Does This Verse Make Sense?

[SpookyDeep]

die.


Bitch get your weight up, I rape your soul until it’s broken so:
bet this nine will fuck your face up and nigga no-Tonio.

You’re no threat cuz your bars empty; it’s always sunny in Philadelphia.
My blade crosses your face twice, that’s quality, motherfucking X-celsior

Professor X swag, I can violate your mind without even having to stand up,
My sword sticks him up, cuz when I stab him, he SHRIVELS as he’s RAISIN his hands up

Peks aint ill with words or a legend, trust that I see through a bitch like a sonogram,
V a Professional assassin, SO u won’t see murder like Master P’s brother was hollow man

Lui-He-Ba-Fa liquid fists pummel your chest, call me IP man, I collapse this B’s lungs
Pecs lost, Cuz Everyone knows that dope gets flushed whenever the heat comes

Bitch.

...........................

[Sho Money EMG]

That verse is dope lol

[veritas]

Dont do this g.kyle......it will only help people see how ahead of my time I am with concepts and approach.

And you love penis.

[God Of War]

i wont say i thought V lost but i will say i think otpeks got the bad hand of voters who didnt get his verse lol

either or round 2 is up

[veritas]

And peks in your crew?

[God Of War]

nope, and i didnt say u lost, but ur not a battler ur punches show that

i expect you to do well this round


u got a meh win last round it happens to us all

[veritas]

Dude...dont say I aint got punches...just say you dont get them

Your bars empty, always sunny in philedelphia.

[Sho Money EMG]

First two bars were firee, raisin line was dope, and heat come dope flushed sick finisher overall I don't see how u could dislike this verse at all

[God Of War]

Dude...dont say I aint got punches...just say you dont get them

Your bars empty, always sunny in philedelphia.

ytou dont have punches, you have statements, saying your going to stab someone, kill them, etc is a statement a punch is when you diss your opponent a statement is pretty much that. you did'nt have punches bro. the voters voted they liked urs better that's fine. I am just telling you that you did not have punches.


statements=not punches

[God Of War]

the hollow man bar was a punch etc

[veritas]

I stand behind my style. Yall act like I cant conform to this sites style that shit is easy.

Where does it say there has to be a nonsensical set up before every punch?

Here is a netcees punch:

ya kitten butters my crews bread, we call ya bitch toast
Your writtens wouldnt have views of they were split8' roast

Real talk I would rather lose every battle on this site then change my style. The futures history
Will vindicate my words.

[veritas]

Your bars empty it always sunny in philedelphia aont a dis?
I see thru a bitch like a sonagram?


You are confused because i but punches where set ups go sometimes bc I dont believe in wasting.

I will punch whenevwr I can bc I am a killer. Also if I hit you amd you dont realize it....I win on principle.

[veritas]

Pecs lost? Pummel chest? Dope is flushed when tje heat comes?

Cmon man....

[God Of War]

I stand behind my style. Yall act like I cant conform to this sites style that shit is easy.

Where does it say there has to be a nonsensical set up before every punch?

Here is a netcees punch:

ya kitten butters my crews bread, we call ya bitch toast
Your writtens wouldnt have views of they were split8' roast

Real talk I would rather lose every battle on this site then change my style. The futures history
Will vindicate my words.


its not about style...look if you went into a boxng ring right? would you try to hug the guy instead of punch him? no? it doesnt matter the style u use to hit him but you still have to hit him. going in there and hugging him would get your ass beat

no matter what a punch is a punch, a statement is a statement it isnt about you being different you can be completely different and use punches still...or you can do it n use statements

in no form of battling in the world are you not suppose to diss ur opponent is my point...saying ur going to cut me is simply that

be different i agree with that but you can still fix ur punches it doesnt mean they have to be the same but they still have to hit

[God Of War]

Pecs lost? Pummel chest? Dope is flushed when tje heat comes?

Cmon man....

I get the bar, but tell me this, how does it diss him? explain that to me and i will agree with you how does saying dope is flushed when the heat comes actually diss otpeks?

