lonely boy

[DexLabb]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DmqG_35_m-k

I measure my success in the game
by the level of obsession that vets in my veins
theres a part of me lookin' back at my reflection,
and i wish i knew him, but he dosen't believe we’ll get it someday

still, got this passion. its strange, it returns
every few months that i burn, words that fall tongue to the earth.
maybe, they ain’t ready for my psychopathy
or maybe they just don’t want to accept new philosophies,

like, its not the words its the context it came in,
and revelations are lame cause they're not entertainment,
we all jus' wanna sink a bit slower, love a bit stronger
think that we know her, but mann the cuts just get longer,

the drinks jus get fuller n' the drunkenness wanders,
then you blink n’ its over then you fuckin’ go bonkers
how many texts did you send that night? not sure totally,
put your lips on my mine, n' take controlll of me.,

could have won an Oscar how she spoke to me....
then u Bowed so deep that ya' broke the sea,
could have changed the world with ur potency
but between us, we both know that you need love,

she got, a coliseum that the Romans keep
im ur game. unleash the Lion n' stroke the mane
jus' a Decepticon with full Auto ways
so why do i feel we can be the real deal, babyyy?



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[theMuzzl3]

i dig it --- dunno what that youtube beat is all about.

I see you tellin people that they aren't sayin nothing. For your comprehension, that may be true. But, read between the lines and sayin nothing may brew true to you.

[Kin]

Too.many rhymes at the end.....and the middle too...

Every text u sound the same....eh eh eh eh .....eh eh...

Gotta.change it.up theres a reason no one here writez like this.....think about....before u fuck up forever

[DexLabb]

kin dude, i typed that reply cause i thought you would listen. but ur too foolish to listen to anything that will actually help u... thats why u wont go anywhere

[DexLabb]

thanks muzzle, i dig the grain of salt

[Malachi]

i dig it --- dunno what that youtube beat is all about.

I see you tellin people that they aren't sayin nothing. For your comprehension, that may be true. But, read between the lines and sayin nothing may brew true to you.

lol athis faggot droppin shit like this n thinkin he can come shit on other people

[DexLabb]

dont be mad bro. noone of the writers here are actually saying anything worth listening to. my lyrics literally talk to u. say it out loud, ur shits dry and boring. a bunch of misplaced armchair academics (who aren't that smart) trying to sound scholarly. its actually pathetic

[DexLabb]

but why should i waste my energy even trying? fuck i dont know. dont know why i came back to this type of thing

[Kin]

U make.no sense dog...if ur words need to be read outloud then put them on the beat!!!!!....lotta skilled writerz in here...an this is simply not on there level....if u writin like 2 chainz then record it cuz people dont wanna read that shit.....ive told u that before!!!...expect the disrespect...especially wit how u be actin

HoLLa FronT

[DexLabb]

you idiots complicate things and believe there is some value in complexities. there is no value in complexity. its easier to confuse than to be crystal clear. just like ur lyrics. ur one dimensional, always talking bout how tomorrow's going to be better. ur going to wake up in 10 years and write another track like that i bet still waiting. thats what im doing here anyway, waiting and not taking action. part of what you said is right

[Malachi]

im not mad. Its just kinda lame how I came to read a amazing text post by someone whos is obviously the greatest to ever do it.


and then i read shit like this
son i am dissapoint.



lmao girl take control of me.

u wack bitch fuck

[DexLabb]

the girls that you will never ur hands on would dig that line

[Split]

Changed my life

I just pictured Drake rapping this on a bed of record deals and came buckets

You're doing the lords work, Dexlabb

[Split]

my lyrics literally talk to u. armchair academics who aren't that smart


how many texts did you send that night? not sure totally,
put your lips on my mine, girl take controlll of me.
LOL

HAS LITERALLY ANYONE GIVEN YOU PROPS OTHER THAN YOURSELF

LOLING AT YOU WRITING KNOCKOFF BUBBLEGUM RAP IN YOUR INTERWEPS DREAM JOURNAL AND PRETENDING THAT YOURE A CELEBRITY

WHY ARE YOU ON THIS SITE

WHAT DO YOU HAVE TO GAIN

NO ONE IS OR EVER WILL BE FEELING YOUR SHIT


REMOVE YOURSELF FROM THE GENE POOL


ITS A MIRACLE YOUR SHIT DOESNT GET CLOSED ON SIGHT CONSIDERING YOUVE NEVER FORMED AN ORIGINAL THOUGHT LET ALONE LEAVE HELPFUL FEEDBACK

@ OPEN MIC MODS Zen Paradigm

[DexLabb]

woah dude you got time on ur hands?

