Round 3: Atomic vs. Flo Real {Atomic wins}

[Meth]

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The Swag & Flow

This round is a Swag & Flow battle and will be the 3rd round of the Elements.



you know the rules to battling/topicals/snf we shouldnt have to explain them to you



lines min-10
line max-16

VERSES ARE DUE Tuesday THE 13thTH

goodluck to both participants



Atomic Flo Real

[AtomicUrBoiLOL]

i can't wait to swag, but on the other hand, flow.

good luck bitch asssssss

[Flow]

Aiyyo,
I'm stood on the graves of the past six "sick" cats who thought they was raw,
Listen, im picking off the bitchmade competition in hoards like this was gears of war.
on top of this text game, im stood on one hundred hunger games scripts,
Cus who else could get away with back to back insane standing game flips?
I'm precise, quick, leavin atomic fullaclips like xerxes did to king leonidas,
i can smash my fist between your eyelids an snatch the colour from your iris.
I got a Millie digits, got skylar grey, em and doctor dre on speed dial fam...
while your contact list consists of mum, dad, sis, my phone, home and nan.
Man, I never take a call cus im a giver, never ever been known to receive.
Im GTA the way i fuck a bitch, steal her car, cash, dignity, kill her and leave.
Making waves when im seething, the heat im breathing is leavin Stephen Hawkin standing.
While your making less waves then the American flag.. after the moon landing.
Atomic I can't stand him - so he better step off before he gets hurt
an i step off my foot in his trap so when he traps off... I'm stompin on words
I am a beast, killing these mcs like wolverine, my body's hard as steel.
atomic dropped bombs an I dont even feel, no David and Goliath against flo real!
Bitch your as bent as the sickle ... while im as hard as the hammer.
I already flow real and now showed how flow comes hard with the swagger

[AtomicUrBoiLOL]

the swag is effortless lol yo.

my bars hit you faggot fuck, grab ya bitch then smack her up
when the matic bucks if he's still breathin he'll be like thats enough
i'll blast ur guts till ur more dead look at the red dot on ur forehead
but before u notice i'll let the gore spread bullets fly till ur cores LEAD
completed filled with hollow tips ur bitch would blow for a waffle bitch
i'll starve the trick keep her in my basement, grab the key & lock the shit
plus i push keys, you push carts, drama w/ me is nothing u would start
got the strength of a god when my lines drop u'll see lightening bolts & it should spark
i've got heavy artillery this faggot would be dead almost instantly
i'll send in the infantry, kill ur whole family,
...minus ur wife.. she looks better w/ misery.
ur no fucking friend of me, bullets are what i've fucking got a lot of.
ur an imposter i'll make this gay faggot sing w/o the opera
beat this fucker this man is depraved i'll just hand him his grave & damage his frame,
HE'LL BE YELLING IT'S NOT FAIR IT'S INSANE, I SUGGEST U DON'T OPEN THIS ANIMALS CAGE.

SPLASH

[Cashius]

Flo-

Would've like to see multiples with more syllables. Concepts weren't great but you did show some signs of swag. Wording was off tho...like when you used trap twice in the same line.


Atomic-

Your multis and flow were better than Flo's. Content wise there wasn't anything that stood out. There wasn't much imagery or wordplay or anything like that.

Content wise I'd prolly edge it to Flo but Atomic had a cleaner written verse with the multis and flow. So he gets it

Atomic.

[Meth]

Atomic just had way better flow.

Real was kind of iffy and pretty choppy