[SpookyDeep]

VERITAS is trash at text

[Brian Bryan]

is GOW suggesting 'ask Beavis, i get nothing Butthead ' isn't a punchline

because it's a statement and not dissing someone?

you newer textcees sicken me

[God Of War]

is GOW suggesting 'ask Beavis, i get nothing Butthead ' isn't a punchline

because it's a statement and not dissing someone?

you newer textcees sicken me

not new and that shit isnt a punchline

punch means to hit, ie the butt of a joke is the part of a joke that hits, aka the punchline u being in a live battle league is a bit sad without you knowing that

and text is different then live shit aswell

[Brian Bryan]

not new and that shit isnt a punchline

punch means to hit, ie the butt of a joke is the part of a joke that hits, aka the punchline u being in a live battle league is a bit sad without you knowing that

and text is different then live shit aswell

ill nik-A trap

please school this textcee for me

i'm at work right now

kthnxbye

[God Of War]

ill nik-A trap

please school this textcee for me

i'm at work right now

kthnxbye

lmao cuz ur in a writing group u know more? gtfo here with that

i been listening to rap longer, probably writing longer since i been doing it since 99

u cant tell me a fucking meta4 and a punchline is exactly the same thing

[veritas]

Dude gow....peks avy said "dope" so he got flushed when the heat came.....

How you aint see that?

I used a statement then made a punch out of it...showing clever wit and quality...aka excelcsior.....or X celcisor....because I cut a x thru his face.


Cmon man

[God Of War]

Dude gow....peks avy said "dope" so he got flushed when the heat came.....

How you aint see that?

I used a statement then made a punch out of it...showing clever wit and quality...aka excelcsior.....or X celcisor....because I cut a x thru his face.


Cmon man

but i dont care what baron says like me saying im going ot cut ur face isnt a punchline

[veritas]

But criss crossing your face and that is quality....X-celscior is....excelsior means quality.

And plus I am known for my sword.....I would literally do that do him in real life.

This shit is real life.

[Brian Bryan]

LOL GoW you're so caught up in your little text bubble terminology you'll never understand

poor little boy

you're the type to never just enjoy hiphop music without thinking "he could have easily made that line into a multi syllable by using _______ there instead of what he did" and other textcee terminology noone outside of this forum cares about

pathetic

[veritas]

And evem if that is a statement....the resr of the verse is fulla punches.

It is smart. Witty. Simply complicated and sexy.

[Brian Bryan]

i know i'm right

you'll never tell me any different

been doing this as long if not longer than you

i was at rapboard with you LOL

[veritas]

I been in the game for 14 years my self....dude coming at me like i am a noob....gtf.

[SpookyDeep]

Shut the fuck up, lil nigga

[God Of War]

i know i'm right

you'll never tell me any different

been doing this as long if not longer than you

i was at rapboard with you LOL

you're wrong, a punchline and meta4 is different

a unchline is something that hits, famous rappers even said this

anything you look up on punchlines say this


stop trying with the text disses, i know just as many battlers,rappers, etc as u prolly been to as many concerts etc as you


ur not superior bro in the least

[trap.]

V just uses a multi punch style in his lines. Looks like he doubles up, one at the end of the first and one at the end of the second. Sometimes he even triples up. It's not a style a lot of people use and as you can tell he's still trying to master it but this is mostly punchline material. Good stuff, but that raisin line was cringe-worthy.

[SpookyDeep]

"My blade crosses your face twice, that’s quality, motherfucking X-celsior"
-VERITAS

You unoriginal ass motherfucka ...

[God Of War]

I been in the game for 14 years my self....dude coming at me like i am a noob....gtf.

u had hardly any punches in your verse at all

let brian gas you up and claim u do all u want but u dont



what you had was poor wording,and sloppy statements

with a punch in there

[God Of War]

V just uses a multi punch style in his lines. Looks like he doubles up, one at the end of the first and one at the end of the second. Sometimes he even triples up. It's not a style a lot of people use and as you can tell he's still trying to master it but this is mostly punchline material. Good stuff, but that raisin line was cringe-worthy.

show me any where in the world saying im going to stab u or cut u is a punchline, or anyother rapper saying it for that matter and claiming it is a punchline

it is not

a statement is not a punchline

u cats need to know wtf a word means obviously

[veritas]

Gow....you have had a hard month.....put the keys down amd take a vaca....

