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BROKE LESNAR
10-08-2014, 09:26 AM
Rebuttal Option

▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

Due Monday 12am PST (Tuesday 12am PST if necessary)

Tic
10-08-2014, 12:04 PM
No rebuttal, in.

Clayray
10-12-2014, 12:41 PM
Checkmate. GL

Clayray
10-13-2014, 06:48 PM
Grip the can-deese sweet thangs'll have u leakin cherry red, you'll die tonight
Last time ya fatass seen beef was Mike n Ike

Tic
10-13-2014, 09:49 PM
I dislike the kid, so he'll be mad when he's soon to discover
Cuz I'll act as Stepdad & Fuck his life up worse than I do to his mother

El Muffin
10-13-2014, 09:58 PM
I dont get steps

Last time u seen beef was mike n ike?

Lol tics made me chuckle a lil

V/tic

Packed Graves
10-13-2014, 10:50 PM
Shitty set up with an odd punch vs clean nameplay, smooth finish.

Vote tic

Red Soldier
10-13-2014, 11:11 PM
Tic had a way better punch.

V/Tic Tac

Blanco Bishop
10-14-2014, 08:53 AM
Didn't the beef play. Equivalent to cum play.
Good try tho.
Tic was smooth. Not very complex but didn't need tio b.

V tic

BROKE LESNAR
10-14-2014, 10:58 AM
Tic's was structured much better than Step's. His wording, np, and impact were all organized in a manner Step wasn't necessarily able to match. Step, my advice would be to reevaluate your choice of wp i.e. can-deeese and its positioning. Also, you had a solid lead-in to your closer, but the payoff was tame and didn't do the creativity of your setup any justice.

v-Tic

jilti
10-14-2014, 03:20 PM
Step tied in metaphors well. Tic had a funny nameplay
Vote-Tic

Letterman
10-14-2014, 06:39 PM
Step made no sense. Tic came with the basic nameplay but the punch was better than Step's.

v/Tic