[DexLabb]

that tantrum tossing high school boy tho, relax

[Split]

ZOOM IN ON THAT ASS LIKE BINOCULARS

[theMuzzl3]

lol athis faggot droppin shit like this n thinkin he can come shit on other people

my path is still loud; and if you heard the racket shit I made, you'd drop to the floor like a maggot, and pronounce a syllable.

I ain't smackin no lips, nor droppin lines to my clips. Negativity will only make you beg to be a tribute to me... just another white dude bein rude on the internet connectivity.

[Split]

ZOOM IN ON THAT ASS






LIKE A SCANNING ELECTRON MICROSCOPE

[Malachi]

my path is still loud; and if you heard the racket shit I made, you'd drop to the floor like a maggot, and pronounce a syllable.

I ain't smackin no lips, nor droppin lines to my clips. Negativity will only make you beg to be a tribute to me... just another white dude bein rude on the internet connectivity.

what..
i wasnt even talking to u lol

[Split]

ZOOM IN ON THAT ASS


LIKE A MAZDA COMMERCIAL

[Kin]

Is it juz me or does anyone else wanna see dexx an gamble argue on here.....that shit would be entertaining....

Or battle...

[DexLabb]

and i already started a #zoominonthatass trend like come on dude. this shit is not simple it takes finesse

[Split]

ZOOM IN ON THAT ASS


LIKE A TELESCOPE

[Split]

ZOOM IN ON THAT ASS



LIKE ZABOOMAFU

[DexLabb]

Zoom in on that ass like zaboomafoo
we headed to the mother fuckin closet with a crew of dudes....

[DexLabb]

but really, i dont know why i come here. yeah i get shitted on and i expected that since day one. but there is always a reason. think cause i followed this school of writing and idealogy behind hip hop music and realized that it was all wrong. now im trying to rewrite that past. but theres no sense in it. have to extract what i can from the past years and use it as a strength

[Zen]

I can't handle no liquor, but these bitches can't handle me.

[Split]

ZOOM IN ON THAT ASS


LIKE CARL WEATHERS

[Pharaohs Army]

this is not the "kind" of song i usually gravitate towards (toward?)
however, with this beat, and those stanzas, yes, absolutely a workable song.
from a technical standpoint personally i felt each stanza was a little bit better than the one prior. the first couple lines are little lame but i think the rest fit very well for the kind of piece that it is.
if lengthened it could keep going on about girl issues or go back to personal reflection, or look forward towards the future... or really where ever you wanted to take it.
girls in particular would dig this track. and im not joking or being condescending i'm serious. giving actual feed here.
the simplicity is good in that it is very evident how it would/could sound.
not exactly of course, but, for readers, damn close to your intentions. if you know what i'm saying.

[Split]

ZOOM IN ON THAT ASS


LIKE DAMON WAYANS WITH RAZOR BLADES

[oats]

ZOOM IN ON THAT ASS



LIKE ZABOOMAFU

tried to rep but couldn't.

[DexLabb]

this is not the "kind" of song i usually gravitate towards (toward?)
however, with this beat, and those stanzas, yes, absolutely a workable song.
from a technical standpoint personally i felt each stanza was a little bit better than the one prior. the first couple lines are little lame but i think the rest fit very well for the kind of piece that it is.
if lengthened it could keep going on about girl issues or go back to personal reflection, or look forward towards the future... or really where ever you wanted to take it.
girls in particular would dig this track. and im not joking or being condescending i'm serious. giving actual feed here.
the simplicity is good in that it is very evident how it would/could sound.
not exactly of course, but, for readers, damn close to your intentions. if you know what i'm saying.

thanks for that man, the first part is a bit disconnected from the second for sure. my style of writing is not really line for line but the verse as a whole.. but i can see exactly what you mean... i have been striving for simplicity for quite a while boiling things down
but when u do that, several parts tend to melt into one another...

thanks again dude

[theMuzzl3]

what..
i wasnt even talking to u lol

I am me is you are him and 'we'.

[DexLabb]

robbin williams reincarnated?^ i agree with everythen muzzle says. i like u man

[big baby]

u not even saying nothing try saying something like nothing say something 4 once wut ur au saying saisay something for once u not saying nothing for once just do it once plz say something not nothing do it once not once do it twice say something u not saying nothing?!

[DexLabb]

im not tryin figure out what u tryna figure out breh, stop tryna figure it out and figure shit out im tired cause u tired cause u aint tired ight?

[DexLabb]

im a philanthropist, organic machinist with the sexyest,
undress-a-bitch, not a pessimist, i see less of him
in your eyes. cause u don't believe in you no more...
it ain't true no more, you know we transformed, cutie

baby...
big baby...
you a cutie for real

[Split]

ZOOM IN ON THAT ASS


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