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Paradigm
08-18-2014, 03:20 AM
The Summer Classic VI
Netcees Premier Text Battling Tournament

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due MONDAY,
August 25th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
Check Ins are due FRIDAY, August 22nd 2014
Extensions are 24 hours
Opponent may grant extension. Any extension beyond the first will result in loss of 3 votes.


Line Limit:

Min. = 20 lines
Max. = 40 lines
Limit MUST be agreed upon


General Rules:

1st to 11 win by 2. 7-0=KO.
1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
means you will be disqualified.
A check in ISmandatory.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.

ill nik-A
08-25-2014, 05:02 PM
I could use your style to score, then use it to win a trial or court
yours cant convince a little, Broke… that’s why u barely see him & your ex collects child support
see, I also know that little fat slob loves eating chilly, no greens
Broke likes to play detective… but has no clue Mrs. Lesnar is used to spilling the beans
cherish every day cuz it may be the last time u use personals again, clown
Great memories last a lifetime… yours is of your 2 week old son who is around ten now
we gotta stop this nonsense; this the kinda shit we cannot fathom, fam
your verses don’t just tank… this square has protesters lined up from here to Tiananmen
u trained lots for this lame drop but it’s in the mechanics of the rhymes u wrote
u tried delivering a powerful message… but it’s like the chain popped on the huffy bike u drove
Metaphorically speaking; your punches are a joke, why train?
Lesnar never learned how to throw them… while mine are dope like Cain
So u gonna brawl with who? u punch like a girl, so u may wanna call a truce
& if u get caught up in the crossfire… I bet Joan of Arc would show more balls than u
I got great charm; I get pussy plus a place to crash after a night at the late bar
& if it comes to worst your mom’s my insurance… while u drunk dial Jake from State Farm
I titty-fuck bitches unlike u who gets slapped & meddled
Let’s be honest, if u crushed any cans… it’s only to sell as scrap & metal
people expected better comp in a finals, instead it’s slaughter, geek
This sonning is such a slap to your face… it left a burning sensation on your father’s cheek
& Yea, u got the freedom to look-up whomever u want but ya prying is weak
got congress questioning the patriot act… ever since you started using Belichick’s spy gate technique
Searching threads to post statement lines isn’t impressive; u kidding B?
ya style doesn’t need a touch-up… it’s begging to be molested by someone with creativity
u stumbled your way here; so thinkin u can win doesn’t make honest sense
either you’re punch drunk… or the Mayor of Whatever USA approved your confidence
thought u were gonna get lucky in the tag tourney; u the worst, clown
u drug meth down… & apparently he was still under the influence when yall got raped in the first round
I beat u at ya own game, Mr inspector so lame; aint it funny son?
Your verses show signs of poor taste… mine are standing over Broke doing the Manziel money one

Paradigm
08-25-2014, 05:05 PM
Broke Lesnar:

ur Elements loss to Pancake had me in a laughing fit
words can't depict the outcome, but James Foley did a great job dramatically reenacting it
ever Oneduh why "nik" np's get u pissed? no trollin son
he cooked u to perfection wit them 8 yrs ago...n' even then they were considered overdone
i'll disgrace ur name with a haymaker or basic age flip
n' they'll call this the biggest upset since......the other day when big baby made u rage quit
BL = UPN troll, there's ur advantage now admire mine
check the bracket seeding, Andres..I replaced Beyond n' still had ur number the entire time
there's no doubt ur filthy rich, wallets all fat n' swollen
u must be used to them wads of cash.....seein how salty u got after his swag and flow win
behind those attention whore pics and every quoted bar
ur just a sad 37 yr old poser who takes somali n' acts more childish than their soldiers are
ur BMI's pushing 40 too, BBQ got u dodgin them stairs
feel free to crunch the numbers.............but after 1 u'll be laid up wit mad abdominal tears
ur out of shape so in all or nothing battles u never sweat
cuz ur known to hand out walking papers..n' thats as close to being athletic as u'll ever get
seen ur pic and brought some last minute surprises
u want to pink slip, kid?..u look like u pink slipped Kid Capri for his swag, image n' likeness
u said backpackers are geeks but I question ur scope
if Rhymesayers n' Living Legends is nerd rap..why u stay tellin us ur the best of them both?
I can tweet u @ASanchez305, right? nik goat as can be
n' I know @AesopRockWins on Twitter......cuz he has 81.9k followers n' u have a total of 3
u tag with younger up-and-comers to cramp their spot
when kung left u lost ur grip..so now ur nervous n' holdin Bags tighter than a ransom drop
remember that mystery spic Bags admitted he tapped?
well tag partners should be giving each other advice, nik....not gonorrhea, trich, or the clap
u got zero charisma, no flair n' u struggle to flip tropes
I was set to use a 'fucked ur wife' bar..but ur a dull faggot n' suck the fun out of dick jokes
ur precious rep gets no love, this mooch'll bluff n' lose
n' his wife only be laudanum..cuz she tired of coughin up money for his stupid fuckin shoes

sral
08-26-2014, 04:54 AM
OHHHHHHHHHH SHITTTTTTTTTTT

nik-A went the fuck in with those opening bars

I could use your style to score, then use it to win a trial or court
yours cant convince a little, Broke… that’s why u barely see him & your ex collects child support
cherish every day cuz it may be the last time u use personals again, clown
Great memories last a lifetime… yours is of your 2 week old son who is around ten now

literally roflzzz @ that last shit

i think a few went over my head with the american references, i'd no idea what they meant, so sorry about that. tank in tinnamen square shit was nice. sonning slap shit was cool too

