Round 2: Bags vs. Utmost {Bags wins by NS}

[God Of War]

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This Round Consists Of your ability to write stories.
Stories have been a part of hip hop and writing since time began
your goal? out write your opponent!


max lines =30
CHECK INS DUE BY SATURDAY
VERSES DUE -aug 5th

[God Of War]

Bags Utmost check in

[Ghost1]

Goin 30

[Utmost]

word.

[Meth]

Bags Utmost

[Utmost]

lol kinda forgot this was due today. ext?

[God Of War]

lol kinda forgot this was due today. ext?

EXT GRANTED

[Ghost1]

Wtf i thought this was due thursday!?!?

Im not gonna be able.to.drop till tomorrow

[Meth]

It is tomorrow for you eastern folk.

[God Of War]

Wtf i thought this was due thursday!?!?

Im not gonna be able.to.drop till tomorrow

tomoroe it is for you both

Utmost Bags drop yo

[Utmost]

"Stiletto to the Back"


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Was much later than I anticipated, 8 past 12 or a bit more probably
sleepily sauntered thru the cinema lobby, an usher yawned quiet
while guiding us to the side exit.. pushed the door on autopilot
peered out to the seedy city hub, rifled my pockets n' flicked the ticket stub
bent to my kicks n' fixed a scuff, while at the door...held it for the lady behind me
maybe it was timing, or the way I was brought up manners and refinement
Most likely not though, a particular muscle wanted me to turn the charm on
She gave a curt nod, my eyes warmed over her bodice..yes rather sloppy game i admit
thats when i felt it.. damp spray on my skin, slight precip made way.. for the rain to begin
Her poncho must've felt accomplished, a cock blocking article of clothing..motive to trap
couldnt tell if she was toned or fat.. with that, she grabbed a small umbrella from outta her bag
She offered, I obliged the shelter.. the promise of dryness was attractive now
since the mist turned water marbles, sounding like hi hats launched an attack on the ground
I examined her close as we soaked our way thru the urban sprawl.. thick but not meaty
milky complexion shown way to rosy cheeks, as if graffiti.. we worked toward the cross walk
She faced me...those sweeping green pools told me she was headed opposite my direction
so I nodded and said "it was pleasant." then she retreated back down the cause-way with effort
I forced a last lingering look and began to turn away enroote,
when i see high beams turn outta the alley engage in pursuit.
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I fought myself for a while, "its just a car" "coincidence" "she'll manage.." then the lights completely vanish..
Now i had zero vantage to charge in reckless abandon with hero antics
Rushed back to the boulervard full of heart..saw the car put in park, shadows in the distance
attention was my mission, I approached the vehicle ina instant.. they had left the door ajar
they homed in on the girl... last resort, the horn was a good enuff.... !!!ALARM!!!
piercing silence like a serated edge, the captors whirled their wayward heads
and the spooked doe they were after...escaped instead, Now they started down on me
but I was much more elusive prey..darted off the streets into the fray, a gloomy maze
These back roads were unfamiliar. heart racing, splashed footsteps reverberated drastic
off old bricks causing a certain phaser'd racket. Muffled voices oxygenated the space
still locked in the chase for what seemed hours each step
but i needed to stop for a sec to cough in another breath.
Panting furiously, I surveyed the scene...disoriented trying to get the lay of things
no inkling where i was, but someone did though. a sharp metal echo saturated my ears
inconsistent in its haunting melody, fear prominent and readily whatever may near
mind molded noise to visual as I envisioned a pipe holding individual berating
striking the wall occasionally, slower and more pronounced.. i hear it.
1 tap after another, no footsteps which was weird as IT drew nigh
I began to dread that steel sonata..It was do or die, I edged out carefully from cover..
improvised a cutter amongst rubble and made ready to strike
bounding around the corner i leapt into action..
the struggled ended upon realization, that me and the metal wailing
would finally meet seeing what
....it was the gentle ms. holding her broken heel up
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[Cashius]

Lol...bracket already has Bags moving on.

