MKG vs Jilti - JIL WINS BY NO SHOW

[Sharp]

Netcees Newbie Tourney VII

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Monday,
October 6th 2014 11:59 PM PST.
Check Ins are due Saturday, Sept 20th 2014
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours


Line Limit:

Min. = 12 lines
Max. = 16 lines
Limit MUST be agreed upon


General Rules:

First to 5, Win by 2, 3-0=KO
1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
means you will be disqualified.
A check in ISmandatory.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.


MKG jilti

[MKG]

10 is cool shafi

[Sharp]

10 is cool shafiLine Limit:[/U]

Min. = 12 lines
Max. = 16 lines
Limit MUST be agreed upon

[jilti]

..check

[jilti]

MKG is a Lincoln model family vehicle, ima big rig holdin 45 tons
long story short, you made the Semis just to get run over by one
bury him so deep it'll look darker than overcast clouds
and he'll never see Daylyt again after i take this asshole out
bcuz the mag predictions for this round weren't fooling me
Bell Tolled everyone ur the favorite to win, but he was just Pulling ur String
God fulfills my needs spiritually when church service ends
every week i leave Embodied with the holy ghost, this time it's in a tournament
nerd pretended to be a female down to the Handbag & four inch heels
but didn't need to make-up a fake Persona bitch, we already knew urs was real
Goro skills.. Liu Kang dude from different angles til u lose
then MK Armageddon ripped off for the finishing move

[Window Taco]

MKG is a Lincoln model family vehicle, ima big rig holdin 45 tons
long story short, you made the Semis just to get run over by one
Thought it was too simple. Also it's a miss due to a big creativity lack.
bury him so deep it'll look darker than overcast clouds
and he'll never see Daylyt again after i take this asshole out
Nice flow but same problems as bar 1 for me.
bcuz the mag predictions for this round weren't fooling me
Bell Tolled everyone ur the favorite to win, but he was just Pulling ur String
Nice line. It was solid with good connectivity.
God fulfills my needs spiritually when church service ends
every week i leave Embodied with the holy ghost, this time it's in a tournament
Naw. Didn't like this one. It's a miss.
nerd pretended to be a female down to the Handbag & four inch heels
but didn't need to make-up a fake Persona bitch, we already knew urs was real
Too simple but had a lil humor to it.
Goro skills.. Liu Kang dude from different angles til u lose
then MK Armageddon ripped off for the finishing move
Your second best line besides the bell toil shit. Solid

Overall I wasn't impressed with this verse at all really felt it lacked creativity and sting, although u had a solid closer and the bell toil line was nice IMO.

[Sharp]

is a Lincoln model family vehicle, ima big rig holdin 45 tons
long story short, you made the Semis just to get run over by one
kind of done flip but the nameplay made it fresh
bury him so deep it'll look darker than overcast clouds
and he'll never see Daylyt again after i take this asshole out
Daylyt flip is played but again fresh with the current event, good shit
bcuz the mag predictions for this round weren't fooling me
Bell Tolled everyone ur the favorite to win, but he was just Pulling ur String
niiiice
God fulfills my needs spiritually when church service ends
every week i leave Embodied with the holy ghost, this time it's in a tournament
ok
nerd pretended to be a female down to the Handbag & four inch heels
but didn't need to make-up a fake Persona bitch, we already knew urs was real
ok personal but you prolly coulda done a bit more
Goro skills.. Liu Kang dude from different angles til u lose
then MK Armageddon ripped off for the finishing move
lol cool


first 3 were my favorites, verse of the round imo