No Mercy - Gamble ft Black D & Camp Bell

[Sho Money EMG]

No Mercy ft. Blacketh & Camp Bell

Gamble

No mercy. I'm headed to quitting this searching for a soul journey.. cold turkey
Pure angel dust, making fucks hang it up... That Clyde Frazier touch.. Home jersey.
Madison square.. I'm strapping my gear when them savages near
penmanship equivalent to the wrath of a bear.. Turn your marriage to a crappy affair.
Code name ISIS.. Barbaric acts of violence to ya main homies
Faggots is scared.. Have you gasping for air like Nick Berg and James Foley.
Slashing knives slash crackin spines.. pain is what you'll agonize
We was led here to spread fear like HAMAS an Hesbalah in Palastine.
No respect.. the way we treat conservatives, my peeps be murderous
So learn ya spot, or we'll turn your block to the streets of Ferguson.

.. U heard me bish?!

Black D.

cold turkey on whole wheat, it makes me so thirsty
then i drink a ginger ale and slide up in your hoe dirty
mac 11, 12 gauge, counting to chrome 30
mass murders. eating hamburgers with the whole clergy
write like Leonidas. 3 hunna my flow Xerxes
your main lady giving me top, see....no turvy
to the point when we meet up in public she grows flirty
put that pussy in a figure-4 lock, with no mercy.........

Camp Bell

i'm a cannibal with samoan strength, when these hands go astray...
my fingers start stampeding bars, scheming up egregious thoughts
bleeding, i'll feed a sea of sharks a beating heart then hannibal a brain
i got the stamina of bane, beating PETA cops down to animal remains
..camel toes cant brandish cans campbell own or trample on my name
i'm slinging shots of cancer clones, famine broke, the anecdotes get ate
i hand sell co...but wait, it's ben stiller in a chinchilla, damaged poker face
zoolander mode with my own brand of coke, bout to handsome dope away
it gets realer, i kill killers who kill killers and you killed killa is the big picture
call the man with the brigade, hammers and grenades with the pin missing
ima be the ghost; holding toast and posted with the phantom at the wake
my wind shifting, im in this space on this cloud, raining on the annual parade

This wrath you can't contain... We laughing in your face.

[Sho Money EMG]

dead man, Camp Bell

Links
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=89568http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=89931

[CopyPat]

tbh i only read blacks shit and he Murked. lol awesome.


Edit.
Read all of it now. shit was dope dudes. i dont know shambles or camp. i just was lazy that day and quickly skimmed ha

shamble had that battler kind of structuring with a really emphasized punch at the end of the bar usually, and polished rigid rhyming.. camp had that flow, a little all over the place in terms of content i thought but the flow was redic. interesting trio for sure. seen black a million times. shambs and camps i would like to see more drops from u guys. the actual rhyming was impressive. love reading different new shit. props. really good drop overall.

sorry if i derailed the thread right off the start, wasn't my intention. just literally didnt read the other verses the first time. GOOD SHIT

[Sho Money EMG]

Wtf.

[PancakeBrah]

i liked the bottom two verses

[NYCSPITZ]

black's was dope

[big baby]

The last verse was cool and so was the middle one.

[Sho Money EMG]

Haters. Smfh.

[Sho Money EMG]

Idk y I even bother

[DexLabb]

BLACK MAKES ME WET!!!!!!!

[DexLabb]

can someone explain this Xerxes line tho whats that mean? i know its that big dude from the movie with the big ass dick

[Sho Money EMG]

Ur an idiot.

It wasn't meant to be complex. He wrote that in 5 minutes

[DexLabb]

why did i read that in a jesse pinkman voice from breaking bad lol. blacks like walter white and ur the dumbass crack head

[Rust Cohle]

What's it all mean? No mercy. *takes drag of cigarette* *laughs* I don't know. What is mercy? We're all on a flat line. You're me. It's all the same. You wrote those verse. But through space and time someone else wrote them already. Someone else is going to write them later. It's all the same. *cuts figure of a tree out of a coffe mug*. We're all just a tree. The branches. The leaves. They'll brown and fall sooner or later. There's no mercy in that, if that's what you mean. *looks around bored*. dead man. We're all a dead man. Cold turkey life. Why? It all fizzles out anyway, might as well eat the leaves while you're at it. Everything crushes to a single dot in the time plane. Up is green, blue in north. It's all random. Your personas. A card from the deck assigned at random. So what is it then? dead man's the best, he got that card? Gamble is the faggot, that his? Campbell irrelevant? So arbitrary. You say it's skill based. *smokes* I think that's a crock of shit. Cosmic dust *rubs fingers together* having a little joke for it's carbon. That's all. Thanks for letting this out into the world, for it to die. Not that it matters. *drinks beer*

