Round 2: R. Frank vs. 8. trap \\ trap wins via no-show

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Welcome to Round 2!

The Basics

Check-ins are not required but are always appreciated.

Verses are due Thursday, Sept. 4 at 11:59 p.m. PT. THERE ARE NO EXTENSIONS.

Votes are due Sunday, Sept. 7 at 11:59 p.m. PT.

Four votes are required from each competitor. For each missing vote, one vote will be deducted. Post proof of voting here (http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=91956).

Verses may not exceed 10 lines. If the length of a writer's lines is called into question, the standard will be 15 words per line, and verses of more than 150 words will be disqualified or required to be shortened.

Standard writing and voting rules are in effect. No biting. No recycling. Votes must be explained. No editing verses after the first vote or the verses deadline. Any other issues will be resolved using Art of Writing League Season 3 rules as the basis.


Topic


Night Shift


Good luck, Frank and trap.

[trap]

Swore an oath of honor and adorned a coat of armor
Father left when young, I'm leaving a son; scripted karma
Lifes been rough on barren land, the cards they've dealt have been enough
Wife stuck me with harsh demands, now should I call her bluff
But I'm a man of my word and so I say my last goodbyes
This journey sounds absurd but the futures in my eyes
A vision I depict is of the lands beyond my grasp
Jungle, snow, and sand ... castles to expand my wrath
Until then, it's me, myself, and I; dreaming 'pon the wall
A knights shift during the night shift, most boring of them all

[Split]

" 'pon " and "scripted karma" were forced but the rest was really dope.

I liked the regular use of internals without going too heavily on the rhyme schemes, gave it a smooth feel

[Eŋg]

lol. cute twist on the topic. the wording was a bit iffy and i probably didn't like the two instances split said were forced, otherwise i don't have much to complain about. the approach was fresh. it's a shame three of us were no-showed.