jilti vs Profit - JILTI WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Newbie Tourney VII

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Monday,
September 22nd 2014 11:59 PM PST.
Check Ins are due WEDNESDAY, Sept 10t 2014
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours


Line Limit:

Min. = 10 lines
Max. = 16 lines
Limit MUST be agreed upon


General Rules:

First to 5, Win by 2, 3-0=KO
1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
means you will be disqualified.
A check in ISmandatory.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.


jilti Profit

[jilti]

Check

[Clayray]

Hi.

12?
jilti

[jilti]

Hi.

12?
jilti

Match lines of first to drop

[Clayray]

*Cracks knuckles*

Jilti..? Lmao ya verses trash so why u boastin?
I'll put J infront of the K but I ain't jokin!
I bet u fat nigga, goin to school & learning right
...But them zebra cake rewards don't mean you earning stripes!
He a Black Hippie flunky, you deserve to get shot
Pay a school boy to grip the K, Dot his face & get J rocked!
That nine iron'll put a hole in one & settle scores
It'll get Jill-tee'd off without me yelling fore!
Ya smelly whore? Gold diggin' & loves profit, u can't stand her greed
She a thief in the night, she'll do anything to get her hands on me

..Ez

- Dropped early because I'm going on a trip. Won't be back till Tuesday morning.

[jilti]

- Dropped early because I'm going on a trip. Won't be back till Tuesday morning.


ur from Indiana dropping early? that's some Paul George shit
get something to Brace the fall with, cuz u'll need those when i break all ur limbs
enjoy the leisure trip, won't be another day til ur reading this
by the time u get back, woulda already Flipped Profit for an easy win
seen him struggle Passing Wind in the debut round
but when this match ends we'll see his ass exit without making a sound
so basically now it won't be a problem taking outfit
just have to drag dude from the closet this crossdresser was found in
lay down & quit. should feel proud Sharp even mentioned ur name
next time we see Profit at the end of a Nine Mag is when i extend it and aim

[Camp Bell]

Jilti..? Lmao ya verses trash so why u boastin?
I'll put J infront of the K but I ain't jokin!
jk is just kidding, this a stretch

I bet u fat nigga, goin to school & learning right
...But them zebra cake rewards don't mean you earning stripes!
lol ok, cool

He a Black Hippie flunky, you deserve to get shot
Pay a school boy to grip the K, Dot his face & get J rocked!
nice

That nine iron'll put a hole in one & settle scores
It'll get Jill-tee'd off without me yelling fore!
...ehh played but coo np

Ya smelly whore? Gold diggin' & loves profit, u can't stand her greed
She a thief in the night, she'll do anything to get her hands on me
lol weak

VS

ur from Indiana dropping early? that's some Paul George shit
get something to Brace the fall with, cuz u'll need those when i break all ur limbs
ok decent

enjoy the leisure trip, won't be another day til ur reading this
by the time u get back, woulda already Flipped Profit for an easy win
buildup was dope. weak ending tho, easy win was ehh

seen him struggle Passing Wind in the debut round
but when this match ends we'll see his ass exit without making a sound
lol nice

so basically now it won't be a problem taking outfit
just have to drag dude from the closet this crossdresser was found in
niice np. LOTB

lay down & quit. should feel proud Sharp even mentioned ur name
next time we see Profit at the end of a Nine Mag is when i extend it and aim
bang bang




nice battle, i figured profit was going to show up, i think he just came up short here.
jilti had some nice nameplays plus the LOTB. profit had a decent verse but too inconsistent.



vote: jilti

[Kill Spree]

Zebra stripes and school boy

Vs

Brace, pass wind, cross dresser & extended mag


I felt this was one sided here. I only got two quotable a from profit where jilti had one miss really. His verse was smoother better word plays

Vote jilti

[Tic]

*Cracks knuckles*

Jilti..? Lmao ya verses trash so why u boastin?
I'll put J infront of the K but I ain't jokin!
Nah, this was neither clever nor cool.
I bet u fat nigga, goin to school & learning right
...But them zebra cake rewards don't mean you earning stripes!
Ehhhhhhhhhh.
He a Black Hippie flunky, you deserve to get shot
Pay a school boy to grip the K, Dot his face & get J rocked!
This wasn't bad.
That nine iron'll put a hole in one & settle scores
It'll get Jill-tee'd off without me yelling fore!
This was alright.
Ya smelly whore? Gold diggin' & loves profit, u can't stand her greed
She a thief in the night, she'll do anything to get her hands on me
No.
..Ez

- Dropped early because I'm going on a trip. Won't be back till Tuesday morning.

ur from Indiana dropping early? that's some Paul George shit
get something to Brace the fall with, cuz u'll need those when i break all ur limbs
Eh.
enjoy the leisure trip, won't be another day til ur reading this
by the time u get back, woulda already Flipped Profit for an easy win
Not bad.
seen him struggle Passing Wind in the debut round
but when this match ends we'll see his ass exit without making a sound
This was cool, liked how you tied the setup in.
so basically now it won't be a problem taking outfit
just have to drag dude from the closet this crossdresser was found in
This was nice.
lay down & quit. should feel proud Sharp even mentioned ur name
next time we see Profit at the end of a Nine Mag is when i extend it and aim
Not bad.
This was an easy win for Jilti. Profit has a very direct style whereas Jilti throws in the misdirection which makes it cool.

