THE ANTI-BRAGGADOCIO PIECE (feat. Destroyer)

[Vulgar]

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[Ghost1]

LOOOOOL.

2nd verse was doper to me.....des im geussin....vulg was nice too tho

Wouodve loved to get down on this ....great concept....maybe ill write the remix


Way dead at the very last line about the car runnin out of gas haha

Vulgars schemes were crisper but destroyers content was stronger. Good read regardless.

[veritas]

Dope and funny and awesome.

[DexLabb]

ur guys lines are way too stretched. legit too many syllables. remember what orwell said, the more words you require in a sentence, the less profound your ability to express yourself. shorten them up big time, legit, ight

[dull boy]

I liked this.

[NYCSPITZ]

LOL

Hof j 4 novelty

[CopyPat]

good collab, good post overall. this wasn't really a new idea though. rapping about how shitty you are etc. def doesn't get done enough but this wasn't groundbreaking by any means. nonetheless i thoroughly enjoyed this. smooth read with some obvious humor. solid open mic

[Kin]

damn my 1st comment didn't take gotta do it again half ass

verse 1
There are rubies in Burma that I'll never lay my hands on
today I pledged allegiance to the Sect of Flaming Tampons
if you thought I was a cutthroat renegade you're damn wrong

like how you threw the half-seriousness direction wit' the bar enderz kinda threw me off at 1st but I caught it...made it more entertaining

2nd-
a top nerd, about to champ my fantasy roster & get the last word
but my neighbor caught me skeezin his wi-fi, & changed the password
haha nice

another dope style...lovin' that last bar car outta gas shit...had me wit' that


overall the approach you two took made thiz stand out more then normal..good to see You can switch up the content like thiz an still make it fire

Yesssiiiir

HoLLa

[Exis]

I'm already familiar with Vulgar's work and have only peeped one of Desroyer's joints which I liked so it seemed fittin' to check this out...impressive no doubt.

Both your flows are slick with it, didn't really like one verse more than the other tbh.Thought content was equally good...agree with Copy this isn't a new concept but I liked what y'all did here...tight read all 'round.

Sorry can't quote atm...stay uppity fellas.

[Malachi]

This was cool


I liked the second part the best.

[Certain]

Vulgar hit the rhymes hard and had a very nice scheme that kept in time with its cadence. Some of the lines were a bit too forward, though, not with the tongue-in-cheek style that I think you hit best with the last line of the verse. Some of that might have been the rhyming, like "posterboard full of cat pee." Something better could have happened with that superhero call sign line.

Destroyer's verse was a bit more visual and real in its depiction of a loser, and it worked a bit better on the comedy angle as a result. The last line of his verse also was his standout, but I really liked the gravy stains line, too. The real-life details helped accentuate the loserdom, though, and made it a more enjoyable and funny verse even without the technical display Vulgar showed.

Wouodve loved to get down on this ....great concept....maybe ill write the remix


I'm in.

[theMuzzl3]

damn.

[Plot]

Nice collab.
Des finisher was lulz

[big baby]

solid om, mediocre piece. ran out of gas was the only ok thing, and that was ehhh. sucked imo

[Destroyer]

I'll rape u baby in ur baby ass evil big baby

[Geno]

Bothvyall went in.
Felt a couple of destros li es a little more. Definitely felt a smoother flow on vulgars end. Always with a nice touch. Both had some stand outs thiugh..

Quantum physical was dope

Then the wifi and ran out of gas closer both had me chucklin.

Good shit fellerz

Then

[Adonis]

Vulgar was first verse Obvi?? I enjoyed the long, un orthodox rhymes. I liked the concept in both verses, enjoyed the flow in the first more then then second, yet enjoyed the message of the second more. You two make for a good collab. Similar to Black Hippie. Half is nerdy and lyrically dope, the other half is just gutter and speaks to my soul.

Good shit faggots, I hope you both realize you aren't wining in life.