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Lost in Thought
08-02-2013, 11:21 PM
a verse a wrote awhile back



Girl,

I'm sorry we fight but i'm beggining to doubt you

Sorry tonight.. i'm trippin about you

imagine a life

I'm living witout you

This wat its down to

till you learn this is a relationship SHIT AINT ABOUT YOU

Its about US two becomes one

IF you bump into us

You confrunt NONE

Watch who we've become

From the begining like the movie begun

It started out great, some book shit

untill in rage we took it

Shaped and shook it

Put it on a flame and cooked it

Left it so bent outa shape

The taiste was crooked

wheres the escape button

I cant wait to push it

and leave this place

I hate to look at

Its me too and i tried to switch the shit

You had a plan but mine was different

it was about US not just MY existence

And you didnt like it so why admitt it?

I'm Hopen that you care

Enough to Know that I'm scared

Why fix this ship

if its broken past repair

Theres to many fish in the sea

For me to have to deal wit you bitchen at me

Over shit i say you take litterally

You cant see wat it did to me

Cuz its hid beneath... incognito

If you bitch at me... then watch me go

I'll be gone and i wont return

If thats wat you want you'll slowly learn

That I dont deserve to choke and burn

while you hope this works but show NO concern

Geno
08-02-2013, 11:26 PM
hated the format, cool content though. coulda been smoother, add a few words to it man. couple spots would read/transition smoother with a well placed word or two. just my 2cents. 1