Or go to a debate school.

You a hater cuz. And you are slandering my good name.


My verse had at least 4 punches...at least by your subjectice standards.

[God Of War]

Gow....you have had a hard month.....put the keys down amd take a vaca....

Or go to a debate school.

You a hater cuz. And you are slandering my good name.


My verse had at least 4 punches...at least by your subjectice standards.

your verse had no punches cept maybe one

a punchline is the hit the impact of it , the shit stems from dissing/comedy

[trap.]

You're quoting one line as an end-all to an entire verse. No-one said this entire verse, every phrase and statement was a punchline. There's more than half of them in here though, not one line like you're stating.

[veritas]

And btw...all this thread is gonna do is help me and hurt you in the long run...so thanks.

[God Of War]

just like all you cats claimed a fucking swag and flow battle was still supposed to diss ur opponent

[veritas]

Thank you trap for having am open mind.

Sheesh

[God Of War]

You're quoting one line as an end-all to an entire verse. No-one said this entire verse, every phrase and statement was a punchline. There's more than half of them in here though, not one line like you're stating.

the first three bars, the second line of each bar is a statement, it is not a punch at all its a definate statement man

if i said

ima cut your face up with a knife

that shit isnt a punch and if it was ment to be its reallllyyyyy bad wording

[Just C]

You suck dick = statement

[God Of War]

You suck dick = statement

im going ot cut u=a statement

[trap.]

For reference, since you've listened to hiphop more than anyone on this site listen to the rapper named Punchline. He's from the late 90's, came up with blackstar and wordsworth. His whole style is like his name and what he says is similar to the basic blueprint of how V is writing.

[God Of War]

For reference, since you've listened to hiphop more than anyone on this site listen to the rapper named Punchline. He's from the late 90's, came up with blackstar and wordsworth. His whole style is like his name and what he says is similar to the basic blueprint of how V is writing.

i never said i lsitened to more hip hop i said as much i know who punchline n words are have most of there music


explain to me trap since you and baron are the know all of rap how the first 3 bars is punchlines plse

[Just C]

The "this nine will fuck your face up " = statement of intent/set up
Followed by "and nigga no-Tonio" = a reference to flip/turn the set up into a Double entendre ..... Making it a punchline.

[trap.]

The philly line is a punch. I already said the raisin line was lame and not. So I assume you're conceding that everything past those bars are punchlines? Because they are. Which makes there more than one like you've been saying. I could give a shit about the verse in general but there is blatant disregard in here.

[God Of War]

The "this nine will fuck your face up " = statement of intent/set up
Followed by "and nigga no-Tonio" = a reference to flip/turn the set up into a Double entendre ..... Making it a punchline.

that did not make it hit, a punchline is supposed to hit

that is no where near a punchline

[StarFaggot]

A punch line is whatever you end up with after your setup bar.

[God Of War]

lmao this is the shit thats wrong with it now adays

[Spoken]

Plain and simple Aero. Thank you

[God Of War]

A punch line is whatever you end up with after your setup bar.

if i said "aero just posted int he chat" after a set up it doesnt make it a punchline

if i said i just cut aero in the face" it doesnt make it a punchline

[Just C]

that did not make it hit, a punchline is supposed to hit

that is no where near a punchline

It's still a punchline though. maybe you weren't talking literally/technically to begin with.

[Brian Bryan]

you're wrong, a punchline and meta4 is different

a unchline is something that hits, famous rappers even said this

anything you look up on punchlines say this


stop trying with the text disses, i know just as many battlers,rappers, etc as u prolly been to as many concerts etc as you


ur not superior bro in the least

i never said a punchline and a metaphor were the same thing, are your reading comphrehension skills as bad as your typing ones now or what?

i never once claimed superiority in this thread

i simply said what Veritas used were, infact, punchlines

you claimed differently

are you going to stop deflecting from the fact you were wrong now or what?