Jilti

[Clayray]

3-0 Jilti Wins. Good battle J.
Sharp Nine close thread

[Tic]

^ It's usually to 5.

[jilti]

Thanks man, Good battle to u as well Profit

[Clayray]

^ It's usually to 5.

3 votes to 0 is a KO.

[Unfukwitable]

I bet u fat nigga, goin to school & learning right
...But them zebra cake rewards don't mean you earning stripes!

vs

ur from Indiana dropping early? that's some Paul George shit
get something to Brace the fall with, cuz u'll need those when i break all ur limbs
so basically now it won't be a problem taking outfit
just have to drag dude from the closet this crossdresser was found in


Profit: You had good direction, I feel you lacked with creativity and execution.. seems you took the simple approach which can work at times when the wording is top notch.. A lot of potential in you just get more creative and step out the box a bit.

jilti: Had some cool wording, had 2 solid lines, I feel you need to just keep it more consistent and try to get alil creative also.

v/Jilly

[MKG]

ilti..? Lmao ya verses trash so why u boastin?
I'll put J infront of the K but I ain't jokin!
ehh joking and just kidding are different
I bet u fat nigga, goin to school & learning right
...But them zebra cake rewards don't mean you earning stripes!
not feeling this
He a Black Hippie flunky, you deserve to get shot
Pay a school boy to grip the K, Dot his face & get J rocked!
nahh
That nine iron'll put a hole in one & settle scores
It'll get Jill-tee'd off without me yelling fore!
played
Ya smelly whore? Gold diggin' & loves profit, u can't stand her greed
She a thief in the night, she'll do anything to get her hands on me
weak closer

Vs

ur from Indiana dropping early? that's some Paul George shit
get something to Brace the fall with, cuz u'll need those when i break all ur limbs
ehh played concept
enjoy the leisure trip, won't be another day til ur reading this
by the time u get back, woulda already Flipped Profit for an easy win
cool
seen him struggle Passing Wind in the debut round
but when this match ends we'll see his ass exit without making a sound
nice
so basically now it won't be a problem taking outfit
just have to drag dude from the closet this crossdresser was found in
cool
lay down & quit. should feel proud Sharp even mentioned ur name
next time we see Profit at the end of a Nine Mag is when i extend it and aim
dope

Vote jil

[theMuzzl3]

I already lost, but I'm gonna vote anyways.




Jilti..? Lmao ya verses trash so why u boastin?
I'll put J infront of the K but I ain't jokin!
(1010) -- this got me laughin

I bet u fat nigga, goin to school & learning right
...But them zebra cake rewards don't mean you earning stripes!
(8/10) over all good lines

He a Black Hippie flunky, you deserve to get shot
Pay a school boy to grip the K, Dot his face & get J rocked!
(3/10) You said "he" and then "you" in the same line. Bad English. The 2nd line was ok.

That nine iron'll put a hole in one & settle scores
It'll get Jill-tee'd off without me yelling fore!
(10/10) this was a good punch line, set the stage /w line 1 & line 2 killed it.

Ya smelly whore? Gold diggin' & loves profit, u can't stand her greed
She a thief in the night, she'll do anything to get her hands on me
(2/10) 1st line was decent, but the 3rd one kind of went off topic.

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vs

ur from Indiana dropping early? that's some Paul George shit
get something to Brace the fall with, cuz u'll need those when i break all ur limbs
(6/10) 1st line was dope, second line followed it up nicely… but lack of rhymes dropped it from 10/10 to 6/10.

enjoy the leisure trip, won't be another day til ur reading this
by the time u get back, woulda already Flipped Profit for an easy win
(2/10) didn't rhyme, and I'm sure "easy win" has been over-used

seen him struggle Passing Wind in the debut round
but when this match ends we'll see his ass exit without making a sound
(7/10) these were good lines, only reason I dropped it from a 10 to a 7 is because Windu dropped some tight lines. Close battles are fun to read.

so basically now it won't be a problem taking outfit
just have to drag dude from the closet this crossdresser was found in
(4/10) I couldn't see why you'd take his outfit if he's a cross dresser, but it rhymed and the second line earned you the 4 points.

lay down & quit. should feel proud Sharp even mentioned ur name
next time we see Profit at the end of a Nine Mag is when i extend it and aim
(10/10) Excellent closer -- best line that you dropped.

29

Close one.

/V Profit

[Red Soldier]

Profit: JK was wack, zebra cakes isn't really hard hitting, a lot of connection in ya third bar but this nice jab, like the connection but the punch was lacking, self nameplay punch came up weak, bad closer.

Jilti: didn't like the rhyme n I've seen a few PG punches.. This one was that good,2nd bar could have been worded better into a dope punch, making a sound was good.. Nice set up, drag lines are played n the execution on this was lacking any how, nice closer.

Easy win for Jilti, Profit needs better concepts.

V/Jilti