Broke i didnt get your opening line, you picked it up after that though, i thought this shit towards the end was mean:

u said backpackers are geeks but I question ur scope
if Rhymesayers n' Living Legends is nerd rap..why u stay tellin us ur the best of them both?
I can tweet u @ASanchez305, right? nik goat as can be
n' I know @AesopRockWins on Twitter......cuz he has 81.9k followers n' u have a total of 3

LOL back to back zingers from both

honestly could see it going either way, couple seemed to miss but maybe that because i'm a britfag and they went over my head

either way, you're both cool with me, dope finals

i'd edge it to nik-A if i had to because that shit about Lendo's kid was fucking savage as fuckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk ahahahahaha

RTF: http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=90266

Sho Money EMG
08-26-2014, 04:06 PM
Lol dope fucking battle


I could use your style to score, then use it to win a trial or court
yours cant convince a little, Broke… that’s why u barely see him & your ex collects child support
# LMAO, THIS WAS DOPE
see, I also know that little fat slob loves eating chilly, no greens
Broke likes to play detective… but has no clue Mrs. Lesnar is used to spilling the beans
# FEELIN IT
cherish every day cuz it may be the last time u use personals again, clown
Great memories last a lifetime… yours is of your 2 week old son who is around ten now
# LOL NICE
we gotta stop this nonsense; this the kinda shit we cannot fathom, fam
your verses don’t just tank… this square has protesters lined up from here to Tiananmen
# DOPE, FEELIN THIS TOO
u trained lots for this lame drop but it’s in the mechanics of the rhymes u wrote
u tried delivering a powerful message… but it’s like the chain popped on the huffy bike u drove
# LOVE THE CONCEPT, COULDA ADDED ALIL MORE THOUGH
Metaphorically speaking; your punches are a joke, why train?
Lesnar never learned how to throw them… while mine are dope like Cain
# NAH.. NOT FEELING
So u gonna brawl with who? u punch like a girl, so u may wanna call a truce
& if u get caught up in the crossfire… I bet Joan of Arc would show more balls than u
# OKAY GOOD IDEA
I got great charm; I get pussy plus a place to crash after a night at the late bar
& if it comes to worst your mom’s my insurance… while u drunk dial Jake from State Farm
# ROFL... DOPE SHIT
I titty-fuck bitches unlike u who gets slapped & meddled
Let’s be honest, if u crushed any cans… it’s only to sell as scrap & metal
# THIS WENT HARD TOO
people expected better comp in a finals, instead it’s slaughter, geek
This sonning is such a slap to your face… it left a burning sensation on your father’s cheek
# EHH, ALRIGHT. PLAYED CONCEPT BUT OKAY
& Yea, u got the freedom to look-up whomever u want but ya prying is weak
got congress questioning the patriot act… ever since you started using Belichick’s spy gate technique
# NICE.. SOLID
Searching threads to post statement lines isn’t impressive; u kidding B?
ya style doesn’t need a touch-up… it’s begging to be molested by someone with creativity
# WOOO, FIRE SHIT
u stumbled your way here; so thinkin u can win doesn’t make honest sense
either you’re punch drunk… or the Mayor of Whatever USA approved your confidence
# LOL, ALRIGHT
thought u were gonna get lucky in the tag tourney; u the worst, clown
u drug meth down… & apparently he was still under the influence when yall got raped in the first round
# OKAY, GOOD IDEA.. DECENT EXECUTION
I beat u at ya own game, Mr inspector so lame; aint it funny son?
Your verses show signs of poor taste… mine are standing over Broke doing the Manziel money one
# COOL CLOSER