[Ghost1]

I sent my 30

B4 deadline.....

Ur 30min late.....annnnnd if i actually wrote i wouldnt care.....but i sent just numbers....soooo im gonna take the win.

Peace.

[veritas]

^colavitofaggotryofepiccolavitoness.

[Orc]

You gotta post in the thread saying u sent a verse tho lol

[Cashius]

Lol. You crazy for this one!

[R!canTheoryz]

You gotta post in the thread saying u sent a verse tho lol

True ^ lol @ bags being a lazy grandpa faggot

[Ghost1]

Rican why?

Im spearheading the teamrican2013 campaign


Also that is not a rule. Show it to me.

[Orc]

Definitely was a rule on NC. Lama dqd me over it thats how I know lol

[Ghost1]

May lama rot in hell.

[God Of War]

lmao i had closed the thread and declared bags winner before utmost posted tbh

[Ghost1]

I would like to advance since hes late.

Make ur ruling!

[Utmost]

lmao i had closed the thread and declared bags winner before utmost posted tbh


didnt see that tbh, i thought you couldnt post if a thread was closed.

im confused lol

so your saying that i could sent you a numbered verse when i posted at 10:48 on the 5th. and not posting said message in the thread and this would been a win for me?

[veritas]

Bags loss by no show.

[Ghost1]

didnt see that tbh, i thought you couldnt post if a thread was closed.

im confused lol

so your saying that i could sent you a numbered verse when i posted at 10:48 on the 5th. and not posting said message in the thread and this would been a win for me?


Yes.

[veritas]

I am sickened by this.

[Utmost]

is that yes to me magically being able to post after the thread was closed or a yes to the formulaic scumbag win. lol


tbc would neva wanna win that way, probably why i didnt even think to send a numbered verse

[Ghost1]

The thread was never closed cuz gows lazy lol

An the yes was towards the shady formulaic win thing...yes.

An i mean....i didnt think u were gonna drop....so i didnt write......but since u did...i should just let u proceed?

I think i am better suited for the winners bracket....tbC

[Utmost]

lmao i had closed the thread and declared bags winner before utmost posted tbh

oh i mustve misinterpreted him closing it then. my bad


honestly bags, to think that i wouldnt write after i posted in thread after first deadline is spotty logic.


An i mean....i didnt think u were gonna drop....so i didnt write......but since u did...i should just let u proceed?


but by the same token you should advance for not even bothering to write/start a verse after 2 ext?


sounds like you didnt want to make it contest from the get go.

[Meth]

The point is...

Either way...

No matter what...

Utmost you were late.

Arguing about it is going to do nothing.

Possibly Bags should have actually wrote something....

But if you would have posted on time anyway you would have won.


LUCKILY!!!

It's double elimination.

[veritas]

this is faggotry. i won't forget this.

[SiK]

Shouldnt this be a double no show? Sounds fishy...why would you send numbers and not just drop em here?

[Ghost1]

So he wouldnt see that i only dropped numbers obv?

It is shady.

I dont recall saying it wasnt.

I have the pm i sent timestamped when i sent it tho.

Im well inside of the rules.....but i agree....its not admorable what ive done here.

But without rukes wed be animals bros.


An no....it wouodnt be a double no show cuz the exts were both granted.

[veritas]

You admitting you were shady makes you slightly less of a douche.

[Meth]

Yeah bags was def on time

[veritas]

Not a good look anrhony.

[SiK]

Word. You pulled something similar on me before


I no longer have sympathy lol

[Cashius]

You did it!

[Meth]

I'm closing This thred lol

[Ghost1]

No cash.

We.did it.

[God Of War]

lmao i dont close threads i put who won on the post


i did it right when u was past being late


bags sent me a number verse if u would of posted at any time between him sending the number verse or the deadline uw ould have eaisly won u did not we gave u mad extensions i wasnt giving no more bro sorrry