Windu Tuako vs Profit - PROFIT WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Newbie Tourney VII

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Friday,
September 12th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
Check Ins are due WEDNESDAY, Sept 10t 2014
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours


Line Limit:

Min. = 8 lines
Max. = 16 lines
Limit MUST be agreed upon


General Rules:

First to 5, Win by 2, 3-0=KO
1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
means you will be disqualified.
A check in ISmandatory.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.


Windu Tuako Profit

[Clayray]

Checkmate.

10 lines?

Lmk

[Window Taco]

Check.

10 lines is cool.

[Sharp]

Profit's verse

Got a gun but not the type to pull it
You'll die jest swallowing these shells lets see you bite the bullet..!
You at raves with Muzzle tryna move E's but no ones heard of y'all
Think you dishin that work till I cut your service off!
& with girls he gets no love, they don't know him
even if he had a thousand fans they wouldn't blow wind!
This fake fuck, I'm playin with a pussy like a vibrater
When it comes to his verses, nobody gets W like a tiebreaker!
Hi hater, If I know wind-owes me money it's his ass dawg
Throw rocks at this square nigga breakin' his glass jaw!

[Window Taco]

"I hope to win but if not its a learning experience. Good luck to everyone. Lets all show out this tourny" - Profit

"Yo Sharp Nine if Muzzles going to be in this I think someone needs to educate him on how to write a battle verse.
Lets say they agree for 8 lines, he's gonna write an obnoxious amount and go over. So theMuzzl3 it goes like this
(1)blah blah blah blah blah blah end rhyme...." - Profit


Taking a learning experience 'personal' really shouldn't be ya game plan!/
Cuz u whined about lines coming from theMuzzl3 like Bane fans!!/
You asked for this Net loss when u chose ya name and avy/ (Mike Tyson avy)
So since I'm taking you from Profit to in the red let me thank you badly!/
Even if you give each concept your very best its losing/
We see ya text as shit due to retarded executions!/
Numbers omit details so trusting ya record's a no no then/
So you should've did this battle like ya only victory and no showed Win!/ (Windu)
I know he's mad cuz he's such a piece of cake that I'm EZ baking!/
Now watch Prof have a period like teacher abbreviations!!/

[jilti]

Got a gun but not the type to pull it
You'll die jest swallowing these shells lets see you bite the bullet..!
You at raves with Muzzle tryna move E's but no ones heard of y'all
Think you dishin that work till I cut your service off!
This fake fuck, I'm playin with a pussy like a vibrater
When it comes to his verses, nobody gets W like a tiebreaker!
Hi hater, If I know wind-owes me money it's his ass dawg
Throw rocks at this square nigga breakin' his glass jaw!

Vs

Taking a learning experience 'personal' really shouldn't be ya game plan!/
Cuz u whined about lines coming from theMuzzl3 like Bane fans
I know he's mad cuz he's such a piece of cake that I'm EZ baking!/
Now watch Prof have a period like teacher abbreviations!!/



Good lines from both. Wind had a couple of misses while Profit had no real discernable miss
Vote-Profit
________________

[Allen Knight]

This fake fuck, I'm playin with a pussy like a vibrater
When it comes to his verses, nobody gets W like a tiebreaker!

vs

Taking a learning experience 'personal' really shouldn't be ya game plan!/
Cuz u whined about lines coming from theMuzzl3 like Bane fans
I know he's mad cuz he's such a piece of cake that I'm EZ baking!/
Now watch Prof have a period like teacher abbreviations!!/


v/windu, didnt like this battle tbh nothing really stood out i think prof had lotb
but wasnt enough win had one more ok bar.

[Camp Bell]

You at raves with Muzzle tryna move E's but no ones heard of y'all
Think you dishin that work till I cut your service off!
& with girls he gets no love, they don't know him
even if he had a thousand fans they wouldn't blow wind!
This fake fuck, I'm playin with a pussy like a vibrater
When it comes to his verses, nobody gets W like a tiebreaker!
Hi hater, If I know wind-owes me money it's his ass dawg
Throw rocks at this square nigga breakin' his glass jaw!

vs

Taking a learning experience 'personal' really shouldn't be ya game plan!/
Cuz u whined about lines coming from theMuzzl3 like Bane fans!!/
You asked for this Net loss when u chose ya name and avy/ (Mike Tyson avy)
So since I'm taking you from Profit to in the red let me thank you badly!/
Even if you give each concept your very best its losing/
We see ya text as shit due to retarded executions!/




ok battle here, i thought profit had a clean, consistent
verse. his punches hit every time, "service off" was LOTB.
thought win had some ok lines but his wording was weak
like, thank you badly and the muzzle/bane fan lines didnt
hit cuz they both were worded badly.


vote: profit

[Plot]

& with girls he gets no love, they don't know him
even if he had a thousand fans they wouldn't blow wind!
This fake fuck, I'm playin with a pussy like a vibrater
When it comes to his verses, nobody gets W like a tiebreaker!

I think Profit got this one.
Didn't like Widdus verse much 'cept for the 'no show win' line.
Both were pretty mediocre but I think Profit brought a little more.