-----


ur Elements loss to Pancake had me in a laughing fit
words can't depict the outcome, but James Foley did a great job dramatically reenacting it
# LOL COOL OPENER.
ever Oneduh why "nik" np's get u pissed? no trollin son
he cooked u to perfection wit them 8 yrs ago...n' even then they were considered overdone
# DOPE.. FEELIN THIS
i'll disgrace ur name with a haymaker or basic age flip
n' they'll call this the biggest upset since......the other day when big baby made u rage quit
# LOL, GOOD
BL = UPN troll, there's ur advantage now admire mine
check the bracket seeding, Andres..I replaced Beyond n' still had ur number the entire time
# THIS WAS HARD TOO.
there's no doubt ur filthy rich, wallets all fat n' swollen
u must be used to them wads of cash.....seein how salty u got after his swag and flow win
# ROFL, SICK SHIT
behind those attention whore pics and every quoted bar
ur just a sad 37 yr old poser who takes somali n' acts more childish than their soldiers are
# LOVE THIS REFERENCE HERE, GOOD EXECUTION
ur BMI's pushing 40 too, BBQ got u dodgin them stairs
feel free to crunch the numbers.............but after 1 u'll be laid up wit mad abdominal tears
# LOL, AIGHT
ur out of shape so in all or nothing battles u never sweat
cuz ur known to hand out walking papers..n' thats as close to being athletic as u'll ever get
# ALRIGHT.
seen ur pic and brought some last minute surprises
u want to pink slip, kid?..u look like u pink slipped Kid Capri for his swag, image n' likeness
# THIS WAS OKAY.
u said backpackers are geeks but I question ur scope
if Rhymesayers n' Living Legends is nerd rap..why u stay tellin us ur the best of them both?
# GOOD SHIT... LIKED THIS
I can tweet u @ASanchez305, right? nik goat as can be
n' I know @AesopRockWins on Twitter......cuz he has 81.9k followers n' u have a total of 3
# LOL, COOL.
u tag with younger up-and-comers to cramp their spot
when kung left u lost ur grip..so now ur nervous n' holdin Bags tighter than a ransom drop
# WOOOOOOOOOOOOO LOTB
remember that mystery spic Bags admitted he tapped?
well tag partners should be giving each other advice, nik....not gonorrhea, trich, or the clap
# HAHA..
u got zero charisma, no flair n' u struggle to flip tropes
I was set to use a 'fucked ur wife' bar..but ur a dull faggot n' suck the fun out of dick jokes
# MEH OKAY
ur precious rep gets no love, this mooch'll bluff n' lose
n' his wife only be laudanum..cuz she tired of coughin up money for his stupid fuckin shoes
# SICK CLOSER... GOOD SHIT MAN


OVERALL - SICK FUCKIN BATTLE.. ENJOYED BOTH...

VOTE - BROKE LESNAR

STAY UP

Allen Knight
08-27-2014, 12:10 AM
I could use your style to score, then use it to win a trial or court
yours cant convince a little, Broke… that’s why u barely see him & your ex collects child support
we gotta stop this nonsense; this the kinda shit we cannot fathom, fam
your verses don’t just tank… this square has protesters lined up from here to Tiananmen
u trained lots for this lame drop but it’s in the mechanics of the rhymes u wrote
u tried delivering a powerful message… but it’s like the chain popped on the huffy bike u drove
i got great charm; I get pussy plus a place to crash after a night at the late bar
& if it comes to worst your mom’s my insurance… while u drunk dial Jake from State Farm
I titty-fuck bitches unlike u who gets slapped & meddled
Let’s be honest, if u crushed any cans… it’s only to sell as scrap & metal


Vs


ur out of shape so in all or nothing battles u never sweat
cuz ur known to hand out walking papers..n' thats as close to being athletic as u'll ever get
u said backpackers are geeks but I question ur scope
if Rhymesayers n' Living Legends is nerd rap..why u stay tellin us ur the best of them both?
I can tweet u @ASanchez305, right? nik goat as can be
n' I know @AesopRockWins on Twitter......cuz he has 81.9k followers n' u have a total of 3
u tag with younger up-and-comers to cramp their spot
when kung left u lost ur grip..so now ur nervous n' holdin Bags tighter than a ransom drop

V/Nik, yo dope ass battle foreal both had some fire, les ransom drop was fuckin sick an lotb tbh, but i felt nik had one more quote an his non quotes were still a lil better than brokes but still close as fuck had to read it acouple times to decide, it could go either way. but i say nik took it, but good finals.

Certain
08-27-2014, 11:58 PM
ill nik-A: Those first six lines in which you flipped BROKE LESNAR's tactics on him were really strong. The opener was the line of the battle and one of the best of the tournament. Then you got a little generic for a bit, with the exception of a weak Brock Lesnar line. None of the generic lines were particularly hard, but I chuckled at the Jake from State Farm line. The personals about Spygate and the lack of creativity hit pretty well, but I thought the Meth line flopped. Then the closer was set up very well but didn't seem clever enough in connecting sign in two forms. Sometimes your wording let you down ("scrap and metal" and "bike you drove" were awkard). But more often in this case, you didn't go harsh enough. The best lines mostly were the personal ones. If you carved the 10-16 worst lines out of this verse to make it a more standard length, it'd have been fierce. That's understandable in a 30-line battle.

BROKE LESNAR: You opened up kind of awkwardly and seemed to be cyphering through a set of personals early in your verse rather than attacking aggressively. The first six lines felt like that, at least. The Beyond line was a clever use of seeding, but you didn't really impress me until the Somalian line. That's when you started hitting him with personals that were more than past message-board threads. I think because of the length of the battle you kept using multiple concepts on the same topic a bit too much, which made some things redundant. The best example was the consecutive nerd-rap lines. I thought the Twitter one was much better than the Living Legends one. With the two Bags punches, I liked the kungfugrip one. With the two fat punches, I liked the crunches one. In a way, the extra lines blunt the impact of the good ones, like you were hedging your bets on each one so you used two per personal. The ending didn't really feel like the last line of a verse, either, and I don't think you incorporated laudanum well enough into the structure of the line. Your best lines were the kungfugrip and Somalian ones, but there were quite a few that, while not negatives exactly, didn't land. I think ill nik-A wins this because of a creativity edge.

