View Full Version : Contendership Match: Jilti vs. Camp Bell [Jilti Wins]
The 1-2 Punch League
Due Monday Midnight Pacific
jilti Camp Bell
jilti
09-08-2014, 02:08 AM
im a proven beast in 2 different leagues, gettin offers to join crews constantly
while your still in Training,Camp.. and it took a Gamble just to put u on a team
Camp Bell
09-08-2014, 07:26 PM
my plays wildly commended, this an easy defeat
his scripts hot? the shit stops after wat i kick drop
until jay out of contention like the yeezy release
El Muffin
09-08-2014, 08:03 PM
hmm interesting.
I rly like camps approach but jiltis was creative as fuk. nice line
v jil
good shit tho camp
Certain
09-08-2014, 11:27 PM
jilti: Best line of the week. It was personal, clever and well-worded, and it didn't feel forced.
Camp Bell: OK, I follow the careers of Kanye West and Jay Z quite closely. I don't get it. Maybe you can explain it to me, but at that point, you've already failed.
Vote: jilti
Blanco Bishop
09-09-2014, 03:21 AM
Jilt was solid with the flow n personal.
Camps didn't hit like last week with the three line approach
Third line kinda fell off imo.
Good shit from both tho.
V jill
BROKE LESNAR
09-09-2014, 03:33 AM
I've actually got Camp on this one. I liked the setup the cliffhanger and the execution. Idk if the Training Camp np has been used yet but at this point I'm kind of getting tired of the camp variations concentration/summer/band/training. I know it was a personal but the np that connected it just didn't wow me. The delivery was really choppy too.
v-Camp
J good wording....only.part I thought was rough was if he is still in training camp...he wouldnt be on a team yet...nahimean...but the gamble shit fit wit that..so cool
Camp....felt maybe the filler line coulda been shortened other then that pretty dope name punch...
Close...but J has two seperate nameplays in one punch...thats what edged him for.me
Vote..J
jilti
09-09-2014, 09:05 AM
J good wording....only.part I thought was rough was if he is still in training camp...he wouldnt be on a team yet...nahimean...but the gamble shit fit wit that..so cool
Camp....felt maybe the filler line coulda been shortened other then that pretty dope name punch...
Close...but J has two seperate nameplays in one punch...thats what edged him for.me
Vote..J
Thanks for the vote.
Just wanna explain.. if someones in training camp, they are on a team. example; Broncos training camp, Eagles training camp, etc.
Didn't really likes the three line punch, it can be effective but I didn't like this one tbh
Jails punch was dope and well executed
Vote jil
I liked Camp's line, just hated that it took three lines to get out. Sure, three line punches can work, just not in a 1-2 punch league where the premise is that YOU ONLY GET TWO FUCKING LINES, IDIOT.
Regardless, I liked Jilti's more.
Camp Bell
09-10-2014, 02:46 PM
jilti got this, good shit bro. thanks for the votes
jilti
09-10-2014, 03:08 PM
Thanks Camp Bell. Same to you
jilti: Best line of the week. It was personal, clever and well-worded, and it didn't feel forced.
Camp Bell: OK, I follow the careers of Kanye West and Jay Z quite closely. I don't get it. Maybe you can explain it to me, but at that point, you've already failed.
Vote: jilti
It was a shoe punch.
Certain
09-11-2014, 06:58 PM
It was a shoe punch.
Then what does Jay have to do with it?
Then what does Jay have to do with it?
Jordan.
Certain
09-11-2014, 07:07 PM
And Jordans were out of contention?
Kick drop.
And after the Yeezys came out, yes...until the next Jordans launch.
Stop asking me questions.
Jilti won anyway.
KnowP
09-12-2014, 10:05 PM
Camp was a bit too wordy n indirect to me while jil has the good personal/word play.
Vote jil
Destroyer
09-13-2014, 11:17 AM
I got camp
jiltis was just too easy of a play
v/cb
RudeBoy
09-14-2014, 09:42 AM
Both were coo but jil hit harder imo
V/jil
J got this.
Camp almost got it but the personal always wins if it's tied in execution
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