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Picture
07-31-2013, 03:11 PM
10 lines
due today

...the Nagger
07-31-2013, 04:35 PM
Im blessed wit gettin green dog im gettn guac'
Ya chick see me roll in' paper.. youd almost think i didnt make her gimmie Top
Thats nacho bitch.
We hit ya weed, then grab that cheese after we fold ya chick
See we line up ya chips... - after we clean the bowl, & dip.
I get the Scoop on where duke Lays.. fuck them phone ads when i meet ya
Yall gonn get to see a Picture underwater, without that new Galaxy feature.
I'll beat u til u chilli over that food. U dont eat off my Plate, soldier..
& if we argue over that base, ball.. or i'll Bat ya face off ya shoulders
This is where the long scheme endin. Yall aint catch it anyway.
Only time u around a win is if u picture me in it.

Picture
07-31-2013, 06:36 PM
Tryna act hard, your name shows you lying so drop it
Munster? That just mean you be hiding in the closet
I devour munster like energy drink and leave him as dust
One thrust I stick my blade in this pussy, no beating around the bush
I obliterate you before you can stop and think
My pengame is your cryptonite, Munsters ink
I read up on your post and have to say that it was lame
Your post make people pause like the beggining of your name
Ill turn your rhyme schemes into crime scenes and you wont look like a man
Ill put three cuts in munster like the side of the can

...the Nagger
07-31-2013, 07:48 PM
Can I change "meet u" to "meet ya"?

Sho Money EMG
07-31-2013, 09:07 PM
Wooo bowl and dip... Munster kilt it here clearly one sided battled

Mvgt - Munster

Sharp
07-31-2013, 10:46 PM
Can I change "meet u" to "meet ya"?
got you

also imma need two links from you and Picture

Lost in Thought
08-01-2013, 01:57 AM
nether had the awe factor in my opinion on this... hard to say.

Both had the same impact when it came to punches

So i guess ill go with flow and multi's


give it to munster

StarFaggot
08-01-2013, 01:13 PM
Im blessed wit gettin green dog im gettn guac'
Ya chick see me roll in' paper.. youd almost think i didnt make her gimmie Top
nigga what?
Thats nacho bitch.
We hit ya weed, then grab that cheese after we fold ya chick
See we line up ya chips... - after we clean the bowl, & dip.
did you just say that's Nacho bitch? Kill ya self this bar was awful
I get the Scoop on where duke Lays.. fuck them phone ads when i meet ya
Yall gonn get to see a Picture underwater, without that new Galaxy feature.
dope
I'll beat u til u chilli over that food. U dont eat off my Plate, soldier..
& if we argue over that base, ball.. or i'll Bat ya face off ya shoulders
nigga were you hungry writing this? This bar is shit
This is where the long scheme endin. Yall aint catch it anyway.
Only time u around a win is if u picture me in it
you couldn't think of a better name play than that? Kill ya self
.


Tryna act hard, your name shows you lying so drop it
Munster? That just mean you be hiding in the closet
good nameplay
I devour munster like energy drink and leave him as dust
One thrust I stick my blade in this pussy, no beating around the bush
no
I obliterate you before you can stop and think
My pengame is your cryptonite, Munsters ink
nah
I read up on your post and have to say that it was lame
Your post make people pause like the beggining of your name
coo concept
Ill turn your rhyme schemes into crime scenes and you wont look like a man
Ill put three cuts in munster like the side of the can
niiiiice... Seen similar wp but this is a nameplay too


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...the Nagger
08-01-2013, 01:21 PM
Tryna act hard, your name shows you lying so drop it
Munster? That just mean you be hiding in the closet
good nameplay
I devour munster like energy drink and leave him as dust
One thrust I stick my blade in this pussy, no beating around the bush
no
I obliterate you before you can stop and think
My pengame is your cryptonite, Munsters ink
nah
I read up on your post and have to say that it was lame
Your post make people pause like the beggining of your name
coo concept
Ill turn your rhyme schemes into crime scenes and you wont look like a man
Ill put three cuts in munster like the side of the can
niiiiice... Seen similar wp but this is a nameplay too

be honest, do you really understand the second bar for what it is?

PancakeBrah
08-03-2013, 01:28 PM
I get the Scoop on where duke Lays.. fuck them phone ads when i meet ya
Yall gonn get to see a Picture underwater, without that new Galaxy feature.
I'll beat u til u chilli over that food. U dont eat off my Plate, soldier..
& if we argue over that base, ball.. or i'll Bat ya face off ya shoulders

What's cool about your style is even if I don't enjoy a line as punch, they flow well and there's always something going on wordplay wise. Granted, sometimes the wordplay can be corny and lame if your heart wasn't in the verse like in this case. A lot of that mexican food scheme was just filler level stuff. The first bar I quoted was legitimately dope, second line had a lot of swagger to it. The chips/bow/dip idea was a borderline quotable.

vs.

Ill turn your rhyme schemes into crime scenes and you wont look like a man
Ill put three cuts in munster like the side of the can

Good line. Set up was too wordy, and the rhyme was forced and corny. But I liked the wordplay. You had a lot of concepts thought could have been good, specifically the opener and monster's inc. But your wording and execution need work, they basically read like you thought of the concept, used filler, and typed the concept in. Potential.

v/munster

Sharp
08-04-2013, 03:38 AM
Aero did you want to vote for either guy?

and ...the Munster can i get two voting links

StarFaggot
08-04-2013, 10:36 AM
Edited

Sharp
08-14-2013, 11:24 PM
3-1 Munster

KwaL!ty
08-15-2013, 10:46 AM
I get the Scoop on where duke Lays.. fuck them phone ads when i meet ya
Yall gonn get to see a Picture underwater, without that new Galaxy feature.

vs

Ill turn your rhyme schemes into crime scenes and you wont look like a man
Ill put three cuts in munster like the side of the can



Vote- Munster just a better read, both need to un-rustify or some shit lol.

Allen Knight
08-16-2013, 09:48 AM
Chip
Galaxy

Vs

3 cuts in munster

V/ eddie, pic had all played ass bars monsters ink ,hide in the closet i seen done to death but atleast flipped fresh the 3 cuts was good but coulda been dope worded diff, eddie had those 2 bars that were cool an he was less played imo.

KwaL!ty
08-16-2013, 11:12 AM
closed until 2 vote links.

Decibel
08-28-2013, 02:50 AM
...the Munster

Please provide 2 voting links so this can be closed as current vote tally is 5-1 in your favor.

Decibel
09-16-2013, 02:25 AM
CLOSED due to no links... PM me if want closed.