Utmost vs. Just Rap - {Utmost wins}

[Meth]

NEWBIE 2013
ROUND 1

No swaying, biting, feeding, recycling

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First person to drop can edit only until the 2nd person drops.

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DUE: Saturday, 11:59 PM Pacific Standard Time

Extensions are available at request until Sunday 11:59 PM Pacific Standard Time, exactly 24 hours later.

Good Luck

Utmost just rap

[just rap]

Cool.

[Utmost]

check

[just rap]

Eyes on the prize? You might as well die or get left for dead
Winning this tourney's like, being the smartest in special ed
I'm a ghost writer cuz I flow tighter & my verses sell
Congrats on Ok concepts & the fact you're too stupid to word it well
You the best? Fuck that, just rap's back to smack the wackest fella'
His style's instrumental to his talents, & he's been rapping acapella
They don't know me & know you less, you got wack puns & don't flow too fresh
Couldn't have a dope set up if ya robbed the dealer that sold you meth
No respect to wack bitches with no names, I'm so flame & fucking ether
Couldn't give him no personals, those desperate bitches wouldn't fuck him either

[Utmost]

ill have sumthin up for deadline

[Utmost]

Who???
Dunno or care about the shit, cuz when i spit doom this prick is thru
I'll have the surge in popularity...U'll have surgeon ATTEMPT to fix ur wounds
& whoever set the battles, thanks.. needed the bye after bags
Cuz I was thinkin 'Just my luck'... then i saw i had to battle this fag
Took a min to check ya spits..they were played n' not felt either
fuck fleshin out your concepts more, ur needin skin grafts and stem cell research
Its over! your pathetic, gettin such a beat down here dude.. accept it
go die in a fire somewhere.. so i can yell 'Just Blaze' for the producer credit
& bitches? thats where we differ smuck.. go cry about ur hideous rut
so while i get my date a day... your data day involves copious amounts of internet smut

[Decibel]

Eyes on the prize? You might as well die or get left for dead
Winning this tourney's like, being the smartest in special ed
Idk.. its like your trying to win and you just dissed yourself
I'm a ghost writer cuz I flow tighter & my verses sell
Congrats on Ok concepts & the fact you're too stupid to word it well
cool little jab
You the best? Fuck that, just rap's back to smack the wackest fella'
His style's instrumental to his talents, & he's been rapping acapella
Okay jab
They don't know me & know you less, you got wack puns & don't flow too fresh
Couldn't have a dope set up if ya robbed the dealer that sold you meth
Not really strong
No respect to wack bitches with no names, I'm so flame & fucking ether
Couldn't give him no personals, those desperate bitches wouldn't fuck him either
No.. just weak closer.

You need to work on elevating punches to more out of box and creative to hit harder. Setups could use a little ante up too


Dunno or care about the shit, cuz when i spit doom this prick is thru
I'll have the surge in popularity...U'll have surgeon ATTEMPT to fix ur wounds
Good little opener
& whoever set the battles, thanks.. needed the bye after bags
Cuz I was thinkin 'Just my luck'... then i saw i had to battle this fag
okay jab
Took a min to check ya spits..they were played n' not felt either
fuck fleshin out your concepts more, ur needin skin grafts and stem cell research
Again, decent jab
Its over! your pathetic, gettin such a beat down here dude.. accept it
go die in a fire somewhere.. so i can yell 'Just Blaze' for the producer credit
LOL.. made me laugh, basic and to point
& bitches? thats where we differ smuck.. go cry about ur hideous rut
so while i get my date a day... your data day involves copious amounts of internet smut
Not really feeling this closer


Your shits decent, however, not really liking the single-syllable ending rhymes. Your closer was the weakest as it seems you slacked. You took this with consistent hits (aside from last bar).

Vote: Utmost

[Flow]

Instrumental

Vs

Data day and just blaze (barely)

Better attempts by just but utmost edged it with half more quotes

Vote utmost

[Sharp]

Eyes on the prize? You might as well die or get left for dead
Winning this tourney's like, being the smartest in special ed
tru tru... not a great punch but real shit
I'm a ghost writer cuz I flow tighter & my verses sell
Congrats on Ok concepts & the fact you're too stupid to word it well
just a statment... this sorta shit could be flipped for a much better effect
You the best? Fuck that, just rap's back to smack the wackest fella'
His style's instrumental to his talents, & he's been rapping acapella
not bad, do more shit like this
They don't know me & know you less, you got wack puns & don't flow too fresh
Couldn't have a dope set up if ya robbed the dealer that sold you meth
anything dope related is done to hell
No respect to wack bitches with no names, I'm so flame & fucking ether
Couldn't give him no personals, those desperate bitches wouldn't fuck him either
cool idea, coulda been done hotter but cool



Dunno or care about the shit, cuz when i spit doom this prick is thru
I'll have the surge in popularity...U'll have surgeon ATTEMPT to fix ur wounds
surgeon/surge in is cool but coulda been done hotter
& whoever set the battles, thanks.. needed the bye after bags
Cuz I was thinkin 'Just my luck'... then i saw i had to battle this fag
cool nameflip, not done too well tho
Took a min to check ya spits..they were played n' not felt either
fuck fleshin out your concepts more, ur needin skin grafts and stem cell research
solid
Its over! your pathetic, gettin such a beat down here dude.. accept it
go die in a fire somewhere.. so i can yell 'Just Blaze' for the producer credit
ok
& bitches? thats where we differ smuck.. go cry about ur hideous rut
so while i get my date a day... your data day involves copious amounts of internet smut
smh @ daytuh.... i'll allow it for art but this was another okay idea that had the same delivery as your opener, coulda been cooler if one of them had some switched up action. still alright


what just rap did right was pretty good, but utmost was more consistent and powerful overall. battle of the round contender, good shit dudes

v/utmost