theMuzzl3 vs jilti - JILTI WINS

[jilti]

10 lines due this weekend theMuzzl3
Check in

[theMuzzl3]

10 lines due this weekend theMuzzl3
Check in

check

[theMuzzl3]

Wanna tussle wit da muscular lyrics of theMuzzl3? Foo, u be eatin my rhymes like truffles,
while baffling over my subtle glee: of me decomposing ur words, into oblivion, G.
Don't plee to me; cuz I won't mumble, and dis Fuckin rumble inside me must stay Muzzled.
Consequensingly, I'm amused -- as I trifle ur style, u b struggling to find ur delirious equilibrium.

Chuckle wit guts as my lines hustle u, in2 obvilvin & u b reshufflin ur muddled puddles of rhymes.
Squeel & struggle, refine as u see passed da Idiom, don't point da mussel of yo gat at theMuzzl3;
cuz it'll backfire an u'll fumble, stumbling & crumpling into a clump a dirty bundle (lyrical slump)..
My phrases will bundle u up menacingly, attempt to stick u, head 1st: in a gum-ball machine,

but fuck it.. u got stuck. Whats dat repelling smell? Must have got scared & taken a dumping.
Chump, instead of goin all out wit this bout, lets just hug & cuddle. I Humbly represent Macro Fi.

[jilti]

just got off work and saw his verse.. damn that's a lot of words
not a solid structure or Set-up, but woulda helped to start off with one first
so Paradigm close this thread. he's in wayy over his head
i asked for 10 lines, he went OM and posted a whole story instead
shit bored me to death. three-quarters of it was a snore fest
the other fourth read so bad my phone app tried performin tests to decode it
must be tone deaf the way ur rhyme patterns makes no sense
but if dude hard of hearing now, wait til his ear Canal drowns when he's thrown in
we're grown men. lets talk it out cuz its all about showing respect
plus your a texter newbs can Model themselves after, since u Pose no threat

[Split]

V/Jilti. Stayed in the line limit, verse had actual bite to it, made sense in general

[Paradigm]

make it stop.

stop freeposting.............. only posts after verses should be votes or a mods with updating the score.

[Clayray]

V - Jillti. No expo needed

[jilti]

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=91965

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=91966

[theMuzzl3]

jilti is obviously a new member who has already been on this forum as another name & has backing up of his homies.