Vote: ill nik-A

big baby
08-31-2014, 11:54 PM
Thing is this, this was extremely generic and predictable on many halves from both sides. The opener of nik-a seemed pretty forced and was mainly buttoned on humor and some sort of personal umph. It didn't really have any creative class to it, other than the fact that was it some sort of personal, I assume. Spilling the beans, was ok I guess but seem rather forced. I just can't bring myself to think that's actually some sort of crazy line. It isn't. It's just seamingly stretched but put together well structurally -thats it. Tienanmen was weak to me cause my compatriots have used that line a few in their OM's. I didn't find it enlightening, or fresh. "I'm a tank placed in tienanmen square."

The gut of the verse was ok, dope like cain was alright, didnt really have much substance after that. If anybody else wrote it, it'd be consider lackluster. If I'm reading lines for what they are, I'll use the rubric everyone seems to be using when they judge me or others - which is harsh. All these lines are just okay/alright. Nothing wowed me. The funniest and best bar you possessed was the meth one, it wasn't fresh in term of a generic field, but it had that nameplay humoristic effect that I look for. IT was your best line by far. State Farm, Joan Of Arc, Crushed cans all followed the same template and it became repetitive. Formulaic to the point it was just predictable. Like I already know the lines are coming when I read the set-up. That's just offsetting.

Never really understood fake battle internet rap or the method its written but lol. Broke wasn't that much greater, but he did have humor and the research thing where nik-a said it backfired - it didn't. I don't even see where nik-a researched anything, other than the first opening lines, so that, on behalf of nik was also a miss in my eyes. Or if it landed it wasnt significant enough to make any real damage. Always nice to see my name dropped in lines here and there. That upset was purely simple, but the humor - which ive' mentioned is key is cool. I liked it. That was a pretty good meltdown. Wads of cash was cool, simple, but funny. I don't see much of a difference in these lines and the other ones people write, lol. Baffling. Funny to me. on both ends, I'm just re-reading. Nik's set ups also pale just a bit in comparison to broke. That's where I think he's a bit more polished. Nik has this knack for just doing enough with the set-ups. IT always connects and transitions well, but it's never really funny or atleast a bit witty in wording. Brokes aren't either, but they have a bit more sting to them.

Though I saw many instances in which his became lazy i.e "never sweat" lol. Some lines were full of humor, the twitter one was less likened by humor and had a more aggressive tact. One thing that bothered me was the eery fucking length of each bar was exactly the same and followed the same protocol. So it sounds hypocritical of me when I accuse nik of being repetitive. Wow. It's like a fucking binary coding. It's all the same length. Nothing made longer or shorter to fit anything. It's formulaic - my problem with internet battling. Lame. It follows a code. It makes me fall asleep, almost. Go crazy, do whatever you want. Just rhyme. Go at their necks. Make fun of them. Fuck generics. Just kill them. The wording here wascool. It seemed you stepped off the gas in the finals. I liked your other verses more, broke. Nik-a seemed up to par to his usual standard. Nothing was mismatched here in terms of skill. Both seemed pretty even. It's more of a likeness to who appealed to you more. Both had their fair share of misses imo, but I'd definitely give it to broke by a hair. Re-read both a few times, and if I had to read either, one more time because I had too, because I liked it? I'd have to give it to broke.

Ghost1
09-01-2014, 08:29 PM
I could use your style to score, then use it to win a trial or court
yours cant convince a little, Broke… that’s why u barely see him & your ex collects child support

Ouch

see, I also know that little fat slob loves eating chilly, no greens
Broke likes to play detective… but has no clue Mrs. Lesnar is used to spilling the beans

Ehh....detective...no clue...spilling the beans...an the tie in with cooking etc all clever....but what secret is she telling ?

cherish every day cuz it may be the last time u use personals again, clown
Great memories last a lifetime… yours is of your 2 week old son who is around ten now

Jesus.

we gotta stop this nonsense; this the kinda shit we cannot fathom, fam
your verses don’t just tank… this square has protesters lined up from here to Tiananmen

Dope

u trained lots for this lame drop but it’s in the mechanics of the rhymes u wrote
u tried delivering a powerful message… but it’s like the chain popped on the huffy bike u drove

Not bad...not amazing

Metaphorically speaking; your punches are a joke, why train?
Lesnar never learned how to throw them… while mine are dope like Cain

Im guessing cain is a ufc fighter....aside from the obv cain/dope..... this didnt hit hard imo

So u gonna brawl with who? u punch like a girl, so u may wanna call a truce
& if u get caught up in the crossfire… I bet Joan of Arc would show more balls than u

Ok

I got great charm; I get pussy plus a place to crash after a night at the late bar
& if it comes to worst your mom’s my insurance… while u drunk dial Jake from State Farm

Lol cool

I titty-fuck bitches unlike u who gets slapped & meddled
Let’s be honest, if u crushed any cans… it’s only to sell as scrap & metal

Ok

people expected better comp in a finals, instead it’s slaughter, geek
This sonning is such a slap to your face… it left a burning sensation on your father’s cheek

Eh

& Yea, u got the freedom to look-up whomever u want but ya prying is weak
got congress questioning the patriot act… ever since you started using Belichick’s spy gate technique

Fire.

