WK2 : Cormier(0-0) vs. Adonis(0-0) - Adonis wins NS

[timeless]

Verses will be due Thursday Oct. 9th at 11:59 p.m. Western / 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK. There are no Extensions. No Exceptions.

Verses must be a minimum of 10 Lines and maximum of 48 Lines or 650 words unless agreed upon by both competitors.

Votes will be due Sundays at 11:59 p.m. Western / 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK .

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Goodluck Adonis Cormier

Topic - "Life has become immeasurably better since I have been forced to stop taking it seriously."

[Adonis]

Class is in session

[Cormier]

Yooooooooo

[Adonis]

Cormier due tonight bro. I'll bang it out at some point before due date.

[Adonis]

Just wrote a complete verse and deleted it. Will never write on phone again. I'm out

[theMuzzl3]

Just wrote a complete verse and deleted it. Will never write on phone again. I'm out

rewrite it better plx. I wanted to read.

[Adonis]

Just in case you don't show

Righteous souls. Steel sharpening steel.
A wit willing to clash will amass the surreal
Learn to capture minds with a quill
Leading them past the pine fields
Deep into the glades across a bridge creaking away
Down into the thickets where mosquitoes can graze
The mossy mush croaks as toads are sloshing about.
Heavy mist shrouds your arrival in doubt.
But this castle is written art using word
Behold, the valiant moat shimmering diamonds
The reflection sparkling from a draw bridge enlivened

Now imagine a thought you can see...
I may have lost, but if you thought that I cared
Well... How thoughtless of me.





castles magnificence