LOL

[Spoken]

U have more of an audio approach so there is a difference really

[God Of War]

It's still a punchline though. maybe you weren't talking literally/technically to begin with.

a punchline is technically a line that hits, the punchline of a joke is the part that hits that causes people to laugh

punchlines were fucking derived from battling way back in the 80's which they got through comedy and jokes cuz battles was all jokes like yo momma disses

THAT IS A PUNCHLINE

battling came from fucking two people standing there dissing each other back and forth, the punch line was the humorous part that hit of the joke/diss

[Brian Bryan]

For reference, since you've listened to hiphop more than anyone on this site listen to the rapper named Punchline. He's from the late 90's, came up with blackstar and wordsworth. His whole style is like his name and what he says is similar to the basic blueprint of how V is writing.

thanks for playing.

<3

Brian Bryan > GoW

no wonder he lost this years Summer Classic, dude doesn't even understand what a punchline is

roflzzz

[SpookyDeep]

"Bitch get your weight up, I rape your soul until it’s broken so:
bet this nine will fuck your face up and nigga no-Tonio."
-VERITAS

You got the gayest imagination...you are so dumb

"rape your soul"

Shit sounds corny as fuck, you 'sposed to diss your opponent...who the fuck says "I'm going to rape your soul" ... You 'sposed to be intimidating lil nigga, you gotta come wit' that killer mentality style ... not that gay imagination shit you be on muthafucka

"bet this nine will fuck your face up and nigga no-Tonio."
You mentioning a gay thug (you) as your "punch" to diss your opponent ... that shit is weak. How is a punch going to hit hard when your gay imagination thinks of corny shit like that? Nigga you got a lot of work to do ...

I could go on, fuck you ...

[Just C]

if i said "aero just posted int he chat" after a set up it doesnt make it a punchline

if i said i just cut aero in the face" it doesnt make it a punchline

But that IS the set up. it's just he used the set up in the second line

The problem is that his first line is irrelevant statement filler

[Brian Bryan]

It's still a punchline though.

This was all the confirmation needed. Thank you, bro.

[God Of War]

thanks for playing.

<3

Brian Bryan > GoW

no wonder he lost this years Summer Classic, dude doesn't even understand what a punchline is

roflzzz

actually you cats dont know your history what so ever, which is fucking sad and you should be ashamed to call yourself a member of this genre and not know where what your doing came from or what

[God Of War]

a punchline is technically a line that hits, the punchline of a joke is the part that hits that causes people to laugh

punchlines were fucking derived from battling way back in the 80's which they got through comedy and jokes cuz battles was all jokes like yo momma disses

THAT IS A PUNCHLINE

battling came from fucking two people standing there dissing each other back and forth, the punch line was the humorous part that hit of the joke/diss

QFE

[Brian Bryan]

u had hardly any punches in your verse at all

LOL this is so wrong, it's actually funny

if the admin here can't even understand a punchline, what chance does the board have, really?

[God Of War]

LOL this is so wrong, it's actually funny

if the admin here can't even understand a punchline, what chance does the board have, really?

try to turn it into a troll but the fact you dont know your history or what a fucking punchline is is sad as shit

guarantee your first album was eminem

[Just C]

a punchline is technically a line that hits, the punchline of a joke is the part that hits that causes people to laugh

punchlines were fucking derived from battling way back in the 80's which they got through comedy and jokes cuz battles was all jokes like yo momma disses

THAT IS A PUNCHLINE

battling came from fucking two people standing there dissing each other back and forth, the punch line was the humorous part that hit of the joke/diss

Whether a punch hit's or not is subjective. everyone is different. You can't make a definition for the end result. it's the intent structure and purpose which define what a punchline is. a universal guideline that no 1 can debate, not a personal preference.

[Brian Bryan]

lmao i'm seriously not even trolling

i love this forum

i just find it funny how out of touch with the real world some of you guys are

of course they're punchlines

life isn't one giant text battle you know

[veritas]

life is one giant text battle for me Baron, so GOW's words hurt me.

[veritas]

Let me show you a glimpse into the Mind Assassin's art:



Bitch get your weight up, I rape your soul until it’s broken so:
bet this nine will fuck your face up and nigga no-Tonio.

first of all we have an internal rhyme and the end rhyme and it flows smooth. second Rape and tonio, third the nine will fuck your face up and tonio presents a hefty entendre.