Searching threads to post statement lines isn’t impressive; u kidding B?
ya style doesn’t need a touch-up… it’s begging to be molested by someone with creativity

Lol tbis was weird...but good

u stumbled your way here; so thinkin u can win doesn’t make honest sense
either you’re punch drunk… or the Mayor of Whatever USA approved your confidence

Over my head i guess

thought u were gonna get lucky in the tag tourney; u the worst, clown
u drug meth down… & apparently he was still under the influence when yall got raped in the first round

Ok

I beat u at ya own game, Mr inspector so lame; aint it funny son?
Your verses show signs of poor taste… mine are standing over Broke doing the Manziel money one

Lmao


[QUOTE=Paradigm;389355]Broke Lesnar:

ur Elements loss to Pancake had me in a laughing fit
words can't depict the outcome, but James Foley did a great job dramatically reenacting it

Eh....ok....shouldve focused more on hurting him with the personal

ever Oneduh why "nik" np's get u pissed? no trollin son
he cooked u to perfection wit them 8 yrs ago...n' even then they were considered overdone

Smart punch.....the personal aspect isnt harsh tho...again

i'll disgrace ur name with a haymaker or basic age flip
n' they'll call this the biggest upset since......the other day when big baby made u rage quit

This is better

BL = UPN troll, there's ur advantage now admire mine
check the bracket seeding, Andres..I replaced Beyond n' still had ur number the entire time

Clever...not harsh tho

there's no doubt ur filthy rich, wallets all fat n' swollen
u must be used to them wads of cash.....seein how salty u got after his swag and flow win

Did cash beat him in a swag battle? This shit too old to be relevant.....asode from the fact no1 gave a fuck wen it happened likely....bad personal attempt here imho

behind those attention whore pics and every quoted bar
ur just a sad 37 yr old poser who takes somali n' acts more childish than their soldiers are

This was crazy lol.

ur BMI's pushing 40 too, BBQ got u dodgin them stairs
feel free to crunch the numbers.............but after 1 u'll be laid up wit mad abdominal tears

Light

ur out of shape so in all or nothing battles u never sweat
cuz ur known to hand out walking papers..n' thats as close to being athletic as u'll ever get

Not bad

seen ur pic and brought some last minute surprises
u want to pink slip, kid?..u look like u pink slipped Kid Capri for his swag, image n' likeness

Lmao. Its the one an only kiiiiiiiiid......

u said backpackers are geeks but I question ur scope
if Rhymesayers n' Living Legends is nerd rap..why u stay tellin us ur the best of them both?

Ok

I can tweet u @ASanchez305, right? nik goat as can be
n' I know @AesopRockWins on Twitter......cuz he has 81.9k followers n' u have a total of 3

Lmao....this is cool....but....i mean....obv aesop is famous....its not like ur really sayin much here

u tag with younger up-and-comers to cramp their spot
when kung left u lost ur grip..so now ur nervous n' holdin Bags tighter than a ransom drop

Fire

remember that mystery spic Bags admitted he tapped?
well tag partners should be giving each other advice, nik....not gonorrhea, trich, or the clap

Loooooooool. I have a clean bill of health now fyi. Nice punch.

u got zero charisma, no flair n' u struggle to flip tropes
I was set to use a 'fucked ur wife' bar..but ur a dull faggot n' suck the fun out of dick jokes

Lmao@suck the fun out of dick jokes. That was cool.

ur precious rep gets no love, this mooch'll bluff n' lose
n' his wife only be laudanum..cuz she tired of coughin up money for his stupid fuckin shoes

Idk what wordplay ur trynna do with laudanum....i had to actually google it to see its a painkiller...an dk the enunciation

Loud an um

Loadin em

....

Idk. Miss.


Ok...so....wouldnt say i loved this battle. Maybe 30lines had u guys w some throw away shit thats making me think lower of the verses then i should. Niks personals on broke was a perfect flip.......whats good for the goose i suppose. Broke had sum bangers ...somalian was crack ....broke took a whkle but started to heat up towards the end....wasted most kf his personak angles on nik by not executing them harshly....he seemed to focus more on being clever ....which has its place....but in the SC finals vs such a well known persona u gotta go personal and for the jugular. I think niks concepts were bettsr utililized and in that regard he landed punches more consistently.