[NYCSPITZ]

Damn i gotta step up my feeding game after reading rust, classic

[Camp Bell]

LMAOOOO wait....


so, we all purposely overlook shambles verse
then ride blacks dick like he dropped the hottest
shit of 2014? smh. wow. this shit was dope. can
we get real feed please? i hate yall man. good shit
@Black Lyfzin Shambles

[Sho Money EMG]

LMAOOOO wait....


so, we all purposely overlook shambles verse
then ride blacks dick like he dropped the hottest
shit of 2014? smh. wow. this shit was dope. can
we get real feed please? i hate yall man. good shit
@Black Lyfzin Shambles

Hell yeah son dope shit my g

It's expected from these lames

[Kin]

Gamble
flow was dope throughout whole verse...last 4 barz stood out to me...

but pretty solid

Slashing knives slash crackin spines.. pain is what you'll agonize
We was led here to spread fear like HAMAS an Hesbalah in Palastine.
No respect.. the way we treat conservatives, my peeps be murderous
So learn ya spot, or we'll turn your block to the streets of Ferguson.
yessiiir

Black D.


write like Leonidas. 3 hunna my flow Xerxes
your main lady giving me top, see....no turvy

Daaaamn nice style...that barz crazy tho'

nice shit

Camp Bell
camel toes cant brandish cans campbell own or trample on my name
i'm slinging shots of cancer clones, famine broke, the anecdotes get ate
i hand sell co...but wait,
crazy^^^^



ima be the ghost; holding toast and posted with the phantom at the wake
my wind shifting, im in this space on this cloud, raining on the annual parade
Whoa

nice ending too

overall good mix up of styles...one of the better collabz I've seen on here so far...

HoLLa

[Sho Money EMG]

Thanks Kin repppped*

[dead man]

HOF fersher

[Witty]

All 3 did have good verses tbh Gamble surprised me, the content was kinda random and all over the place but the flow was cool and it rhymed well. Then Black's verse was super dope, maybe a little shorter than I would have hoped but everything about it was crazy, from the flow to the rhymes to the wordplay. Camp Bell was dope too, there were some very clever lines in there and again the flow was on point.

This was an awesome read dudes, f'rillz.

[Sho Money EMG]

Appreciate the honesty

[Sho Money EMG]

What's it all mean? No mercy. *takes drag of cigarette* *laughs* I don't know. What is mercy? We're all on a flat line. You're me. It's all the same. You wrote those verse. But through space and time someone else wrote them already. Someone else is going to write them later. It's all the same. *cuts figure of a tree out of a coffe mug*. We're all just a tree. The branches. The leaves. They'll brown and fall sooner or later. There's no mercy in that, if that's what you mean. *looks around bored*. dead man. We're all a dead man. Cold turkey life. Why? It all fizzles out anyway, might as well eat the leaves while you're at it. Everything crushes to a single dot in the time plane. Up is green, blue in north. It's all random. Your personas. A card from the deck assigned at random. So what is it then? dead man's the best, he got that card? Gamble is the faggot, that his? Campbell irrelevant? So arbitrary. You say it's skill based. *smokes* I think that's a crock of shit. Cosmic dust *rubs fingers together* having a little joke for it's carbon. That's all. Thanks for letting this out into the world, for it to die. Not that it matters. *drinks beer*

Godlike post. lMFAO

thanks for gracing us w/ your presence Rust

[Seymour BUTTS]

LMAOOOO wait....


so, we all purposely overlook shambles verse
then ride blacks dick like he dropped the hottest
shit of 2014? smh. wow. this shit was dope. can
we get real feed please? i hate yall man. good shit
@Black Lyfzin Shambles


not really riding. It's just because black's the best writer here and both of you are nobodies. he's smart and drops creative bars, you're both not as smart and drop lame and mediocre bars...

simple

[Sho Money EMG]

And your name is seemore buts

I rest my case

[Camp Bell]

not really riding. It's just because black's the best writer here and both of you are nobodies. he's smart and drops creative bars, you're both not as smart and drop lame and mediocre bars...

simple



oh?...but...umm, he, he...he did the piece with us?

[NYCSPITZ]

uhhh

he's collabed with dozens, wack and dope.

please return to being irrelevant

bitching about feed makes you seem even lamer

[Sho Money EMG]

Camp Bell

Don't even bother my G.