[Red Soldier]

Got a gun but not the type to pull it
You'll die jest swallowing these shells lets see you bite the bullet..!
NAH
You at raves with Muzzle tryna move E's but no ones heard of y'all
Think you dishin that work till I cut your service off!
HAD POTENTIAL
& with girls he gets no love, they don't know him
even if he had a thousand fans they wouldn't blow wind!
NAH
This fake fuck, I'm playin with a pussy like a vibrater
When it comes to his verses, nobody gets W like a tiebreaker!
OKISH
Hi hater, If I know wind-owes me money it's his ass dawg
Throw rocks at this square nigga breakin' his glass jaw!
NOT FEELING THIS

VS

Taking a learning experience 'personal' really shouldn't be ya game plan!/
Cuz u whined about lines coming from theMuzzl3 like Bane fans!!/
NAH, WORDED POORLY AS WELL
You asked for this Net loss when u chose ya name and avy/ (Mike Tyson avy)
So since I'm taking you from Profit to in the red let me thank you badly!/
NOPE
Even if you give each concept your very best its losing/
We see ya text as shit due to retarded executions!/
IRONY LOL, BUT STATEMENTISH
Numbers omit details so trusting ya record's a no no then/
So you should've did this battle like ya only victory and no showed Win!/
COOL
I know he's mad cuz he's such a piece of cake that I'm EZ baking!/
Now watch Prof have a period like teacher abbreviations!!/
NOPE

Both were kinda rough but I'll give the edge to profit for having harder shots.

Vote: Profit

[PotatoSackLegend]

Got a gun but not the type to pull it
You'll die jest swallowing these shells lets see you bite the bullet..!
You at raves with Muzzle tryna move E's but no ones heard of y'all
Think you dishin that work till I cut your service off!
& with girls he gets no love, they don't know him
even if he had a thousand fans they wouldn't blow wind!
This fake fuck, I'm playin with a pussy like a vibrater
When it comes to his verses, nobody gets W like a tiebreaker!
Hi hater, If I know wind-owes me money it's his ass dawg
Throw rocks at this square nigga breakin' his glass jaw!

1st line im barely seeing the creativity here

2nd was alright was worded ok. 3rd is weak 4th is no and 5th is a huge no

windu




Taking a learning experience 'personal' really shouldn't be ya game plan!/
Cuz u whined about lines coming from theMuzzl3 like Bane fans!!/
You asked for this Net loss when u chose ya name and avy/ (Mike Tyson avy)
So since I'm taking you from Profit to in the red let me thank you badly!/
Even if you give each concept your very best its losing/
We see ya text as shit due to retarded executions!/
Numbers omit details so trusting ya record's a no no then/
So you should've did this battle like ya only victory and no showed Win!/ (Windu)
I know he's mad cuz he's such a piece of cake that I'm EZ baking!/
Now watch Prof have a period like teacher abbreviations!!/

1st was ehh 2nd was no 3rd was no 4th was iight and 5th was ok too
got windu takin it barely with more clever attempts at punchlines and actual creativity

[Unfukwitable]

Nothing

vs.

I know he's mad cuz he's such a piece of cake that I'm EZ baking!/
Now watch Prof have a period like teacher abbreviations!!

ehh this wasn't a strong battle in my opinion but the winner came more personal and had better misses and connections.. v/ Windu

[theMuzzl3]

Profit's verse

Got a gun but not the type to pull it
You'll die jest swallowing these shells lets see you bite the bullet..!
You at raves with Muzzle tryna move E's but no ones heard of y'all
Think you dishin that work till I cut your service off!
& with girls he gets no love, they don't know him
even if he had a thousand fans they wouldn't blow wind!
This fake fuck, I'm playin with a pussy like a vibrater
When it comes to his verses, nobody gets W like a tiebreaker!
Hi hater, If I know wind-owes me money it's his ass dawg
Throw rocks at this square nigga breakin' his glass jaw!

Every line was good. Vibrater is spelled "vibrator", to send any criticism, but everything in his verse was good and fairly even.


Taking a learning experience 'personal' really shouldn't be ya game plan!/
Cuz u whined about lines coming from theMuzzl3 like Bane fans!!/
You asked for this Net loss when u chose ya name and avy/ (Mike Tyson avy)
So since I'm taking you from Profit to in the red let me thank you badly!/
Even if you give each concept your very best its losing/
We see ya text as shit due to retarded executions!/
Numbers omit details so trusting ya record's a no no then/
So you should've did this battle like ya only victory and no showed Win!/ (Windu)
I know he's mad cuz he's such a piece of cake that I'm EZ baking!/
Now watch Prof have a period like teacher abbreviations!!/

Nice try. I like how you also mentioned me. I'm not exactly sure why all the "/" thingies are in there. You did a decent job, but over all:

/v Profit

[Tic]

& with girls he gets no love, they don't know him
even if he had a thousand fans they wouldn't blow wind!
This fake fuck, I'm playin with a pussy like a vibrater
When it comes to his verses, nobody gets W like a tiebreaker!

vs.

Taking a learning experience 'personal' really shouldn't be ya game plan!/
Cuz u whined about lines coming from theMuzzl3 like Bane fans!!/

Profit had one more quote and IMO, just had better concepts that he was able to execute.

V/ Profit

[Kill Spree]

& with girls he gets no love, they don't know him
even if he had a thousand fans they wouldn't blow wind!
This fake fuck, I'm playin with a pussy like a vibrater
When it comes to his verses, nobody gets W like a tiebreaker!

vs.

Taking a learning experience 'personal' really shouldn't be ya game plan!/
Cuz u whined about lines coming from theMuzzl3 like Bane fans!!/

This was close. Both had some misses but I felt profit had the smoother wording in his bars. Win had dope concepts but a few fell short

V/ Profit