You’re no threat cuz your bars empty; it’s always sunny in Philadelphia.
My blade crosses your face twice, that’s quality, motherfucking X-celsior

That "set up" line is fucking dope and I know alot of cats are like why didnt i think of that. this is imagery. imagine me slicing an X onto your face, that is quality...excelsior means quality....X-celcsior..easy.


Professor X swag, I can violate your mind without even having to stand up,
My sword sticks him up, cuz when I stab him, he SHRIVELS as he’s RAISIN his hands up

There is the X again just linking the concept in a third way which is xxx which is me fucking this dude up. this is the bar people have a prob with...but sticks him up has a double meaning also....sticks him like stab him and he shrivels like a raisin. Sticks him up like robs him (of his life and a win) so he shrivels (cowers) like a raisin...you know when you sit in a bathtub for too long? as he throws his hands up in defeat.

Peks aint ill with words or a legend, trust that I see through a bitch like a sonogram,
V a Professional assassin, SO u won’t see murder like Master P’s brother was hollow man

I see through a bitch like a sonogram is fucking awesome and ether. you are lying if you say otherwise. I am a pro assassin. Assassins are unseen. here is the word play: C-murder is master P's brother...that has been done. But I said SEE murder (remember you won't see me) like Master P's brother was Hollow man. This means at least three seperate things. Cmon man.

Lui-He-Ba-Fa liquid fists pummel your chest, call me IP man, I collapse this B’s lungs
Pecs lost, Cuz Everyone knows that dope gets flushed whenever the heat comes

Google liquid fists....you ever see IP Man? the way he justs beats dudes with his fists? (no tonio). so me pummeling the chest collapses his lungs....so Pecs (chest) lost. GET IT YOU IDIOT!? then the cu de grax: his avy is dope...and the dope always gets flushed (lost) when the heat (cops, my verse) comes.


all in all....show me another Writer who can be this complex and yet so smooth in their battles. I am the most well rounded ahead of my time persona here. Everyone knows it and treats me as such. GOW you are just arguing to be different. I think also you are mad at me, because I exposed to you how you have been failing lately. Trust that I did that out of love though, and not hate. I just want to see that you become a better person and more like me.

[trap.]

actually you cats dont know your history what so ever, which is fucking sad and you should be ashamed to call yourself a member of this genre and not know where what your doing came from or what

Okay now you're just going crazy.

[Albert Rhymestein]

lmao this guy^
EDIT:that was meant for the guy ontop of trap. b

[Brian Bryan]

actually you cats dont know your history what so ever, which is fucking sad and you should be ashamed to call yourself a member of this genre and not know where what your doing came from or what

lmao plz tell me you're lacing up those trollerskates right now?

me, trap and ill nik-A some of the longest serving dudes on this board

been at it like a decade and a half or longer

c'mon son, just admit you were wrong already

can't everybody be wrong except you haha!

[God Of War]

lmao plz tell me you're lacing up those trollerskates right now?

me, trap and ill nik-A some of the longest serving dudes on this board

been at it like a decade and a half or longer

c'mon son, just admit you were wrong already

can't everybody be wrong except you haha!

nope i been watching rap since ll cool j battled in the late eighties kiddo, i know where battling originated from i know how it originated i know punchlines are derived from jokes when two people use to sit there n diss each other when it didnt even rhyme, that turned into battling when it evolved

know yur history just cuz a couple of u dudes who been on a forum for 20 years even tho shit hasnt been around that long claim something doesnt mean its true


a statement is not a punch , by your standard and meaning a set up can be considered a punch if its the second bar which is fucking illiterate as shit

you and trap have no idea what you are talking about

[Just C]

Lol

[God Of War]

been up almost 58 hours working on my game

smoking weed and cigs WHOOO this is fun

lets argue bout other shit now

[Brian Bryan]

PLZ DONT BRING THAT SHIT UP ABOUT THE DOZENS OR MOHAMMED ALI OR SCOTLAND FLIGHTING AROUND ME SON

YOU LEARNED WHAT YOU KNOW ABOUT BATTLING FROM A RICHARD COREY ARTICLE

ROFLZZZ

MISS ME WITH THAT SHIZZ PLZ

[God Of War]

PLZ DONT BRING THAT SHIT UP ABOUT THE DOZENS OR MOHAMMED ALI OR SCOTLAND FLIGHTING AROUND ME SON

YOU LEARNED WHAT YOU KNOW ABOUT BATTLING FROM A RICHARD COREY ARTICLE

ROFLZZZ

MISS ME WITH THAT SHIZZ PLZ

lmao i actually never seen richard corey even battle i tried to look up some of his shit cuz i know he is supposed ot be like top ten of all time and i never found nothing

[trap.]

