Packed Graves vs. Tomb [Packed Graves Wins]

[BROKE LESNAR]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6t2hlWpird8

Packed Graves vs. Tomb

Packed Graves

PG is a welcomed addition to the league. He hails from RB and last night champed the Golden Gloves keystyle tournament. No stranger to 1-2 Punch Leagues, PG has shown marked improvement in his battles and his progression is admirable.

Tomb

Tomb is a great guy.

Due Monday 12am PST

[Tomb]

The great guy is here

[Packed Graves]

Packed Graves Vs Tomb aka your funeral awaits.




-btw check.

Tomb dont forget to post.

[Packed Graves]

you can't take a stab at me, so why would this kid bother
the battle just isn't going to Pan out for you, but I promise youll leave like his father

[Tomb]

Seen ur "new style" on RB, learned from a University? Shit not servin me
When it's Gallaudet! Payin them student loans resulted into his tag semis entry

[Destroyer]

I got graves here
I think tomb just tried to do too much

[Window Taco]

I feel Tomb had the stronger and more entertaining bar easily. Graves had a very played concept in the "leave as fathers do" concept and it was smh worthy, and it was merely a braggadocio threat and not really a landing punch IMO. Tomb on the other hand had an effective personal punch that was fresher and direct. His only problem was the line was a little too wordy.

V/ Tomb

[El Muffin]

v/Graves


I get what tomb was goin 4..thought the execution was forced

gimme a pronounciation when u see this nxt time

mk sure im judging right

packed was decent

[theMuzzl3]

you can't take a stab at me, so why would this kid bother
the battle just isn't going to Pan out for you, but I promise youll leave like his father

I'm not sure if "this brother" was supposed to be "his brother… or if "his father" was supposed to be "your father". The over-all punch was good, but the structure was lacking. The 2nd line should have come closer to matching the length of the 2nd line. The content was good, though.

Seen ur "new style" on RB, learned from a University? Shit not servin me
When it's Gallaudet! Payin them student loans resulted into his tag semis entry

I'm not sure what RB is, but I'm goon assume its a rap forums… internet slang told me it meant "random boner", lol. Had to look up gallaudet, and I love it when I learn new words. The content was good, it flowed decently.

This was close, but I'm gonna:

/v Tomb

[Kin]

Graves....solid...I followed that shit too...relevant punch plus dope flip wit it

Tomb...u tryna do a lot wit only 2 bars....creative no doubt....juz tryna force the punch out...

Vote P.G...13

[jilti]

ok punch vs good attempt
mvgt PG

[BROKE LESNAR]

I think PG did a better job of executing a relevent concept. He had a smooth delivery while Tomb had a potentially great personal but his execution hurt his bar alot. I'll do complete breakdowns next week.

v-PG

[Kill Spree]

Pg's bar was cool. Deff clever and was executed smoothly. I liked tombs idea but felt it wasn't set up well tbh.

Vote pg

[Camp Bell]

looks like tomb lost his wording here.
it started cool but he fell off with very
bad over wording with no rhyme.


vote: Packed Graves

[Blanco Bishop]

Packed was crisper.

Tom's wording was a lil jumbled.

V packed

[murda sho]

wordplay nowadays is hard to do unless it sounds EXACTLY like the word sounds and makes sense both ways... anyway, both had okay bars but Packed had a little more impact.. slightly

v: packed

[MKG]

PGs line was solid
Tomb bad a good concept w/ the wp
But it came out choppy
Vote packed

[El Muffin]

wordplay nowadays is hard to do unless it sounds EXACTLY like the word sounds and makes sense both ways... anyway, both had okay bars but Packed had a little more impact.. slightly

v: packed


nah ion wanna hear that shit. niggas back on that forced shit all day.

the ppl who were crusading for perfection in wp now are the main culprits smfh

[murda sho]

Im with you Muff... but believe me i've lost battles cause my wp didn't sound exactly like how a professor would read the word even though I don't talk anything like that

shit it happened to me in the Summer Classic

[BROKE LESNAR]

Im with you Muff... but believe me i've lost battles cause my wp didn't sound exactly like how a professor would read the word even though I don't talk anything like that

shit it happened to me in the Summer Classic

lol I had ppl read "laudanum" and think the wordplay was "loading um". It was "laudin(g) (th)em'", pronounced and used precisely as you would say it/define it.