This is what they do. They have no respect for the craft. Black barely even tried most likely was joking around keying that and still if he coughed on this shit they'd say the same shit

[Sho Money EMG]

uhhh

he's collabed with dozens, wack and dope.

please return to being irrelevant

bitching about feed makes you seem even lamer

I'm sure he just wants some real feed homie. Can u blame him?

[Sho Money EMG]

All 3 did have good verses tbh Gamble surprised me, the content was kinda random and all over the place but the flow was cool and it rhymed well. Then Black's verse was super dope, maybe a little shorter than I would have hoped but everything about it was crazy, from the flow to the rhymes to the wordplay. Camp Bell was dope too, there were some very clever lines in there and again the flow was on point.

This was an awesome read dudes, f'rillz.

Perfect example of someone who doesn't let their personal feelings overshadow the craft at hand.
This guy hates me and still gave an honest breakdown
Witty repped for this.

I respect that

[Camp Bell]

uhhh

he's collabed with dozens, wack and dope.

please return to being irrelevant

bitching about feed makes you seem even lamer


never bitched about feed. all of the relevant feed was positive anyway
stop being a dick rider, this shit was dope regardless of who was in it.
and hop off my sack since im so irrelevant. im free to comment as i please.

[Witty]

I don't hate anyone.

[Sho Money EMG]

U coulda fooled me Witty

[NYCSPITZ]

never bitched about feed. all of the relevant feed was positive anyway
stop being a dick rider, this shit was dope regardless of who was in it.
and hop off my sack since im so irrelevant. im free to comment as i please.

I would stop but you're doing it to yourself tbh. You state that I'm a dickrider, then state an opinion of your own verse (inference that urs and gamble's was dope). Then, using one line of your own opinion of yourself as proof, you proceed to tell me to hop off, and that you're free to be a narcissist. Not a good look on yourself dawg. To come clean I only read black's and skimmed (10 seconds each) the other verses, b/c knew they'd be inferior.

[Sho Money EMG]

Ay Nycspits I go way back wit u son lol

I always loved readin ya stuff.

My old name is Bang Em

[Geno]

Good shit. Funny thread

[sral]

What's it all mean? No mercy. *takes drag of cigarette* *laughs* I don't know. What is mercy? We're all on a flat line. You're me. It's all the same. You wrote those verse. But through space and time someone else wrote them already. Someone else is going to write them later. It's all the same. *cuts figure of a tree out of a coffe mug*. We're all just a tree. The branches. The leaves. They'll brown and fall sooner or later. There's no mercy in that, if that's what you mean. *looks around bored*. dead man. We're all a dead man. Cold turkey life. Why? It all fizzles out anyway, might as well eat the leaves while you're at it. Everything crushes to a single dot in the time plane. Up is green, blue in north. It's all random. Your personas. A card from the deck assigned at random. So what is it then? dead man's the best, he got that card? Gamble is the faggot, that his? Campbell irrelevant? So arbitrary. You say it's skill based. *smokes* I think that's a crock of shit. Cosmic dust *rubs fingers together* having a little joke for it's carbon. That's all. Thanks for letting this out into the world, for it to die. Not that it matters. *drinks beer*

roflzzz

get this rep

[Kin]

Ay why gamble.got.time to reply 50 timez.in here but cant comment on other dropz in here....come on son....

[Seymour BUTTS]

Ay Nycspits I go way back wit u son lol

I always loved readin ya stuff.

My old name is Bang Em

Lol word. R w?

[Sho Money EMG]

Ay why gamble.got.time to reply 50 timez.in here but cant comment on other dropz in here....come on son....

I gotchu homie

[NYCSPITZ]

Wat site bro

[Sho Money EMG]

I forget. I been on so many.

I was PrahSpekt, Bang'Em... $ho MoneY

[Sho Money EMG]

Also Rep Atishun

[Sho Money EMG]

http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=90907

Lets get some real feed please.

[Certain]

I'm headed to quitting this searching for a soul journey.. cold turkey

The wording here is really poor. How does one search for a soul journey? A soul journey, in theory, would itself be a search. Also, the -ing verb followed by a gerund is frowned upon because it's not succinct. This phrasing would have worked at least a little better: "I'm headed toward quitting this soul journey cold turkey." But even so, I'm not sure what this means beyond the rhyme. And the rhyme is pretty simple.

Pure angel dust, making fucks hang it up... That Clyde Frazier touch.. Home jersey.

These phrases don't work together. "Pure angel dust" wouldn't make "fucks hang it up." And that has nothing to do with "That Clyde Frazier touch." Furthermore, Walt Frazier wasn't known for his touch as much as his defense and playmaking.