V nik

Blanco Bishop
09-01-2014, 11:25 PM
I could use your style to score, then use it to win a trial or court
yours cant convince a little, Broke… that’s why u barely see him & your ex collects child support
i feel like the little broke play is awkward.
see, I also know that little fat slob loves eating chilly, no greens
Broke likes to play detective… but has no clue Mrs. Lesnar is used to spilling the beans
the whole bar felt like a setup
cherish every day cuz it may be the last time u use personals again, clown
Great memories last a lifetime… yours is of your 2 week old son who is around ten now
fire personal
we gotta stop this nonsense; this the kinda shit we cannot fathom, fam
your verses don’t just tank… this square has protesters lined up from here to Tiananmen
dope
u trained lots for this lame drop but it’s in the mechanics of the rhymes u wrote
u tried delivering a powerful message… but it’s like the chain popped on the huffy bike u drove
good jab
Metaphorically speaking; your punches are a joke, why train?
Lesnar never learned how to throw them… while mine are dope like Cain
decent
So u gonna brawl with who? u punch like a girl, so u may wanna call a truce
& if u get caught up in the crossfire… I bet Joan of Arc would show more balls than u
cool line
I got great charm; I get pussy plus a place to crash after a night at the late bar
& if it comes to worst your mom’s my insurance… while u drunk dial Jake from State Farm
Lol.sick
I titty-fuck bitches unlike u who gets slapped & meddled
Let’s be honest, if u crushed any cans… it’s only to sell as scrap & metal
cool.good wording.
people expected better comp in a finals, instead it’s slaughter, geek
This sonning is such a slap to your face… it left a burning sensation on your father’s cheek
i like.
& Yea, u got the freedom to look-up whomever u want but ya prying is weak
got congress questioning the patriot act… ever since you started using Belichick’s spy gate technique
dope
Searching threads to post statement lines isn’t impressive; u kidding B?
ya style doesn’t need a touch-up… it’s begging to be molested by someone with creativity
fire.
u stumbled your way here; so thinkin u can win doesn’t make honest sense
either you’re punch drunk… or the Mayor of Whatever USA approved your confidence
solid
thought u were gonna get lucky in the tag tourney; u the worst, clown
u drug meth down… & apparently he was still under the influence when yall got raped in the first round
not feeling.
I beat u at ya own game, Mr inspector so lame; aint it funny son?
Your verses show signs of poor taste… mine are standing over Broke doing the Manziel money one
solid







Broke Lesnar:

ur Elements loss to Pancake had me in a laughing fit
words can't depict the outcome, but James Foley did a great job dramatically reenacting it
solid
ever Oneduh why "nik" np's get u pissed? no trollin son
he cooked u to perfection wit them 8 yrs ago...n' even then they were considered overdone
solid wording. Solid jab.
i'll disgrace ur name with a haymaker or basic age flip
n' they'll call this the biggest upset since......the other day when big baby made u rage quit
good job hiding the punch lol
BL = UPN troll, there's ur advantage now admire mine
check the bracket seeding, Andres..I replaced Beyond n' still had ur number the entire time
like.
there's no doubt ur filthy rich, wallets all fat n' swollen
u must be used to them wads of cash.....seein how salty u got after his swag and flow win
lol lotb
behind those attention whore pics and every quoted bar
ur just a sad 37 yr old poser who takes somali n' acts more childish than their soldiers are
shit. This n last bar best1 2 of battle so far.
ur BMI's pushing 40 too, BBQ got u dodgin them stairs
feel free to crunch the numbers.............but after 1 u'll be laid up wit mad abdominal tears
lol. Ok
ur out of shape so in all or nothing battles u never sweat
cuz ur known to hand out walking papers..n' thats as close to being athletic as u'll ever get
solid pink slip line.
seen ur pic and brought some last minute surprises
u want to pink slip, kid?..u look like u pink slipped Kid Capri for his swag, image n' likeness
lol.nikka does resemble Capri.
u said backpackers are geeks but I question ur scope
if Rhymesayers n' Living Legends is nerd rap..why u stay tellin us ur the best of them both?
woah. Ok.
I can tweet u @ASanchez305, right? nik goat as can be
n' I know @AesopRockWins on Twitter......cuz he has 81.9k followers n' u have a total of 3
good personal.
u tag with younger up-and-comers to cramp their spot
when kung left u lost ur grip..so now ur nervous n' holdin Bags tighter than a ransom drop
Lol
remember that mystery spic Bags admitted he tapped?
well tag partners should be giving each other advice, nik....not gonorrhea, trich, or the clap
decent personal.
u got zero charisma, no flair n' u struggle to flip tropes
I was set to use a 'fucked ur wife' bar..but ur a dull faggot n' suck the fun out of dick jokes
Lol. Good jab.
ur precious rep gets no love, this mooch'll bluff n' lose
n' his wife only be laudanum..cuz she tired of coughin up money for his stupid fuckin shoes
aight. Decent. ___



Idk. I thought ill was good but nothing really had me like sheesh. Some bats were good personals worded awkwardly like the little broke line. I really liked the touch up line tho. But i felt like broke was much more clever and innovative with the wordplay. Somalian bar was bonkies. Wad of cash was classic lol z. Imo broke took this .


