murda sho vs. Packed Graves [murda sho Wins]

[BROKE LESNAR]

Rebuttal Option

▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

Due Monday 12am PST
murda sho Packed Graves

[Packed Graves]

Check, no rebuttal.

[Packed Graves]

I'm no racist- but this bars leaving you mind fucked
cuz it wont take a 1-2 for me to drop this Er quicker then the day he signed up

[murda sho]

Check... Going 1

[murda sho]

His broads be 3's, when gunning for dames that look like stars he's weak
So it's ironic at the bar we see nothing but grenades wherever you rpg

Zip Him Up!

[BROKE LESNAR]

I knew this would be a tough battle to judge based on how talented these guys have proven to be. I loved PG's omission of "nigg". Had he of kept it, it would of either been distracting or considered a reach, but by wording it the way he did, he challenged the reader to think ab the entire concept (which he alluded to in the set up). Nice concept and execution. MS constructed his bar very well. The subtle hint with "gunning for dames" as it relates to the closer was a perfect choice of wording. The grenade/rpg wp/np was all supported efficiently by the concept. The concept was just as dope as PG's. I really don't see any difference in creativity and concept. Both had a np. Both bars were structured ideally. If I had to go technical the only thing that I see where one might of had a slight advantage with execution would of been PG.

v-PG

[El Muffin]

For the sake of upping this thread

V/ tie

Too close to call.

Sry

[Packed Graves]

For the sake of upping this thread

V/ tie

Too close to call.

Sry

so does that mean 1-0 or 2-1?

[Blanco Bishop]

I feel like flow wise..murda got this.
Tie ins n wp murda got it.

Hmm packed had a good idea but it confused the fuck out of me.
Maybe muff rubbin off on me..no homo..lol

Murda was pretty clear n concise from the get go.


V murda

[El Muffin]

Muff rubbin off all on yo face

OH BABY

[murda sho]

Muff get yo weird ass out my thread haha

[Red Soldier]

Close af, I'm edging towards PGs bar though. Shit was fire IMO

V/Graves

[Camp Bell]

wasnt really feeling packed punch. dont think
the race card was played well here, although
it was executed nice and all but i thought murda
shit was doper. the grenade/wherever you rpg
nameplay was all flames.


vote: murda

[Defiant]

gotta go with sho, wasnt really feeling pg. vote - murda sho

[Certain]

Packed Graves: I didn't like much about this. The concept was stretched, the wording was poor and the setup didn't make much sense.

murda sho: That's not ironic. The concept was OK, but you didn't tie in the video game aspect very well.

Vote: murda sho

[Unfukwitable]

both showed up with a nice drop, I feel one was clever and the other was more effective..
v/PG

[Kin]

Pg...not really feelin it... the ER drop was kinda weak

Murda...rpg line was creative...diggin it

Vote... murda murda

[Packed Graves]

6-4 wrap it up, good battle MS.

[Wordz AhGod]

mehh, both were pretty bad this weak.. Im edging this one to murda sho tho, his wording was slightly better tho his rpg execution was terrible imo.

v/murda sho