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Spoken
07-18-2013, 07:09 PM
TOPICAL KEYS TO GREATNESS

Welcome to the 1st Round

Mirror me backwards

15 minutes to write 10 lines

G'Luck and make it dope

CymbiCort
Darth Yoda

CymbiCort
07-18-2013, 07:22 PM
Check

Darth Yoda
07-18-2013, 07:29 PM
oh i have to check

Darth Yoda
07-18-2013, 07:30 PM
yes I already wrote, sorry I am not familiar with the rules.

Darth Yoda
07-18-2013, 07:30 PM
hope you win; your avatar is absolutely ambiguous genius!!

Spoken
07-18-2013, 07:31 PM
no need to check both drop now CymbiCort Darth Yoda

Darth Yoda
07-18-2013, 07:32 PM
Get set, for the next covert chapter, of this schizo synapses
Who stares in the window. At his lymph node, with laughter
In the mirror. With a choking prayer. I had to bend over backwards
Bulldozing, bipolar. Weird. Couldn't see which way the wind was blowing
In the thin coat of this smoke and mirrors. I've been broke, but here
In front of reflection, it's nothing but hectic. I disassemble this devil
Who regularly meddles in my central nervous system
Obsessed. Perturbed. This dictum. Ends in a swirl of schism
Bathing in mud, acting mundane. It's odd. Maybe on Sunday, cut my front facial quad
Speculating on my imagination; just seeing war-paint on his blood stained visage.

CymbiCort
07-18-2013, 07:32 PM
Picture my back on the wall, go nowhere to go nowhere to hide
Reflections of my life going by fast, what a fuckin surprise
i was gonna die, mirror me backwards, survive through life fast
Crime stats increase so it shows how I lived in a grime path,
Piped crack, smokin it up, now god stares at me to give him redemption
:What were you thinking cym?"...I guess this is armageddon, no sweatin
pretendin not to give a fuck what women think ,say or do
rewins a part of my life, pauses when i tell a fag hes the gayest fool
since graded school, I've used jaded tools, to play wit boobs
A fuckin degenerate than don't know better,rapin and hatin jews.

NYCSPITZ
07-18-2013, 07:33 PM
lol cool battle

v/ yoda

Fig
07-18-2013, 07:34 PM
V/Darth Yoda

Spoken
07-18-2013, 07:36 PM
v/ Yoda

Geno
07-18-2013, 07:36 PM
phewwww, ill battle for real. tough to call here. holll'up



man, i thought darth came pretty sick with some complexty in his flow. had some areas that nailed the topic for me and some that didnt.

cymbi killed it all around for me in this round. pretty good shit and stayed on topic nicely with a smooth flow and read. dopest battle yet tbh

v-cymbi

Adonis
07-18-2013, 07:38 PM
Nice

Yoda had a decent concept of hating the mirror. Cync just had humor, nice humor. But not much beyond

V/ Yoda

Coup
07-18-2013, 07:39 PM
v/Darth vader

Spoken
07-18-2013, 07:44 PM
Darth Yoda Wins