V broke.
___________

Kin
09-02-2014, 07:20 AM
iLL--

& if it comes to worst your mom’s my insurance… while u drunk dial Jake from State Farm
- even tho' I think "Mom" lines are corny as hell...the state farm shit was dope

Let’s be honest, if u crushed any cans… it’s only to sell as scrap & metal
-diggin' thiz


This sonning is such a slap to your face… it left a burning sensation on your father’s cheek
-daaaamn

ya style doesn’t need a touch-up… it’s begging to be molested by someone with creativity
-ok, ok

u drug meth down… & apparently he was still under the influence when yall got raped in the first round
-thiz was straight..coulda been a knock-out punch tho'


verse was ok...thought it picked up some near the middle...I was expecting a lot more hard hitting punchlinez tho'

Broke--

he cooked u to perfection wit them 8 yrs ago...n' even then they were considered overdone
-ok

n' they'll call this the biggest upset since......the other day when big baby made u rage quit
- hahahahaha

ur just a sad 37 yr old poser who takes somali n' acts more childish than their soldiers are
-ughh


ur out of shape so in all or nothing battles u never sweat
cuz ur known to hand out walking papers..n' thats as close to being athletic as u'll ever get
-Dayuuuum

when kung left u lost ur grip..so now ur nervous n' holdin Bags tighter than a ransom drop
-whoa

u got zero charisma, no flair n' u struggle to flip tropes
I was set to use a 'fucked ur wife' bar..but ur a dull faggot n' suck the fun out of dick jokes
-Whoa, Whoa haha

Broke- Solid verse...every now an then there was a bar that seemed to be a filler...but the majority was pretty Hard Hittin'

Overall- dope battle...styles are somewhat similar but Broke got a structure thats a lil' smoother flowin' and he's punchez are more creative...

Thought thiz was all Broke

Vote-Broke
________________

Paradigm
09-02-2014, 10:15 PM
4-4

Meth
09-02-2014, 10:31 PM
Broke Lesnar:

ur Elements loss to Pancake had me in a laughing fit
words can't depict the outcome, but James Foley did a great job dramatically reenacting it
--cool
ever Oneduh why "nik" np's get u pissed? no trollin son
he cooked u to perfection wit them 8 yrs ago...n' even then they were considered overdone
--cooked/overdone. it was ok, idk. didn't really hit for me tbh.
i'll disgrace ur name with a haymaker or basic age flip
n' they'll call this the biggest upset since......the other day when big baby made u rage quit
--haha, this was cool.
BL = UPN troll, there's ur advantage now admire mine
check the bracket seeding, Andres..I replaced Beyond n' still had ur number the entire time
--cool
there's no doubt ur filthy rich, wallets all fat n' swollen
u must be used to them wads of cash.....seein how salty u got after his swag and flow win
--meh.
behind those attention whore pics and every quoted bar
ur just a sad 37 yr old poser who takes somali n' acts more childish than their soldiers are
--damn. this cud have been harsher though
ur BMI's pushing 40 too, BBQ got u dodgin them stairs
feel free to crunch the numbers.............but after 1 u'll be laid up wit mad abdominal tears
--solid
ur out of shape so in all or nothing battles u never sweat
cuz ur known to hand out walking papers..n' thats as close to being athletic as u'll ever get
--ok
seen ur pic and brought some last minute surprises
u want to pink slip, kid?..u look like u pink slipped Kid Capri for his swag, image n' likeness
--lol. they really do look alike tho
u said backpackers are geeks but I question ur scope
if Rhymesayers n' Living Legends is nerd rap..why u stay tellin us ur the best of them both?
--nice
I can tweet u @ASanchez305, right? nik goat as can be
n' I know @AesopRockWins on Twitter......cuz he has 81.9k followers n' u have a total of 3
--could have been better det. lesnar
u tag with younger up-and-comers to cramp their spot
when kung left u lost ur grip..so now ur nervous n' holdin Bags tighter than a ransom drop
--lol
remember that mystery spic Bags admitted he tapped?
well tag partners should be giving each other advice, nik....not gonorrhea, trich, or the clap
--ok.
u got zero charisma, no flair n' u struggle to flip tropes
I was set to use a 'fucked ur wife' bar..but ur a dull faggot n' suck the fun out of dick jokes
--ok
ur precious rep gets no love, this mooch'll bluff n' lose
n' his wife only be laudanum..cuz she tired of coughin up money for his stupid fuckin shoes
--cool/clever

