KnowP vs. Jilti - Jilti wins

[Meth]

The 1-2 Punch League



Due Monday Midnight Pacific

KnowP jilti

[KnowP]

Yup

[KnowP]

ya girl give me head in park, she feelin this aim, drive
and she dont mind if you put her in gear.... cause yo scronny ass wears the same size

[jilti]

speaking of girlfriends..

u think that fat bitch gets called beautiful like she's attractive
but when people say she Gorges, its to describe her eating habits

[BROKE LESNAR]

Wow great battle. Similar themes. Both came with it. Jil has never done better imo. He is really stepping it up. Only fault I could really find was the pronounciation of the gorges wp. When I say it as gorgeous and gorges they have a different sound. Such as gorjiss and gorjiz. Other than that I would say best battle I seen so far. Knowp I thought was a little bit more creative with the entire concept and misdirection but that isn't taking anything away from Jil.

v-kp

[Certain]

KnowP: The setup was terrible. The punchline was fine, but I don't like generic lines in 1-2 punch leagues. All you have to do is come up with one line about a guy. Make it at least a nameplay if not a personal.

jilti: This was a very cleanly executed generic punch. So the same problem exists, but you handled yourself better.

Vote: jilti

[MKG]

Both had cool wordplay here but IMO jiltis was smoother
And harder hitting so my vote goes to j

[Blanco Bishop]

V jilt. Read smoother nhad a cleaner setup. Thought kp's wording was a little jumbled.

[KnowP]

KnowP: The setup was terrible. The punchline was fine, but I don't like generic lines in 1-2 punch leagues. All you have to do is come up with one line about a guy. Make it at least a nameplay if not a personal.

jilti: This was a very cleanly executed generic punch. So the same problem exists, but you handled yourself better.

Vote: jilti

Lol at the contradiction

[Certain]

Lol at the contradiction

There was none. You both had generic punchlines. Your setup was terrible. His wasn't.

[Notebook]

Nice battle.

KnowP: Your bar could've been far more awesome if you tweaked that first line. I might come off picky, but that "feeling this aim, drive" took away from the bar a little. Filler'ish. But, still, I found this to be a pretty dope punch with some unique wordplay...although, we don't know if Jilti is actually scrawny or not. That's an unverifiable personal, lol; but, other than that, I dig it.

Jilti: These are some clean lines. You didn't slack off with the set-up, and it flowed nicely into the Gorgeous / Gorges flip...giving us a pretty enjoyable bar that's more "in-your-face" than anything.


Vote: Jilti. Much cleaner and hard-hitting. I just sensed more consistency.