Round 2: Innovator vs R!canTheoryz {Innovator wins}

[God Of War]

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This Round Consists Of your ability to write stories.
Stories have been a part of hip hop and writing since time began
your goal? out write your opponent!


max lines =30
CHECK INS DUE BY SATURDAY
VERSES DUE -aug 5th

[Inno]

Yep

[Inno]

once upon a time not long ago
there lived a Puerto rican who just could not flow
hed hang around the best and still fall short.
so then he decided to take his talents to a message board
where he learned to craft punchlines for every verse.
but poor guy he was a joke and a fool, but it gets worse
see...buddy spends the next 10 years of his life in text battles
hoping to gain respect and praise in order to fill his mantle
but alas the poor kid couldn't flow and his punch lines would choke
his metaphors made no sense you could say when he rapped he went broke
but with talent missing and the critics singing for his retirement
he was defiant to those who opposed, a devil reproached from enlightenment

and so he continues on his path of irrelevance
hoping that his writings can leave some remnants

[Meth]

R!canTheoryz

[R!canTheoryz]

Ill Post Tonight been really busy with work