Defiant vs. Unfuckwitable [Unfukwitable Wins]

[BROKE LESNAR]

Rebuttal Option (both competitors must agree to it at time of check in)

Due Monday 12am PST

[Unfukwitable]

Checkk

[Unfukwitable]

Welcome NC's punching bag, This busters not safe
you just hang around to waste-lines,
&Ironically, that bar you dropped week 8, kept Muff in top shape

[Defiant]

leave him a mess, punches wont require much disguise
the damage needs 'surgery to unfuk', opposite to the tightest virgin where he doesnt even touch the sides

[Camp Bell]

ehhh

didnt really like either but un's was worded terribly
why the second line, didnt even rhyme? defiants
punch was weak. virgin, play on the "unfuck" part
of his name, iono...


vote: defiant

[jilti]

This battle was terrible..
vote unfuk for more metaphors crammed into a bar. only thing i could think of

[El Muffin]

Defiants was longwinded n executed sloppily

The concept you were attempting 4 was eh tho.

Unfuk said my name so he wins





V unfuk



Lol nah...waste lines dated but the muff ref. Legit even tho im not fat fuck u nigga. Im apollo esque

[Wordz AhGod]

v/unfuckwitable tho the line wasn't too hot it was better then Defiants, just a tad stretched tho but I see it.

[Blanco Bishop]

Un was crisper n read fluidly. Def was cool but i had to keep rereading for the flow.

Thought un worded it better n also had better execution.

Good battle fellas.

V un

[BROKE LESNAR]

I think Def's major hang up was "opposite to the tightest virgin". Idk know if there was another way for you to reword it, I'm tired, but that fragment hurt the delivery. It wasn't a terrible bar. I liked the way u flipped his name.

Fuk's bar for the most part was cool. Welcome NC punching bag read weird to me. Lol. But after that it was smooth. Waistline wp was a tough call to go with.

v-Fuk

[Packed Graves]

Horrible wording good concept vs over wording a shitty concept = unfuk with the better attempt.

[Tic]

Man...........Unfuk had a meh bar that I wasn't too fond of, but Defiant's attempt was comparable to a Muzzl3 vote.

Unfuk.

[murda sho]

why the hell did y'all stretch y'all bars out like that? whatever its your style I guess, i didn't like either of them but ima vote Unfuk for the better of the bad punches

v/ Unfuk