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BROKE LESNAR
10-01-2014, 05:08 AM
Rebuttal Option

▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

Due Monday 12am PST

Blanco Bishop
10-04-2014, 08:47 PM
You're something like a doormat, the bottom of the totem pole
a petty simp just trying to Belong...n my cock is so Terri wanna throat it whole.

theMuzzl3
10-05-2014, 07:42 PM
I'm down for rebuttal option, if you want.
Blanco Bishop

theMuzzl3
10-05-2014, 11:15 PM
Fuckit, I don't feel like making sure it all lines up with syllables and all.


This dude steppin on stage could start a riot, dunno how to make his fake ass be quiet.
It looks like Blanco Tequila overuse is pretty fuckin obvious: this white dude needs a diet.

Packed Graves
10-05-2014, 11:21 PM
Tie

BROKE LESNAR
10-06-2014, 08:58 PM
Muzzl3 improved over last week, it just wasn't that good of a concept. Blanco's appears hard to read at first but if u put emphasis on "n my cock is" then it flows much smooth. Haven't really seen the belong wp, and the bar did feel a bit pauseworthy lmao, but it was dope in execution.

v-Blanco

El Muffin
10-07-2014, 04:30 PM
Muzzles getting there but this was disjointed

U said he wss a drunk n needs to lose weight

Eh

Lol I though t terri was a adj at first..coz yr like my cock is so terri

Thats the thing with those kind of wp..u leave it up to the reader to make the connection

I got it. Just felt ut could be done better

V Blanco

Blanco won it. Not a fan of how he worded it

Red Soldier
10-07-2014, 08:46 PM
Blanco had the harder hit. Muzzles improving though

V/Blanco

Camp Bell
10-07-2014, 10:42 PM
....smh.

giving it to blanco simply cuz i felt muzzle came
up short with the drinking/diet concept. there was
nothing witty or lyrical about it at all. keep working


vote: blanco

Certain
10-07-2014, 11:21 PM
theMuzzl3: You had nothing creative in this line, just a straight-forward fake personal.

Blanco Bishop: Your phrasing was terrible, as the "long" did not translate well over.

Vote: Blanco Bishop