i take my sweet time
ok


overall, this was a good battle. mean had some good lines but his wording was off in a few lines, along with his punches not connecting at times took away from his verse and just came up short. . jilti, he had a couple nice name plays and the line of the battle with the "mean streak" line. good battle fellas


vote:jilti