This text shit has been around since 95. I started in, from what the historian says in late 96. I use 97. Either way, I stopped in 03 when real life shit happened, my son, etc. I might not write punchlines according to the netcee standard, but I know one when I see it. If we are basing it off of your hiphop knowledge and listening to LL battle in the 80's, have you even heard him vs Kool Moe Dee? Battle rap was so basic back then. Punchlines were basic. They almost looked / sounded like this "I'll stab you" shit you are negating to recognize. Now it's evolved. Still, the basics are there in almost any battle verse nowadays. I'll stop here.

[Flow]

Battle rap was so basic back then. Punchlines were basic. They almost looked / sounded like this "I'll stab you" shit you are negating to recognize. Now it's evolved. Still, the basics are there in almost any battle verse nowadays. I'll stop here.

This

[h.t]

sorry but im not gonna break my neck to read a verse...

fuck kinda font was that? lol

[God Of War]

This text shit has been around since 95. I started in, from what the historian says in late 96. I use 97. Either way, I stopped in 03 when real life shit happened, my son, etc. I might not write punchlines according to the netcee standard, but I know one when I see it. If we are basing it off of your hiphop knowledge and listening to LL battle in the 80's, have you even heard him vs Kool Moe Dee? Battle rap was so basic back then. Punchlines were basic. They almost looked / sounded like this "I'll stab you" shit you are negating to recognize. Now it's evolved. Still, the basics are there in almost any battle verse nowadays. I'll stop here.

Yeahof course I heard it, but it still derives from emcees standing there dissing each other without it even rhyming, corner battling where they just dissed each other and who ever had the best insult won....that shit was like snapping then it formed into rhyme battling and etc but it still derived from that nd ll cool j n moe dee had legit punches in it ie

You can't win, I don't bend, Look what you got yourself in,
just using your name I took those L’s,
hung ‘em on your head and rocked your bells


also


Battlin's for real men, and I doubt if
You can even hang or give a run for the money
You're just a sucker, and it's funny


this


You ain't got a chance in the world
Your records were smokin', but you sound like a girl




as i said know where the shit came from and what created it, from back in the begining the ll-cool-j battle as an example shows u

[God Of War]

another one


finally figured it out/Magic's mouth is used for suckin'/Roxanne Shante is only good for steady fuckin'/MC Shan and Marley Marl is really only bluffin'/Like Doug E. Fresh said, 'I tell you now, you ain't nothing.


thats fromt he fucking history books man and thats boogie down productions in case you didnt know

[Split]

just like all you cats claimed a fucking swag and flow battle was still supposed to diss ur opponent

If u don't diss your opponent, it's just a flex

[God Of War]

If u don't diss your opponent, it's just a flex

no it isnt, back int he day swag n flow verses was who had the best flow and who could brag the dopest in a verse


thats like saying a topical battle is just a story and not a battle

[Boredom]

a statement is not a punch.. imo gow has been correct this whole time.

[God Of War]

a statement is not a punch.. imo gow has been correct this whole time.

thats what im saying, but u cant tell these old heads shit bro even if u show them proof


ive been obsessed with battle rap since i was lil lil and first heard roxanne diss another crew cuz i found my uncles old tapes and was obsessed with disses/battles after that rofl

[Split]

no it isnt, back int he day swag n flow verses was who had the best flow and who could brag the dopest in a verse


thats like saying a topical battle is just a story and not a battle

Lama said different on the old NCs in a big ass thread, and near everyone agreed

If swag n flow is just a flex, then why don't we have flex battles be flexes and swag n flow involve dissing ur opponent