I could use your style to score, then use it to win a trial or court
yours cant convince a little, Broke… that’s why u barely see him & your ex collects child support
--jeez
see, I also know that little fat slob loves eating chilly, no greens
Broke likes to play detective… but has no clue Mrs. Lesnar is used to spilling the beans
--u could have connected this a little better i think
cherish every day cuz it may be the last time u use personals again, clown
Great memories last a lifetime… yours is of your 2 week old son who is around ten now
--christ
we gotta stop this nonsense; this the kinda shit we cannot fathom, fam
your verses don’t just tank… this square has protesters lined up from here to Tiananmen
--ok
u trained lots for this lame drop but it’s in the mechanics of the rhymes u wrote
u tried delivering a powerful message… but it’s like the chain popped on the huffy bike u drove
--eh
Metaphorically speaking; your punches are a joke, why train?
Lesnar never learned how to throw them… while mine are dope like Cain
--seems like filler to me
So u gonna brawl with who? u punch like a girl, so u may wanna call a truce
& if u get caught up in the crossfire… I bet Joan of Arc would show more balls than u
--cool
I got great charm; I get pussy plus a place to crash after a night at the late bar
& if it comes to worst your mom’s my insurance… while u drunk dial Jake from State Farm
--nice
I titty-fuck bitches unlike u who gets slapped & meddled
Let’s be honest, if u crushed any cans… it’s only to sell as scrap & metal
--dope
people expected better comp in a finals, instead it’s slaughter, geek
This sonning is such a slap to your face… it left a burning sensation on your father’s cheek
--nice/simple/well-executed
& Yea, u got the freedom to look-up whomever u want but ya prying is weak
got congress questioning the patriot act… ever since you started using Belichick’s spy gate technique
--cool
Searching threads to post statement lines isn’t impressive; u kidding B?
ya style doesn’t need a touch-up… it’s begging to be molested by someone with creativity
--lol
u stumbled your way here; so thinkin u can win doesn’t make honest sense
either you’re punch drunk… or the Mayor of Whatever USA approved your confidence
--ok
thought u were gonna get lucky in the tag tourney; u the worst, clown
u drug meth down… & apparently he was still under the influence when yall got raped in the first round
--jeeeezus
I beat u at ya own game, Mr inspector so lame; aint it funny son?
Your verses show signs of poor taste… mine are standing over Broke doing the Manziel money one
--ok



Congrats to you guys making it to the finals. This was a nice battle. First off. Broke came with a lot of jabs, he was probably the more consistently sound battler in this bout, to me. He had cool punches throughout his verse, and only 2-4 that really stood out as a miss. He did well. Nik, was less consistent in my opinion. But he was throwing haymakers. He might have missed on 1 or 2 more but that is easily made up by some of the really tight stuff he was dropping. Good battle guys. I held off voting for a while because I couldn't decide what I thought should win; consistency vs. power, jabs vs. hooks. Broke can't when by decision if nik knocks him out in the 10th round though.

V/ ill nik-A

murda sho
09-04-2014, 10:20 AM
Broke

ever Oneduh why "nik" np's get u pissed? no trollin son
he cooked u to perfection wit them 8 yrs ago...n' even then they were considered overdone
i'll disgrace ur name with a haymaker or basic age flip
n' they'll call this the biggest upset since......the other day when big baby made u rage quit
BL = UPN troll, there's ur advantage now admire mine
check the bracket seeding, Andres..I replaced Beyond n' still had ur number the entire time

behind those attention whore pics and every quoted bar
ur just a sad 37 yr old poser who takes somali n' acts more childish than their soldiers are

ur out of shape so in all or nothing battles u never sweat
cuz ur known to hand out walking papers..n' thats as close to being athletic as u'll ever get

u tag with younger up-and-comers to cramp their spot
when kung left u lost ur grip..so now ur nervous n' holdin Bags tighter than a ransom drop


Nik

cherish every day cuz it may be the last time u use personals again, clown
Great memories last a lifetime… yours is of your 2 week old son who is around ten now
we gotta stop this nonsense; this the kinda shit we cannot fathom, fam
your verses don’t just tank… this square has protesters lined up from here to Tiananmen

So u gonna brawl with who? u punch like a girl, so u may wanna call a truce
& if u get caught up in the crossfire… I bet Joan of Arc would show more balls than u
I got great charm; I get pussy plus a place to crash after a night at the late bar
& if it comes to worst your mom’s my insurance… while u drunk dial Jake from State Farm
I titty-fuck bitches unlike u who gets slapped & meddled
Let’s be honest, if u crushed any cans… it’s only to sell as scrap & metal

& Yea, u got the freedom to look-up whomever u want but ya prying is weak
got congress questioning the patriot act… ever since you started using Belichick’s spy gate technique
Searching threads to post statement lines isn’t impressive; u kidding B?
ya style doesn’t need a touch-up… it’s begging to be molested by someone with creativity
u stumbled your way here; so thinkin u can win doesn’t make honest sense
either you’re punch drunk… or the Mayor of Whatever USA approved your confidence


This was a solid battle both came with a couple lines that stung, I got Nik with more quotes here though and line of the battle, Nik was also a bit more consistent in tying his hits together, this was basically a jab fest though only haymaker I saw was the LOTB which was on the side with more quotes anyway... mvgt/Nik

trap
09-04-2014, 04:04 PM
Solid battle. Too many lines, which made for less potent punches. Broke had more misses than Nika, and even those misses were good enough to beat anyone else any day. I thought Brokes best lines were the Aes one and the bar before that. Niks best were the first 6 or so personal lines. I would very slightly edge this to Nik. Good job from both for getting this far.

Vote, Nika.

Paradigm
09-06-2014, 06:16 PM
7-4 ill-nik-A

closing same time as tag, monday.

Paradigm
09-09-2014, 04:57 AM
ill nik-A wins the Summer Classic 7-4. Congratulations.