Gazette vs. CymbiCort - OPEN FOR VOTES

[~RustyGunZ~]

The Ultimate Writer II
The Premier Tutoring Tournament

Gazette CymbiCort

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday,
August 1st, 2013 @ 11:59 PM PST.
Check Ins are due Tuesday, July 30th , 2013 @ 11:59 PM PST
Voting ends Sunday, August 4th, 11:59 PM PST.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are normally 24 hours
(unless requested otherwise, that is),
can be no longer than 48 hours
and have to be granted by your opponent.



Line Limit:

Min. = 10 lines
Max. = 16 lines
The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. If no line agreement is made you CANNOT go above 16 lines


General Rules:

1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
means you will disqualified.
A check in IS mandatory.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.



THIS WEEK IS NAMEPLAY WEEK, YOU MUST INCLUDE 3 NAMEPLAYS IN YOUR VERSE.

[Gazette]

check, g'luck, 10 lines?

[CymbiCort]

Check Gazette ...10's cool.

[CymbiCort]

Second guessin then steppin but i dont blame this pussy for not wantin to fuck wit it...
I'll bring down GAZ so Fast, CNN will falsely report that Russias auto industry plummeted
Lied n said hes too good for ultimate writer, now watch me kill this lil ass prank
Cuz Only thing hes good at is makin us say no homo everytime we need to fill gas tanks
This queer ain't harmin me cuz his video game steeze is sweeter than r & B
Since Gaz is known to play wit dolls until they come alive in super mario rpg
the way he tried dodgin me like eharmony chicks with extreme sensitivity
showed gaz wouldn't even be useful to section 8 residents payin for electricity
funny how your boxing skills are so bad n in this ring you have no chance
You'll never inspire Ali to fight again just cuz u won a rematch with slow hands

[Gazette]

bleh, quicky

shouldn't be too long before this cunt sees he's utter shit
when we "Clash, Cymb'll" get dropped like clumsy percussionists
ya too dumb for this, the fella's proved he's hella stupid
attestin' true shit, i'm facin' a Cort, but I aint the one bein' executed
my text is lucid, anyone readin' can see that ive wrecked ock
step off, cus I got more chance of a "fight, Cym" playin' UFC on my Xbox
dead-lock, your past battles confirm that this is curtains for ya
Rhode carried you to the L, n it doesn't look like u've turned a corner
certain slaughter, when u take dick you try n force in the pork
and you still choose to get shafted ... even when the balls in ya Cort

[Decibel]

Gazette took this very easily in my opinion. More direct punches and harder hits. Cym needs to up his punches majorly. Flow was choppy to.

[Spoken]

Cymbi- u stayed in one angle with his name tbh... Felt u were stuck in a sense... Some of ya bars were stretched as fuck to.... Cool concepts but nothing really connected thoroughly... The CNN bar was nice just better wording and it would have killed. The rest were misses, the rpg would have been good if better thought into how it would play out but that's it

Gaz- nice cymb'll flip seen many but this hit nice some nice hits but very mild mostly. The fight sim was a nice flip hope most don't let thy bar fly over the heads... But yeah your misses still hit and it was more cleaner and consistent

Mvgt: Gaz

[Gazette]

thanks for the votes

[Geno]

shit looking jive suspect in here (o.0)

[Animosi T]

Cym: Punches weren't hard hitting. You only used "Gaz" as a nameplay, you could've done much more. Kind of a boring verse from you, no real stand out lines.

Gaz- Some good wordplay, punches were clever and for a quick key this was pretty good.

MVGT: Gaz

[TheEnd]

Cy- ur lines came off more like statements eh nothing really hit ur wording was off n long, nothing jumped out but actually throw punches

Gaz- u had a better overall verse had some coo flip n u actually threw punches that connected

V/ Gaz

[God Of War]

Second guessin then steppin but i dont blame this pussy for not wantin to fuck wit it...
I'll bring down GAZ so Fast, CNN will falsely report that Russias auto industry plummeted
this was coo, ur a bit wordy but its nice

Lied n said hes too good for ultimate writer, now watch me kill this lil ass prank
Cuz Only thing hes good at is makin us say no homo everytime we need to fill gas tanks
didnt really get this, i mean i get the idea but dont like the concept to much and i think ur wording should be worked on

This queer ain't harmin me cuz his video game steeze is sweeter than r & B
Since Gaz is known to play wit dolls until they come alive in super mario rpg
think the concept is a stretch and ur wording is cool on this one, still think ur concepts is ok but it seems u got the potential to lay fire down dont know why u aint

the way he tried dodgin me like eharmony chicks with extreme sensitivity
showed gaz wouldn't even be useful to section 8 residents payin for electricity
naw man the set up is meh and the bar is weak and simple]/b]

funny how your boxing skills are so bad n in this ring you have no chance
You'll never inspire Ali to fight again just cuz u won a rematch with slow hands
[b]i can see where uw as going with this and i think u could of made it really powerful but ur wording was an issue, and the n n part hurt ur set up


vs


shouldn't be too long before this cunt sees he's utter shit
when we "Clash, Cymb'll" get dropped like clumsy percussionists
nice

ya too dumb for this, the fella's proved he's hella stupid
attestin' true shit, i'm facin' a Cort, but I aint the one bein' executed
ok

my text is lucid, anyone readin' can see that ive wrecked ock
step off, cus I got more chance of a "fight, Cym" playin' UFC on my Xbox
come on man u shouldnt be in this um tourney

dead-lock, your past battles confirm that this is curtains for ya
Rhode carried you to the L, n it doesn't look like u've turned a corner
man

certain slaughter, when u take dick you try n force in the pork
and you still choose to get shafted ... even when the balls in ya Cort
dont like it




gazette shouldnt be in this, sik shouldnt be in it and neither should gazette

v/gazette

[Flow]

Lol gazette killed this - total White wash

Vote gaz

[SiK]

Cym...

I liked the opener....You seem to have fresh concepts but ya wording is hurting you.

Vs


Gaz...

Opener was fresh...simple yet effective so nice nameplay...UFC was good and the L/Turn the corner was a nice jab

V..Gazette