Because frankly it's much better that way

[Boredom]

thats what im saying, but u cant tell these old heads shit bro even if u show them proof


ive been obsessed with battle rap since i was lil lil and first heard roxanne diss another crew cuz i found my uncles old tapes and was obsessed with disses/battles after that rofl

lmfao the two of the 'old heads' your arguing with haven't battled in years.. and never were good as far as text battling goes anyways.. topicals, yes. but not text

[God Of War]

Lama said different on the old NCs in a big ass thread, and near everyone agreed

If swag n flow is just a flex, then why don't we have flex battles be flexes and swag n flow involve dissing ur opponent

Because frankly it's much better that way

just because you like it more doesnt make it correct\



swag and flow has noithing to do with disses it never did..it has to do with bragging if you write a swag verse do u diss someone in i? no u flex how the fuck does a defination of something get changed from one verse to another? it does not


swag and flow is a brag verse using meta4s multis n shit to have an amazing flow

not punchlines

a fucking verse with punchlines dissing your opponent is a battle not a swag and flow battle

[veritas]

Dude a swag and flow can say anything it wants as long as it big ups you and flows well.

Cmon man.

[God Of War]

Dude a swag and flow can say anything it wants as long as it big ups you and flows well.

Cmon man.

a battle where u diss ur opponent every second line is a fucking regular battle


every verse should try to flow


man this is whats wrong with text seriously

[SiK]

Swag and Flow should NOT AT ALL be judged by any disses.

Its about bragging and swag mixed with multies and flow

[veritas]

a battle where u diss ur opponent every second line is a fucking regular battle


every verse should try to flow


man this is whats wrong with text seriously

This may be too soon but you are wrong: who said a regular battle has to have a punch every second line? Why not every line?

Who said a swag and flow cant diss? It should not be jidged by the diss....but also not to be dosregarded if it does.

I am beginning to question your commitment to sparkle motion?

[God Of War]

This may be too soon but you are wrong: who said a regular battle has to have a punch every second line? Why not every line?

Who said a swag and flow cant diss? It should not be jidged by the diss....but also not to be dosregarded if it does.

I am beginning to question your commitment to sparkle motion?

thats fucking stupid

u literally have no idea what your talking about when it comes to this

a battle is to diss ur opponent the first line should set up ur punch and then you should punch,,,,sure each line can be a punch but its going to fuck up ur verse

a swag verse is nothing but a flex verse they just renamed it, swag is bragging not dissing by definition

u cant change things to make it fit u better just because you cant do it

[Split]

just because you like it more doesnt make it correct\



swag and flow has noithing to do with disses it never did..it has to do with bragging if you write a swag verse do u diss someone in i? no u flex how the fuck does a defination of something get changed from one verse to another? it does not


swag and flow is a brag verse using meta4s multis n shit to have an amazing flow

not punchlines

a fucking verse with punchlines dissing your opponent is a battle not a swag and flow battle

I'm saying we should change that because it is stupid

I never meant "using punchlines" but if you just talk about how your eternal soul rides the Fantastic 4's Infinity Toaster across oaken Satan mandibles then its dumb and it would be cooler if you made it more directed

[God Of War]

I'm saying we should change that because it is stupid

I never meant "using punchlines" but if you just talk about how your eternal soul rides the Fantastic 4's Infinity Toaster across oaken Satan mandibles then its dumb and it would be cooler if you made it more directed

yeah but im just saying in general like its hard to vote on something when everyone has a different meaning u know? like how to even write it lol

if im going to have a swag n flow verse and half the people i talk to think its spose to be this way but the other half think its posed to be that way then wtf do i actually write

the shit just gets confusing for writers/voters alike

[veritas]

thats fucking stupid

u literally have no idea what your talking about when it comes to this

a battle is to diss ur opponent the first line should set up ur punch and then you should punch,,,,sure each line can be a punch but its going to fuck up ur verse

a swag verse is nothing but a flex verse they just renamed it, swag is bragging not dissing by definition

u cant change things to make it fit u better just because you cant do it


Why would it fuck up the verse? Says who?

[SiK]

Why would it fuck up the verse? Says who?

try to make a verse with a punch every line

don't worry. ill wait

[veritas]

Why?

[Hush]

He can't because he's bald

[SiK]

lmao@ this entire thread btw