Madison square.. I'm strapping my gear when them savages near
penmanship equivalent to the wrath of a bear.. Turn your marriage to a crappy affair.

Again, the connection between phrases is almost entirely missing. There were four phrases here, each which could have worked, but they didn't feel part of anything. This is directionless.

Code name ISIS.. Barbaric acts of violence to ya main homies
Faggots is scared.. Have you gasping for air like Nick Berg and James Foley.

Do decapitated people gasp for air? I don't get the impression that's the case. Also, Nick Berg wasn't killed by ISIS because ISIS didn't exist.

Slashing knives slash crackin spines.. pain is what you'll agonize
We was led here to spread fear like HAMAS an Hesbalah in Palastine.

Hamas has been in Palestine for decades, but the second line would have worked well if you hadn't used the Hamas reference and instead only went with the Hezbollah reference. I think you're out of your depth here in terms of having a thorough understanding of what you're writing about, though.

No respect.. the way we treat conservatives, my peeps be murderous
So learn ya spot, or we'll turn your block to the streets of Ferguson.

You'll turn my block into a site of police brutality and neighborhood protests? I guess that makes at least a little sense. But it doesn't connect with the idea of murdering conservatives that you led with in the setup.

cold turkey on whole wheat, it makes me so thirsty
then i drink a ginger ale and slide up in your hoe dirty
mac 11, 12 gauge, counting to chrome 30
mass murders. eating hamburgers with the whole clergy
write like Leonidas. 3 hunna my flow Xerxes
your main lady giving me top, see....no turvy
to the point when we meet up in public she grows flirty
put that pussy in a figure-4 lock, with no mercy.........

Good verse, easily the best of this collaboration.

i'm a cannibal with samoan strength, when these hands go astray...
my fingers start stampeding bars, scheming up egregious thoughts
bleeding, i'll feed a sea of sharks a beating heart then hannibal a brain

I think you went a little too long between "hands go astray" and "hannibal a brain," but this was an interesting rhyme scheme to try out.

i got the stamina of bane, beating PETA cops down to animal remains
..camel toes cant brandish cans campbell own or trample on my name

You avoided making sense here.

i'm slinging shots of cancer clones, famine broke, the anecdotes get ate
i hand sell co...but wait, it's ben stiller in a chinchilla, damaged poker face
zoolander mode with my own brand of coke, bout to handsome dope away

The wordplay didnt' work here. You're pushing too aggressively on rhymes. Making sense should be the first priority.

it gets realer, i kill killers who kill killers and you killed killa is the big picture

I see what you tried to do here. It didn't work.

call the man with the brigade, hammers and grenades with the pin missing
ima be the ghost; holding toast and posted with the phantom at the wake
my wind shifting, im in this space on this cloud, raining on the annual parade

You finished well, mostly because your thoughts connected better.

[DexLabb]

i once masterbated while thinking about myself. this is not fictional

[Sho Money EMG]

The wording here is really poor. How does one search for a soul journey? A soul journey, in theory, would itself be a search. Also, the -ing verb followed by a gerund is frowned upon because it's not succinct. This phrasing would have worked at least a little better: "I'm headed toward quitting this soul journey cold turkey." But even so, I'm not sure what this means beyond the rhyme. And the rhyme is pretty simple.



These phrases don't work together. "Pure angel dust" wouldn't make "fucks hang it up." And that has nothing to do with "That Clyde Frazier touch." Furthermore, Walt Frazier wasn't known for his touch as much as his defense and playmaking.



Again, the connection between phrases is almost entirely missing. There were four phrases here, each which could have worked, but they didn't feel part of anything. This is directionless.



Do decapitated people gasp for air? I don't get the impression that's the case. Also, Nick Berg wasn't killed by ISIS because ISIS didn't exist.



Hamas has been in Palestine for decades, but the second line would have worked well if you hadn't used the Hamas reference and instead only went with the Hezbollah reference. I think you're out of your depth here in terms of having a thorough understanding of what you're writing about, though.



You'll turn my block into a site of police brutality and neighborhood protests? I guess that makes at least a little sense. But it doesn't connect with the idea of murdering conservatives that you led with in the setup.



Good verse, easily the best of this collaboration.



I think you went a little too long between "hands go astray" and "hannibal a brain," but this was an interesting rhyme scheme to try out.



You avoided making sense here.



The wordplay didnt' work here. You're pushing too aggressively on rhymes. Making sense should be the first priority.



I see what you tried to do here. It didn't work.



You finished well, mostly because your thoughts connected better.

I see ur one tough egg to crack lol but good looks on the feed, I'm working on it the more recent verse u might like.