Defiant vs. Packed Graves [Packed Graves Wins]

[BROKE LESNAR]

Rebuttal Option

▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

Due Monday 12am PST

[Packed Graves]

Sup old dude, going one.

Trying to use old names plays or bad wording?

[Packed Graves]

brain damaging hits, one hook i bet you'll do a backspin
as these fist leave you disabled, bitch- Uh Oh might gain sexual attraction

[Defiant]

im gonna need an ext like an hour at most just gotta do someovertime and this phone fucked my bar before

[Packed Graves]

Go for it.

[Defiant]

Beating big headed faggots like u, ain't much else I adore or rather
So ull only see unmarked graves, when a pregnant bitch finds out your the father

[BROKE LESNAR]

I thought PG took this easily before Defiant posted. He had a solid bar with a relevent concept and witticism. Defiant actually fought for this and stepped his game up. Now, the obv problem with the bar would be "rather/father" lmao. BUT, I know Defiant is either european or australian so I have to take his pronunciation into account. Now I'm unaware of anybody anywhere pronouncing rather like father, but I watched Snatch before and brad pitt was a gypsie who pronounced dog as dag so I won't totally dismiss the bar for that.

v-PG

[Packed Graves]

1-0

[Packed Graves]

This is a fucking joke.

[El Muffin]

Yea I got pg here

Rather n father dnt rhyme at all to me

I understand you have accent but id love to hear how u pronounce either wrd coz im not seeing it

Pg I thought my uhoh line was simplrr but better but urs was enough to win

V. Pg

[Tic]

PG got this. Defiant had the creativity factor despite unmarked graves being used, but father and rather don't rhyme where I'm from. PG worded his weirdly, but I liked the idea of the punch.

PG

[Destroyer]

rather/father?

vote pg

[Kin]

Pg... nice wordin...pretty solid

Def...rhyme itself didnt work for me...punch was ehh


Vote

Pg

[theMuzzl3]

PG first line was dope. The second part of the second line was a bit of a lack of a punch IMO.

Defiant's post was evil. The first line didn't really form a sentence if rather was used as an adverb.


I'm gonna vote against the norm here, and say Defiant's lines were more offensive and attacking. Voting more on content, rather than structure... this time.

/v Defiant